[Report This]Date: 07/19/2005 - 01:48 am Title: A soundless calm descends
Hey, great new chapter. I can't imagine that you lose people here cause for me this is one of the best WIPs at the moment. So keep writing and enjoy it and be sure I have a great time reading your story/ies. I'm really looking forward to see where you're going with this story . Take care Manda
[Report This]Date: 07/19/2005 - 01:31 am Title: A soundless calm descends
This might sound strange... I like how all the other characters are in total chaos and Spuffy aren't. You don't see that in a lot of stories. They're pretty comfortable with their relationship and everyone else gets the angst. I love it [cue evil laughter] Though I hope I didn't just jinx things cause I don't know what you have planned. The little family that Spike, Buffy, and Connor have formed is heart warming. I think it's great how Buff's motherly instincts just took over. Will we be seeing any mother-father-daughter moments between Buffy, Dawn, and Spike? Liked the funny with Buffy trying to get Spike off so she could pee/vomit and then freaking over Connor watching them. thanks for the new chapter
[Report This]Date: 07/19/2005 - 01:01 am Title: A soundless calm descends
I enjoyed the chapter. We have a family bed quite often at home and I think of us as a big pile of puppies! Thanks for the update and more please.
[Report This]Date: 07/19/2005 - 12:27 am Title: A soundless calm descends
Great chapter nia.My heart is breaking for cord can't wait telly angel get's what come's to him hoping wesley and the other's can get to her on time before it's to late for her.So what is crazy willow up to now we all know it can't be good.Look's like our little buffy is with child can't wait telly she finds out and give's spike the good news.Love tara and oz so much.Sorry to hear you re injury your arm agine nia hope you get better soon
[Report This]Date: 07/19/2005 - 12:02 am Title: A soundless calm descends
Well, there's nothing negative that's gonna be coming from me. I loved this chapter!! Oz/Tara's relationship is great, and I'm really glad to see that she trusts him so much to stay with him. Cordy's situation is horrifying. I feel soo sorry for Queen C, and I hope that Wes is able to rescue her in time. Oh, Willow's really getting into the whole revenge thing now, and it's scaring me even more for the things she's capable of doing. I also see some foreshadowing of her evilness, and I'm getting really freaked for Giles. Can I just say that Spuffy is yummy?!!! They just sizzle regardless of what they're doing. I'm finding that Buffy's tummy probs are very interesting...could be she preggers for real this time? Can't wait to find out!!! Wonderful story, and there's no way you're gonna be losing me as a reader...I'm too hooked and in love with this story to stop reading it before it's done.
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2005 - 11:24 pm Title: A soundless calm descends
This is honestly one of the best, if not the best stories I have read since the show ended and the dawn of the great Isabelle (haha). You are doing a fantastic job and i can't think of any complaints or things that even erked me a little. The characters are true to the show, and your plot and developement is amazing. I can feel the love when you write this, and please dont dont stop. Keep up the amazzing work and dont let anyone tell you different =)
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2005 - 11:07 pm Title: A soundless calm descends
I really like this story and avidly read every line as soon as you post. I think that examining the evolving relationships is interesting and I'm glad youa re ataking some time to explore them.. Too bad about Cordy, but I understand the dramatic value that this snatching and torture can have for the overall story. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2005 - 10:29 pm Title: A soundless calm descends
Who the hell is talking smack about you girl? Let me at those wankers! STILL love your story and am constantly haunting this place for your next update and YAY for the spuffy loving and Buffy preggers? Awww...how sweet is that? The only comment (request?) is that you give Angelus a really horrible, viciously horrible ending with lots of torture and mayhem because, well, turnbout is fair play.
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2005 - 10:19 pm Title: A soundless calm descends
Not sure why you're nervous about this chapter; I loved it. I like the way you write Spike and Buffy; it's a very believable relationship. Maybe not the only way to look at them; but certainly a legitimate way. And can I speculate as to why Buffy's stomach is upset in the morning? Hee! I think the relationship they've also established with Connor is interesting and believable too. I also love the Oz/Tara parts. I'm an old-time Oz fan, but I think this is the first Oz/Tara I've read. Not a relationship I'd have expected, but you make it work. I'm also enjoying the Evil!Willow section-- wonder what she's planning? I doubt it's anything good! And poor Cordy! I hope our heroes go rescue her soon!
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2005 - 10:19 pm Title: A soundless calm descends
I can't believe you're losing anyone! The story is still fascinating and enthralling...even more so now with the hints about Buffy, the no doubt spell Willow is considering, Angel and his torturing of Cordy, Oz and Tara, geez the story is so in depth and well written there is no way not to be involved in it. Please ignore the negative reviewers and know that we are still with you.
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2005 - 10:04 pm Title: A soundless calm descends
I love the way this is building, and the way sweetness of the relationship between Buffy and Spike anchors the story. It's hard to write an ensemble piece that also focuses on one romance, but you're doing a great job with it. Thank you, again!
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2005 - 09:57 pm Title: A soundless calm descends
Not losing a reader here. Screw the bad reviews. I think those shiny new awards kinda speak for how truly excellent this fic is *wink nudge* It amazes me sometimes how people think they can tell a writer how their tale should go. Really quite funny actually. Hope you don't let it discourage you, coz I'm greedy for more, providing your poor arm lets you write Hugz!
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2005 - 09:46 pm Title: A soundless calm descends
Nia, wonderful chapter, as always. Finally, Buffy says the words!!!! And poor Cordy, what Angelus has put her through....I hope they find her soon. And what's Willow up to now?
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2005 - 09:31 pm Title: A soundless calm descends
don't stop! I constantly check every site I visit looking for "Origins" The story is bloody brilliant. I can't wait for more updates, I'm only disappointed that we get one chapter at a time and not 4 or 5. If anyone else does not like it, you could just email the story to me and I would love it. Also, I do not understand people flaming an author or story. Writing is not easy, at least for some people. And the ones who flame probably can not write at all. Keep up the good work and update, update, update!
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2005 - 09:30 pm Title: A soundless calm descends
Fabulous update. I love this story and look forward to updates.
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2005 - 09:21 pm Title: A soundless calm descends
I still love this fic, although I may not have been reviewing... I tend to fade out after a while. It's horrible what's happening to Cordelia... I kinda just want the poor girl to die and have it over with. How is she ever going to get over this?
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2005 - 09:18 pm Title: A soundless calm descends
Lots of emotions rolling around on this one Nia. Certainly a calm before the next storm hits. YIKES Cordy, I truly hope they save her soon,before she loses her mind totally. Tara taking care of Oz was so Tara and giving him her trust like that. Willow, oh for all the gods Willow get a freakn grip. Buffy having morning sickness already and well they are not thinking of the obvious Yet *winks*. The interaction between them is wonderful, especially where Connor is concerned. They are going to make such great parents. FINALLY too, she said "love you" holy shit and shineola...bout damn time. Sheesh that girl need a swift kick in that department,but I know she was being guarded. Excellent chapter in the eye of the storm, where it is calm and things seem to be ok,but alas the clouds move and things start happen'n.
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2005 - 09:05 pm Title: A soundless calm descends
You can tell any nay-sayers that they're insane. Yup. T-totally bonkers is there's something they don't like about the delightfullness that is this fic. Go ahead and quote me on that if you want. I don't mind. Now, for the reviewing. Do I really gotta tell ya for the millionth time how much I love this story? Just make up something really cool and adoring and pretend I said it. So glad someone's noticed the missing Cordy. I feel so bad for her. Plus, it's giving me the wiggins just thinking of all the horrible things she's going thru. Love the smut! Funny and naughty at the same time. Think I'm heading for a cold shower now.
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2005 - 09:00 pm Title: A soundless calm descends
Still following every chapter, and I will continue to do so. Look forward to the next update. No problems here.
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2005 - 08:47 pm Title: A soundless calm descends
I love it! THe story is wonderfully written, beautiful narratives & excellent characteriations. Always happy to see your updates:)
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2005 - 08:44 pm Title: A soundless calm descends
One: poor Cordy! I really hope they find her! =( Two: awww sweet Spuffyness Three: I know this was the big moment with her saying I love you, but I could have sworn she said it once a bunch of chapters ago but no one seemed to notice. Now it's going to bother me all night. Four: not losing interest!! =)
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2005 - 08:43 pm Title: A soundless calm descends
I love the new chapter. Please continue, this is a great story!! Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2005 - 08:43 pm Title: A soundless calm descends
Eh, if you're losing them, then they're fickle readers anyway. Keep the story going in whatever direction you see fit! You are the author. You are the spinner of tales. We, your humble readers, are just along for the ride. And it's a pretty ride, with lots of pretty scenery :-)
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2005 - 08:38 pm Title: A soundless calm descends
It's about time she just came out and said it. Stubborn girl. lol Cordy's really in bad shape, and I have to wonder if they'll get her out in time. Well, not really "in time," because they're already pretty much too late, but before Angelus actually manages to kill her. And Willow, too... Wonder what she's planning. It can't be good. Looking forward to the next update.
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2005 - 08:31 pm Title: A soundless calm descends
Sorry for not reviewing lately. But I assure you that you have me riveted to this story. It's wonderful and I can't wait for more.