[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 - 09:30 pm Title: Relying on hope
oooo poor cordelia...never thought i would say that. acutally made my stomach turn i still love this story
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 - 09:30 pm Title: Relying on hope
A very very good chapter - dark but w/ a sense that the good guys are getting their own back. I like the smallish things that you've woven in, like Dawn's boyfriend not being in the know in spite of all the ruction around him, and Angel not realizing the bot isn't Buffy. And, of course, Buffy taking out poor Cordelia. You're writing in a brave and smart way, and I for one am grateful.
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 - 08:17 pm Title: Relying on hope
good plan for last minute. thank the gods they got to cordi and i so hope she is going to pull thru this. she has friends and tehy all care about her. OMG...who else does angelus have???? gods i hope its not kirsten or someone else we know and love. lvoed loved loved this long chapter....so much going on.
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 - 08:11 pm Title: Relying on hope
I hope there was a reason for having Cordy live... because at this point I think she would have been better off dead.. or turned and staked. Very good writing and the whole damn chapter gave me the willies.
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 - 08:10 pm Title: Relying on hope
Another great chapter. This is one of the best stories out there right now. You have a great imagination and lots of writing talent. Keep it up!
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 - 07:53 pm Title: Relying on hope
Nia that last scene is heartbreaking! I've got chill bumps and tears!
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 - 07:23 pm Title: Relying on hope
An amazing chapter! I love the pacing of this story and the way you have so effectively mixed the action and thequiet parts. Its hard to write the action sequneces and make them convincing and you do agreat job. thanks for all of your hard work and creativity - Looking forward to more. I really hope they are able to help Cordy recover and I'm glad they were able to rescue her. The aftermath with Angelus and Dru should be very interesting - and scary!
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 - 07:21 pm Title: Rescue me
oh gods what is willow doing now. you got me on the edge of my seat. i so hope they get cordi out soon.....
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 - 06:59 pm Title: Relying on hope
wow! just when you thought i couldn't get any more intense...bam.
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 - 06:51 pm Title: Relying on hope
It's an amazing story. My favourite parts are the Dawn / Buffy / Spike family moments. I'm also eagerly awaiting Xander choking on the happy news.
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 - 06:46 pm Title: Relying on hope
still here. still entranced with the story. keep it up.
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 - 06:27 pm Title: Relying on hope
OH MY GOD. That was the most brutal, fasinating chapter I have read. I could picture everything in my mind's eye. I was almost breathless when I got to the end. What about Spike? Dru? Where is Angel. I am so ready for more. I have taken the time to re-read the entire series and I don't know if anyone has mentioned this, but in re-reading it I really took the time to read your quotes that you put in the beginning of each chapter. All are so appropriate for each chapter. Well Done!!!!
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 - 06:16 pm Title: Relying on hope
Great chapter great update. very realistic with the emotions. Please continue to update soon and often.
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 - 06:04 pm Title: Relying on hope
Oh thank god that Cordy is still alive, if you can call it that. I like the Angel-is-too-dense-to-know-Buffy-is-a-bot bits and pieces. Had me laughing. Enjoyable (the dark subject matter notwithstanding) and waiting for more.
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 - 05:58 pm Title: Relying on hope
I don't think I can form words just now for how amazing this chapter was, Sweetie. ***gulps in huge amaounts of air*** Just...WOW!!!
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 - 05:41 pm Title: Relying on hope
poor cordelia, it looks like she will become the second drusilla(damaged head). I hope spike knows what he's doing, cus instead of playing around with drusilla he should have just dusted that bitch. seeya
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 - 05:32 pm Title: Relying on hope
So they want to get Cordy out - that evening.. but Buffy is so tired. Yet - she's strong. Awe - that scene was so cute: â??Only have to ask kitten.â??... Oh - Spike has a plan of his own.. I hope it will work. Oh - and Anya it very thoughtful (linen) * * * Oh my ... Cordelia will have a long way to go to get over it. I don't think she'll forget it - ever. No need to worry because of the chapter - loved it!
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 - 05:25 pm Title: Relying on hope
Yeah! Poor Cordy is finally rescued!! Oh, Poor Cordy!!
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 - 05:17 pm Title: Relying on hope
OMG! That was awesome. I can't wait to see what happens next. More soon please.
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 - 05:09 pm Title: Relying on hope
loved it. can't wait for more. great job as always. post soon.
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 - 04:42 pm Title: Relying on hope
Well, Cordy's been physically rescued, but it looks like she's pretty far gone...Hope they can get her some degree of help. And I have to wonder what her visions meant, too. Liked the little part with Dawn, Buffy, and Spike...Spike telling her to get chicken wings. lol And the thought of Dru trying to thrall the bot just cracked me up.
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 - 12:17 am Title: Rescue me
God...poor Cordy! Wow! I could absolutely feel her panic...my blood absolutely ran cold! They have to get there to save her! And Spike better not get himself killed or Buffy will REALLY be pissed. :) Amazing chapters as always! Sorry I missed your birthday! Happy belated!
[Report This]Date: 08/03/2005 - 11:42 am Title: Rescue me
Well I have gone back and reread the whole series from the start. Its even better than i remember which shouldnt' be that surprising :) One thing i'm curious about is teh whole buffy being sick thing - earlier in chapter 24 spike smelt somethign that made him really excited and then buffy talks about there being a surprise for xmas. My assumptions are that she is pregnant maybe those are incorrect. but it just seems weird that in chapter 26 buffy starts talking about some weird bug she might have caught. hmm.. slightly confused. oh well :) also i wish we could find otu the back story to kirsten - is she one of the deccendents of the previous potential slayers childen, other weird monk experiments, oh! whats giong on with Dawn? on the second read through i noticed that you had Dawn jumping down a flight of stairs - is she giogn to have some hidden strengths due to her parentage? Throughout the entire story i seriously wanted to hurt Xander - i ca'nt wait till anya and him break up!! i'm nervous about williow because i completely forgot that the huntsman was going to hang around until the final betrayel - that definately doesn't sound good... This story is soo awesome. Thank you for taking the time to write it and share it with us. I apprecaite it!! i ca'nt wait for the next chapter so hopefuly we can figure out and rescue cordy...i'm exicted because there are so many loose ends so in my mind that means there are many more chapters coming, woohoo!!!!