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Reviewer: Gail Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 11:14 pm Title: The promise of daylight

Wonderful chapter -- as was the last one. All the interactions within the household are skillfully woven. I'm terrified of what Willow might be planning. Interesting insertion of Lawson. As always, I'm anticipating what comes next.

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 11:10 pm Title: The promise of daylight

Great update!!! I'm so glad that now Dawn knows about Buffy's situation.....that scene was really cute and totally in-canon. Very happy that Dawn told Tara about Spike and Buffy being her real parents, and Tara accepting it all with happiness. Was surprised with the arrival of Lawson. He's a character that's hardly used, so your intro of him is fab. Can't wait to see how you're going to use him in the story. Overall, great update, and I really can't wait for more!!!!

Reviewer: Jade2099 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 11:05 pm Title: The promise of daylight

This was a nice chapter - a calm before the storm. You're really gearing up for something I can tell! I can't tell you how much I enjoy this story and how much I look forward to your updates. You are a very talented writer and will continue to read your work long after this story is done.

Reviewer: braat44 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 10:42 pm Title: The promise of daylight

That was lovely, but so is everything you write. This is definitely one of my favorite stories. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: sheila Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 10:30 pm Title: The promise of daylight

Aww can't wait till buffy tells spike about there little one and i just know he will be so happy.But she better hurry before dawn tells him first can't wait for the big moment..So i wonder what will be angel next evil plane cause we know his not done yet.Let's hope they can have a great christmas without evil angel to destroy it.Great chapter agine nia

Reviewer: Karyn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 10:29 pm Title: The promise of daylight

as always great chapter...but i swear one more character and my head will explode from the plot lines...lol....no realy wonderful writing

Reviewer: javelina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 09:55 pm Title: The promise of daylight

I like! Thank you, as always.

Reviewer: Jeni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 09:32 pm Title: The promise of daylight

Nia--still teasing me with Buffy's "news" please put me out of my misery soon! LOL!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 09:14 pm Title: The promise of daylight

great chapter. loved it sooo much. post soon loved it.

Reviewer: Addie Logan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 08:07 pm Title: The promise of daylight

I like the mix of happy holiday stuff going on in the Summers' house with the more foreboding aspects of the new vamp arrival and Willow's sneaky badness. Good scene with Dawn and Buffy, and Buffy planning how to tell him is cute. She obviously wants it to be a special moment. And Dawn told Tara...does this mean more people will be finding out soon?

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 08:07 pm Title: The promise of daylight

Interesting concept with the 9 months after the thy will be done spell and Dawns appearance. This is going great. Looking forward to the next installment.

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 07:31 pm Title: The promise of daylight

Great chapter as always. I can't wait to see what Spike's reaction to the big news will be. I also want to see how you field the idea that he hasn't picked up on this. I would have thought he would have been able to tell she was pregnant, at least before Dawn did.

Reviewer: MJ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 07:24 pm Title: The promise of daylight

Loved it. Hope you update soon. :)

Reviewer: Shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 06:50 pm Title: The promise of daylight

I am one of those that only reviews after 2 or 3 chapters, but I read all and love them all. Poor Cordy, doesn't look too good for her. I can't imagine what Willow is up to now. Seeing Lawson was a big surprise. So many twists and turns, yet they will all make sense. Love this story.

Reviewer: slinkyPK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 06:47 pm Title: The promise of daylight

An excellent update, as always. Does my gushing over it everytime we're on YM ring anything? Now, for the real review... Willow's now added B&E to her list of recent trangressions--why am I not surprised at that? (Bad Willow!) Can't we just feed her to Angelus before she does something bad and heartbreaking to Buffty and Spike? Who's the girl they found with Cordy at the mansion? It's driving me crazy not knowing. Secrets being exposed everywhere. Tara knows Dawn's parentage. Dawn knows about the imminent arrival of a younger sibling. We know for fact that it was Lawson in the shadows. Xander knows there's something he doesn't know. Much with the knowledge having. More, please?

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 06:45 pm Title: The promise of daylight

This just keeps getting better and better. I am so glad you are still working on this. Update soon.

Reviewer: Talen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 06:43 pm Title: The promise of daylight

Love it!!!!!! I cant't wait for Spike's reaction to Buffy's news

Reviewer: wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 06:20 pm Title: The promise of daylight

note to self do not read NIa stories and try to talk on the phone..NIa story takes over *laughs*. WOW there was alot going on this chapter. Grrrrr@ Willow for doing something really evil. Ahhhhhhhhh so this new childe of Angle's came to town. Not a good thing. Dawn figuring out what is going on, such a smart girl. And Please Spike knows she is pregers totally. They are mates he feels what she feels and vice versa. I can't wait to see everyone's reactions to this Ohhhhhhhh hurrry and write more because like I can't wait till Christmas *laughs*....Final thought though healing and prayers to those who were effected by the hurricane.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 06:18 pm Title: The promise of daylight

Lovely, quiet chapter. Dawn's back story keeps filling in, and I'm liking the mythology of her origins possibly being. deeper than she thought. Also, giving her the secret of Buffy's "bug" seems to have emotionally anchored Dawn. Willow's robbery is a good plot device, and her use of Jonathan's spell is going to be interesting. I'm looking forward to Buffy's Christmas gift to Spike and his reaction.

Reviewer: Tam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 06:00 pm Title: The promise of daylight

Lawson, huh? Wonder what we can expect from him? Can't wait to see how Buffy tells Spike :D

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 05:54 pm Title: The promise of daylight

enjoying as usual

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 05:43 pm Title: The promise of daylight

Oh, love it love it love it......the addition of Lawson is perfect......I do can't wait to see Spike's face when she gives him a Christmas present that is the best present of all...........more please

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 05:00 am Title: Things of bestial shape

Well I'm sick when I try and read this story there's no text. Noooo. I'll have to go to town and see if I can read it there. No fair, sob.

Reviewer: spikes_niblet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2005 - 09:26 am Title: Ache of heaven

loved this chapter and I am really rooting for cordy.....the use of the claim part was really sweet well I am gonna go read the next chapter!

Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2005 - 07:34 pm Title: Things of bestial shape

I really really want to know what Dawn whispered to Spike! Damn why must we be voyeurs like Xander?? Heehee. I want to see that scene again through Dawn or Spike! *pout*

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