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Reviewer: letitia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2005 - 09:51 am Title: Lambs for the slaughter

I am so in the line for wanting to KILL Willow. I can't believe that Casey is gone. He was such a breathe of fresh air and it is all WILLOW's fault. And I really don't think t hat when this all comes back to the way it should be she will feel any remorse. Wonder what Casey told her. Love how Kristen just showed back up. What is up with her? The hounds?? Faith?? AUGH just so much to wait on but so worth it.

Reviewer: hmm... Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2005 - 08:42 am Title: Lambs for the slaughter

wonderful chapter!! I was so excited to see the story updated :) This chapter was great ~ I can't wait to see what happens when the hounds catch up with the betrayer. If you feel like breaking the story up ~ break it up :) No matter what you do I'm going to continue reading... So good luck with the arm and keep up the fantastic story telling.

Reviewer: MG Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2005 - 03:54 am Title: Lambs for the slaughter

Very good chapter, poor Dawn.

I ca't wait to see Willow being confronted by the Huntsman and see Angelus getting taken down.

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2005 - 03:34 am Title: Lambs for the slaughter

Poor Casey. But he went out bravely and with honor against that coward Angel.His death is not only Angel's fault but Willows for taking away thier knowledge of the danger surrounding them and I hope that you make sure she is made well aware of that fact.


As for baners , I can't do any but there are some peopel on lj that are good at them , The only name I can think of right now is darkwaif .

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2005 - 01:26 am Title: Lambs for the slaughter

Another brilliant update. Poor Casey he was so brave, Willow has a lot to answer for>

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2005 - 12:56 am Title: Lambs for the slaughter

Tears are streaming down my face, so it's kinda hard to write this, but here goes.....poor Casey!!! Oh my, that's one of the most painful death scenes I've ever read. Man, I knew something would happen, and in my naivete, I thought both would survive Angelus. At least Casey showed courage against that monster, yet I can't believe he's gone. Boy howdy, when all's revealed, Willow's gonna pay...big time! Oh please, more soon?

Reviewer: sheila Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2005 - 11:56 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter

Sad But Great Chapter Nia..Love IT Agine And Agine

Reviewer: Gail Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2005 - 10:20 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter

Great chapter with a very exciting and well-written fight. I love that you don't pull any punches as to the the physical brutality and the reality of death, yet, it's still very much a product of the story instead of an end in itself. Well done! (Hope you feel better.)

Reviewer: Jade2099 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2005 - 09:56 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter

Oh man! Please don't let Casey be dead! I actually liked him for standing up to Angelus and protecting Dawn! Makes this all the more heart wrenching!

I know if you continue with this story...I'll keep reading and reviewing. :) I really enjoy your work.

Reviewer: slinkyPK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2005 - 09:42 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter

OMG!!! Oh, poor Casey...poor Dawn...I'm really, really wanting to see both Willow and Angelus slowly tortured to death....Please?

Reviewer: Riahannon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2005 - 08:13 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter

this is such a good story and this chappie was sad (poor Dawn) but absolutely amazing

Reviewer: Jeni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2005 - 08:07 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter

Angel must die now. Willow must have her ass kicked by Tara. Sniveling little selfish bitch. Ok. rant over! Sorry Nia, I'm just ready for non-scooby ass to be kicked! Can't wait until the huntsman gets her. Poor Faith, trying so hard to do the right thing. Update soon, sweetie!

Reviewer: ace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2005 - 07:25 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter

all
willow's
fault

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2005 - 07:16 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter

wow nia....wow. powerful chapter!!! casey is dead but what a fight he put on. warrior spirit that one has. the hounds are hot on the trail now. i don't care if you break it up or not. if you feel you must or need to then do, if not then don't. i will always keep reading this story. hope your arm feels better

Reviewer: me Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2005 - 06:55 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter

another wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2005 - 06:44 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter

Always good to get an update. I feel so terrible for Dawn here. I still don't get Kirsten... seems I must have missed something. I hope Faith gets there soon to lend some kind of aid.

Reviewer: dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2005 - 06:21 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter

I am always happy to see new chapters of this story. Hope your shoulder holds up. Things are getting really good now!

Reviewer: GoofyMama99 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2005 - 06:15 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter

poor dawn. she just barely got someone in her life, and now that dumb ass angel took him from her. and, what's up with the hounds. yeah, i'm kinda lost. but i'm loving the story oh so very much. i really can't wait for more. please, please, please soon.

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2005 - 06:06 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter

Amazing update, I hope you feel better soon. I understand you feel the need to break the story up. I don't care where you break it up as long as you complete it. This is one of my favorites and I eagerly wait for each update.

Brandy

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2005 - 05:31 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter

I feel bad for Casey but this was still a great chapter, as always. Keep up the excellent work.

Reviewer: Shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2005 - 05:30 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter

My god, what a chapter. Poor Casey, though, he put up a good fight till the end. I hope Dawn is going to be okay.
Gotta wonder about the Huntsman, will he get to Willow and the spell be reversed?

Have to say, I would like to see a Book 3. I love this whole Origins concept. Hate to see it end. Would rather see it broken up into Books.
Love it.

Reviewer: wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2005 - 05:27 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter

Gods I can't think straight right now,but I will give you some sugar. THAT was fuckn phenomenal. Willow will pay for her deeds and Angelous shall die at the hand of one of them. That pissy poor excuse for a vampire, killing that boy. The hounds are going to find Willow and make her pay GOOD. I hope they tear her from limb to limb. If it were not for her the teens would not of been out. The would of known that Angelous was there waiting. Fuckn bint Willow. You did a fantastic job with this chapter. So much in it. I will have to read it all again, when my brain and heart does not hurt so badly.

Reviewer: Addie Logan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2005 - 05:11 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter

Ah! Casey died. Someone needs to stake Angel like now. Can I be like magically transported into the story and do it, cause that would be fun... Then I could dance on his dust. Whee! *ahem* Another powerful chapter. Casey's dead, Dawn's hurt, the huntsman is on the move...

Reviewer: Talen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2005 - 05:01 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter

Great chapter! But poor Casey he was so brave teling Angelus a few home truths about himself, and poor Dawnie losing her firs love like that

Reviewer: Anza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2005 - 04:56 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter

Oh you are so evil , cutting off like that. Please keep going... I want to know what happens.

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