With every new chapter I become more and more fan of your work. It's amazing the way you put many different things in movement in a way that they intertwined making a wonderful tapestry of story. Long story short: love it

two year olds think they need to type too and she pushed the buttons. Ughhhhhhhhhh...As I was saying, Dawn having to deal with so much and thinking she is destructive. Gods that is so horrible for her. YEAH Faith has arrived and boy does she have questions. Glad she is there though. Thank the Gods that doc Thomas and Nurse Osborn know their stuff. Loved her 10 year old werewolf comment. Tara is pack. and Oz is getting aroused. Now that is a twist. I hope the huntsman gives the command to let the hounds take their prey. To do what is to be done, to make her pay for what she has done. Great chapter

you write beautifully and even when you think things aren't working in your story they do....you blend and weave so many emotions and plot lines with style and keep true to your characters

“Sweetie, you don’t scare me. I’ve got a ten year old werewolf at home." Damn, I love that line!

Awesome update, Sweets! And it all works perfectly.

Staring down at his crotch for a long minute, Oz wondered idly what was it about him and lesbians. . . . *snort* I love that line. Another great chapter. Beautiful family scene in the hospital room. Very touching. Liked the pace of this chapter, how you managed to blend together several little scenes without it feeling choppy. Nicely done.

It was wonderfully written and everything works just fine I can hardly wait for the next chapter and I hope that your arm is feeling better

I think it works wonderfully. Especially a sedated Dawn calling Spike Daddy. I hope it was a hard struggle to type it because of the emotions it involved not because your arm is still hurting.

I have been catching up on this for the past week. It's an enjoyable mix of schmoop, suspense and violence - all the good things in life!

What an exciting, brutal chapter. The choreography of the fight between Angelus and the teenagers made that scene vivid and frightening. Dawn slipping into shock over Casey's body was also a gripping scene. This chapter was tight and engrossing.

Wow!! I have greatly enjoyed this series since and I get excited every time I see an update. Hopefully more soon. I have my theory on who Kirsten is and I hope that I am right.

Doesn't really matter to me where you break this up - just so long as you don't stop! This is my fav fanfic and I check it everyday for updates - just when I think I have things figured out it gets even more complex - I love it!! Can't wait to find out what gets done with Willow - and what the heck is up with Kirsten?!? She seems to be a combo of Spike and Buffy so...what, did the monks do a trial run before they made Dawnie or am I totally off base? Whatever it is - it is slowly driving me round the bend!!! Keep up the good work! My prayers to you and your bad arm! Hope you feel better!

Oh, I hope Kristen finally makes her presence known to the rest of the family. I'm hanging on your every word!

Oooooh! So sad about Casey. Poor Dawn. :(

Loved this chapter! But, I pretty much love them all. Can't wait for more.