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Reviewer: maryperk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2005 - 06:08 pm Title: Savage and serene in one hour

Great chappy. And of course I think I know who Kirsten is. I've had a theory ever since Dawn mentioned she had to babysit her baby brother William with the pretty blue eyes. LOL.

Hope the shoulder is feeling better.

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2005 - 06:03 pm Title: Savage and serene in one hour

Thanks so much for the update. I can't wait for the spell to be broken. You have so many different plot lines running it is hard to comment on them all. I continue to love this story, feel better and update soon.

Reviewer: spikeakawilliam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2005 - 06:00 pm Title: Savage and serene in one hour

I like it so faar, but are u foreshadowing that Kristen is Spike and Buffy's daughter for the future?

Reviewer: Addie Logan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2005 - 05:41 pm Title: Savage and serene in one hour

Another good chapter. And I just love that Jenner... lol Lots of vamps gathering with Angelus...wonder how that's going to play out. And it's falling into place who Kirsten is, too. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2005 - 05:28 pm Title: Savage and serene in one hour

Dad’s gonna be so pissed when he catches me. Mom would understand though.

Grrrr... this is just so bloody infuriating! No you've just thrown my top theory in the can... 'Dad' can't be the Huntsman. Now who else would have a vested interest in helping out the Slayer and her pals?

*pouts and ponders*

Reviewer: MG Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2005 - 05:26 pm Title: Savage and serene in one hour

Very good chapter. I had kinda guessed the Kirsten angle, but I'll be very interested to read your take on this.

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2005 - 05:05 pm Title: Savage and serene in one hour

Oh my....so little Kristie must be the bun in the oven all baked.......nice chapter want more.......

Reviewer: H Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2005 - 04:59 pm Title: Savage and serene in one hour

Beautiful as aways, but ya know I think we are due for some smut;) It's been ages!

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2005 - 04:47 pm Title: Savage and serene in one hour

Love this story, just waiting for Willow to get her just deserts. The chapter was good and brought the story nicely forward. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Riahannon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2005 - 04:37 pm Title: Grief fades in and out

as usual this was fantastic-don't doubt yourself-it's great-poor Dawnie and now Faith's here(yay-i always liked her)

Reviewer: GoofyMama99 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2005 - 03:13 am Title: Grief fades in and out

yeah, it totally worked. i feel so sorry for dawn. poor baby. i understand as a sister and a mother the need and want to comfort. i really hope the pack gets to willow...and soon. please update soon. please. please. please.

Reviewer: Gail Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2005 - 05:58 pm Title: Grief fades in and out

Story is still great, I am thoroughly enjoying it and wait eagerly for the updates.

Reviewer: Mira Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2005 - 07:25 pm Title: Grief fades in and out

hey tanks for giving me the link to this site so I could read more of ur story!
I liked that u brought Faith in! and I so hope the hell dogs chew Willow up!!

Reviewer: Jade2099 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2005 - 06:11 pm Title: Grief fades in and out

Poor Dawn...that was so heart-breaking to read! It's too bad that Casey had to die - the innocent ones often do. Dawn will one day realize that Casey gave the ultimate gift...his life for hers. Wow...

I'm glad that Faith finally made it to the group. It really shows that she's not this bad Slayer - that she really has a connection to this crew. Even though they're wary of her presence right now...it'll do them wonders to have her back.

Reviewer: blessedkarma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2005 - 02:35 pm Title: Grief fades in and out

wow, see, I came down with strep yesterday and was confined to my room so I started orgions. Well, now, at 3:35 pm I am done with both stories - well at least up to what you have written - and utterly amazed! Amazing story you are weaving here and thanks for making it a little bit easier to be bed ridden! :)

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2005 - 02:04 pm Title: Grief fades in and out

At last Faith is in Sunnydale now. And Kirsten is still there. So her father is a fight instructor? Or maybe something more, huh? When I'm right (or I read here before) her mother fights, too. And both are very good :) *sniff* Poor Dawn so devastated. (And very good written, very emotional.) And I think Wesley will soon find out who Kirsten is. And it seems as if Oz indeed feels something for Tara. Slainte!

Reviewer: buffyratt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2005 - 08:09 pm Title: Grief fades in and out

Thank you so much for more. I check back everyday for more updates, I really love this story.

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2005 - 11:14 am Title: Grief fades in and out

Oh playing catch up....and I must say you are doing a awesome job.........now Faith is in the mix....and I hope Willow is about to get what she deserves.......and I think others would agree the dogs need to be fed. For Casey's death falls on her head, for his blood is all over her........and the bitch should pay.......

Reviewer: letitia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2005 - 10:26 am Title: Grief fades in and out

Okay let me get to the light hearted stuff. I just love Maureen. I think she is a calming force for all of them and the way she handled Dawn for great. The Hunter is on the track of his prey..And Faith finally made it to Sunnydale and got a glimpse of Buffy's room and Connor at the hospital.

Now all I can say right now is that Dawn's anquish just brok my hear. I know that there has been alot of devistation in her lift and most of it was due to the fact that she was the key but to finally have a version of "normal" and having Casey being taken from her had to be a final crushing blow.

But in everything, they all know their roles for each other. Dawn still knows her her parents are. Buffy and Spike are there to protect their little girl while she is in the hospital. Oz and his "wolf" instinct recognizing Tara as one of his own if not his version of mate.

And how about Kristen staying put. Just so much in this chapter and I don't want to run out of space but I just had to let you know this was awesome.

Reviewer: hmm... Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2005 - 09:46 am Title: Grief fades in and out

i think the chapter worked wonderfully!! I hope your shoulder feels ok with all the posting you have been doing :) Not that I'm really complaining about the chapters :)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2005 - 09:34 am Title: Grief fades in and out

That was an exciting chapter and it flowed well given all the activity. Faith's arrival was smoothly choreographed. You did a good job setting everyone in place. Oz' search for answers was a good aside, and I loved his self questioning about his attraction to lesbians. Maureen Osbourne was a bit of calm in the tumultuous hospital scene.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2005 - 04:57 am Title: Grief fades in and out

It works fine with me. It's all very real, if you're worried about inconsistencies or some other such things. I'm glad that some more not-really-secrets have come out. And I Kirstens identity is becoming clearer and clearer, though I've had my suspicions for a while now. I still absolutely love this story. You're a great writer. Who knows, maybe in the future you're gonna publish something? :)

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2005 - 04:46 am Title: Grief fades in and out

Oh yeah it works just fine - and I love the Oz/Tara angle.
There are still so many avenues of possibility with this story - it's a compelling read. Thanks!

Reviewer: Marie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2005 - 04:03 am Title: Grief fades in and out

Oh it works. It was a great chapter. Poor Dawn. Love the Oz/Tara parts.

Reviewer: MG Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2005 - 04:00 am Title: Grief fades in and out

Yep, it worked. The chapter was very good and you can actually feel everyone's confusion. Dawn's grief is almost palpable. Thanks for updatig when you're feeling so poorly.

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