Poor Dawn...that was so heart-breaking to read! It's too bad that Casey had to die - the innocent ones often do. Dawn will one day realize that Casey gave the ultimate gift...his life for hers. Wow...

I'm glad that Faith finally made it to the group. It really shows that she's not this bad Slayer - that she really has a connection to this crew. Even though they're wary of her presence right now...it'll do them wonders to have her back.

At last Faith is in Sunnydale now. And Kirsten is still there. So her father is a fight instructor? Or maybe something more, huh? When I'm right (or I read here before) her mother fights, too. And both are very good :) *sniff* Poor Dawn so devastated. (And very good written, very emotional.) And I think Wesley will soon find out who Kirsten is. And it seems as if Oz indeed feels something for Tara. Slainte!

Oh playing catch up....and I must say you are doing a awesome job.........now Faith is in the mix....and I hope Willow is about to get what she deserves.......and I think others would agree the dogs need to be fed. For Casey's death falls on her head, for his blood is all over her........and the bitch should pay.......

i think the chapter worked wonderfully!! I hope your shoulder feels ok with all the posting you have been doing :) Not that I'm really complaining about the chapters :)

It works fine with me. It's all very real, if you're worried about inconsistencies or some other such things. I'm glad that some more not-really-secrets have come out. And I Kirstens identity is becoming clearer and clearer, though I've had my suspicions for a while now. I still absolutely love this story. You're a great writer. Who knows, maybe in the future you're gonna publish something? :)

Oh it works. It was a great chapter. Poor Dawn. Love the Oz/Tara parts.

Boooya! New chapters! You've made my week! SO loving this! Poor Casey. Oh, well, that's kinda the point of original characters, isn't it? You can kill them off indescriminately and create angst without the homicidal flaming reviews.

Dark Eyed Seer

Oh wow that was brilliant. Can't wait for them to suss out the spell.

This was great and worked perfectly! You've given us the answers we needed from the last chapter, and you introduced Faith to the group in a realistic way. Oh, and the scene w/Dawn telling the truth about Buffy/Spike while sedated....perfection. Wonderful job, and I really can't wait for more.

Poor dawn she is just falling apart cause of crazy willow spell so hope those huntsmen get her fast.Love win she was calling for her daddy spike she so new he was her father and buffy was her mom beautiful moment between buffy and spike win they where holding her in the middle so sad..Me thinks kristine has a big secret that has to do with spike and buffy could they be related to her in some way hmmm the plot thinkens.Look like faith is home and out to get the bad guys go faith...Another great chapter nia very tearfully but great feel better soon

poor dawn, you just ache for her, can just imagine what will happen when the spell is finally broken, *looks for a place to hide*

God Nia--don't doubt that it works--I so want more though. The scene with Buffy/Spike/Dawn brought tears to my eyes. Dawn's grief was tangible and that should tell you that you did your job well. Kirsten is interesting--I have a feeling about her...can't wait to see if I'm right.