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Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2005 - 04:57 pm Title: Our memory is our coherence

Figuring out the starting point for the spell was very important. Now, they really have to find out who.

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Date: 11/22/2005 - 04:50 pm Title: Our memory is our coherence

I just wanted to say that this story is brillant. I eagerly anticipate each new chapter. I am so sorry that you are in pain, if there was anything I could do I would, not just to keep the story coming, but because it sucks when anyone is in pain. Hope things get better soon...and please keep writing.

Reviewer: maryperk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2005 - 04:49 pm Title: Our memory is our coherence

So glad you have had a couple of relatively painfree days. Love the results. The chappys are so long and yet so short at the same time. Great chappy!!!!!

Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2005 - 11:58 pm Title: Savage and serene in one hour

I've never reviewed a story before, but I couldn't stand the idea of this story not continuing for lack of encouragement. I am truly impressed with this tale. The plot is well thought-out and consistent, the characterizations are great, and the writing itself is such a refreshing change from some of what's out there.
Thank you.

Author's Response: Believe me, its not the lack of encouragement at all. I've been so gratifyingly overwhelmed by the response to this story, you have no idea. The problem is the constant pain I've been in since I reinjured my arm. Getting the motivation to write is difficult, finding a way to ease the pain so the muse can come forth is some days, more than I can manage. But I am still writing, even if its a scene a day. . . . . don't worry, this will get finished. I had just hoped for a faster timetable. You are very welcome. And thank you for your kind words and encouragement.

Reviewer: gaillee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2005 - 10:06 am Title: Savage and serene in one hour

I am awe struck. I have spent the last two days reading Origins and Origins - Revelation. I can't think of any fic I've ever loved more. I love how well you've developed the characters...and the plot just flows so evenly and is so engrossing. I am so sorry you have been in so much pain and hope you are doing lots better with your shoulder. I will eagerly be awaiting you next update. Thank you for a wonderful story; I can hardly wait to see Willow's comeupance. Anya and Giles are perfect. Is Cordy going to survive? Who is Kirsten. Ah, so many questions....

Reviewer: Lyns Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2005 - 05:02 am Title: Savage and serene in one hour

phew. it took me basically 48 hours with no breaks but i finally caught up on three whole months of missed updates and can i just say "wow". this story is even mroe fantastic than i could ahve hoped it would turn out to be, love the mating, the pregnancy, id forgotten all about kirsten, but now that she's back i'm all excited again and wondering how long she'll be hanging azround this time. Your plots are just fabulous, your characterisation flawless adn the story amazing beyond words. Love love love it Hope your shoulder stops acting up soon enough, and don't worry about not chucking out updates at the speed of light, work this good is worth waiting for.

Author's Response: 48 hours!! I can't imagine doing that. . . but I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Karyn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2005 - 10:46 pm Title: Savage and serene in one hour

wow! very good.. have a feeling things are getting ready to heat up!...lol

Reviewer: Amy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2005 - 10:19 pm Title: Savage and serene in one hour

These sets of fiction that you have so marvolously penned have got to be the BEST thing I have ever read in the Spuffy genre. I am in total awe of your brilliance as a writer, and I thank you for writing what I only imagined in my dreams is the best written Buffy/Spike romance I have had the pleasure of reading. Thank you! I can't wait for the next chapter!

~ Amy

Reviewer: ComedyofErrors Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2005 - 10:14 am Title: Savage and serene in one hour

Going on strong. Thank you for continuing.

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Date: 11/16/2005 - 09:32 am Title: Savage and serene in one hour

oh yes....what a great chapter....so full of goings on. Anya is soo damn funny!!! i love her. i love that Angelus doesn't listen to Dru....thats better for us!!! hehehe...........cna't wait to see hwat happens next. take care of that arm *hugs*

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Date: 11/16/2005 - 09:02 am Title: Grief fades in and out

oh gods...dawns anguish. gods Niamh you put me right in that room with them. the hounds are waiting........*waits to see what happens* DAwn sobbing for her Daddy breaks my heart. what a scene. so heartbreaking and tender. you are an amazing writer!!!!
yeah, faith has arrived!!!!
take care of that arm and write when you can hun. we would wait lifetimes for you!!!!

Reviewer: konsuela Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2005 - 06:20 am Title: Savage and serene in one hour

Hope your arm will be better soon. I realy hate to wait for another chapter. This is excelent story.

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Date: 11/15/2005 - 10:54 pm Title: Savage and serene in one hour

This story just keeps getting better and better...love the dynamic between all the characters...you've devloped the relationships between everyone so well...I always look forward to more chapies...hope your arm is getting better

Reviewer: FIFI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2005 - 08:42 pm Title: Savage and serene in one hour

REALLY INTERESTING CHAPTER, CANT WAIT FOR THEM TO GET HOME AND SEE WILLOW? WHAT WILL SHE DO AND WHEN WILL GUNN AND FRED APPEAR? I THINK JENNAR IS GOING TO TURN AGAINST ANGLEUS.

THERE ARE SO MANY STRANDS TO THIS STORY AND LIKE MANY READERS WE ARE ENJOYING IMMENSLEY. I HOPE U ARE FEELING BETTER SO THAT U CAN UPDATE SOON. I HOPE THAT DOES NOT SOUND TOO SELFISH. GET WELL SOON

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Date: 11/15/2005 - 08:15 pm Title: Savage and serene in one hour

Scads of Aurelians and everyone still missing their memories? And Willow... And the Huntsman... I'm really looking forward to the reckoning I see coming.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2005 - 05:22 pm Title: Savage and serene in one hour

Kirsten did notice the vamp before anyone else. Maybe she inherited the how to (when I'm right) Love blunt Anya :) And Angelus is jealous of Jenner. Can only be good for Buffy and Spike (and the other).. the remaining (the new) Scoobies. And Dru knows more about everything. Too bad for Angel that he doesn't hear what Dru says. Kirsten.. yep I'm almost sure I'm right. Cute what she does to help :)

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Date: 11/15/2005 - 03:19 pm Title: Savage and serene in one hour

okay, just who is this kirsten girl? i'm guessing she's from the future cuz of what she was thinking about coming back. and that she's buffy and spike's. but other than that, i'm drawing a blank. i can't wait for more. and, i gotta say, it went a lot better with faith and buffy than i thought. and all these vamps. hope everyone is ready for a fight.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2005 - 03:15 pm Title: Grief fades in and out

"Staring down at his crotch for a long minute, Oz wondered idly what was it about him and lesbians. . . ."

that was too, too funny!

Reviewer: ahigh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2005 - 02:11 pm Title: Savage and serene in one hour

The last two chapters were great! It's driving me crazy: who is Kirsten and how is she related to Spike and Buffy? Can't wait to read more. Also, Dawn crying out for her Daddy made me cry! This "little story" is definitely worth the time to read. Hope you feel better.

Reviewer: lisa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2005 - 01:40 pm Title: Savage and serene in one hour

wow..this story just keeps getting better and better. i get so excited when i see an update. i can hardly wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: hmm... Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2005 - 08:25 am Title: Savage and serene in one hour

great chapter!! is it me or Kirsten hinting that she belongs to Spike and Buffy as well? This was a really fantastic chapter - it makes me very nervous to see all the master vamps in Angel's camp. Thanks for the update and I hope your shoulder is doing ok!

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Date: 11/15/2005 - 07:59 am Title: Savage and serene in one hour

I hope that they can at least co-exist with Faith while she is here. They are so going to need her to get through this while Willow's spell is in effect. But Buffy/Spike will always be there for their family no matter of the spell. Just loved the chapter and Anya is a breath of fresh air.

Reviewer: MJ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2005 - 01:30 am Title: Savage and serene in one hour

Loved it!!!

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2005 - 01:23 am Title: Savage and serene in one hour

Wonderful I'm hoping now Faiths there they can start with the stakeage. Angels much to smug with all that back up.

Reviewer: riam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2005 - 01:09 am Title: Savage and serene in one hour

i like, i like. Glad that there's gonna be a vampire that's more of a challenge then angelus. Can't wait for them to have first contact .(jenner,spike)

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