The spell is really falling apart now, and I hope Willow gets her just desserts soon. Dawn's devastation is due to Willow's interference. Buffy may be blaming herself now, but I'm looking forward to the truth being revealed.

Freaking Great!

YES! It's great!! Really. So now they have at least three kids - Dawn, Kirsten and Robbie. I wonder if we will see him sometime. Maybe as a flashback? Since he is a boy, is he more like Spike? Or William, technically, unless he's into punk/goth, too. It would be interesting, but you probably have "back-up" chapters done.
Still, great work. I really love this series.

So Robbie is Connor? Only ecplanation I have, since she says that's her older brother, and Buffy is pregnant with Kirsten now. Unless she's having twins! And Robbie came out first.
Had a vision....could be Cordy, though just as likely to be someone else by that time.
Using the reveal spell is going to show very quickly that Willow is behind this. She shouldn't even be in the house. Buffy and Spike are so going to want her dead for what she's done to Dawn.
Surprised Lawson is being helpful, since he was so incredibly pissed off at Angel in Season 5. I wouldn't think Angel being soulless would matter, since he's still the entity that made Lawson, and the guy can't fully enjoy being a vampire. Penn seemed to be the only fully functional childe Angel ever made.

so Kirsten is also Dawn's sister. Craziness abounds. What repercussions will be wrought by her coming back and saving Dawn? How will life in the future change? Lots of questions, and looking forward to reading more chapters for answers.

'... is it any freaking good?' YES! most certainly. This fic updating is a highlight and something to look forward to. I love what you do with the canon material and how you explore the characters, especially Dawn (who i am usually pretty indifferent to).

Kirsten is interesting too, though as with all mysteries, she is more fun when you don't know what is going on but are left to make up your own ideas. Still the way you are resolving her is pretty much exactly how my imagination had it and thanks for not giving us all the exposition in one big lump. The line in the last chapter where she sees Spike looking at her and thinks 'so busted' was delicious!

As usual, please write more and soon! Yeah, that's right, your fans don't care that you ahve a life they just want more drug please now - sorry about that.

It was good.
I love this story.

The baby's heartbeat shows up at 6 weeks, so how far along is she? I'd figured from the chapter a while ago, in the bathroom when Spike kissed her stomach, that he already knew.

Author's Response: After the spell is broken, certain actions and circumstances will come to light . . . .

Good chapter. Loads of exposition on Kirsten's situation, but I'm curious how she managed to be there at this point. Can't wait for the next chapter, thanks for updating so often.

Fantastic chapter don't know why you were worried it's brilliant.

I did not see that coming at all : / and I loved Spikes reaction to it all I cant wait to see what will be happening next

Mwah ha ha haaaa! I KNEW it! I knew she was there's! I'm loving this by the way... I'm sorry you hurt... please don't stop writing, though... I'm terribly selfish.