Excellent story! Also, technically good. Well done!

great chapter

OH so much more of this great story. I am glad that they were able to get to Dawn in time. I just hope that she realiizes that she has a lot to live for. I also hope that Kristin is okay. It was not her fault. Now what on earth is Dru up to. Love Giles and Anya...I hope that Faith will finally be able to open up about all of her dreams. I just don't know what to say about Willow..... aughhhhhh. Well at least she was part of the Hounds... Great update.

Loving the story as always. Just for the record, in California it's a 72 hour hold for psych emergencies, which this would have been. But no worries, artistic license and all. :-)

and the hounds stalk their prey.......cool. gods i hope dawn wakes up soon. its got to be hard on kirsten to have to deal with all of this. buffy is doing well, getting tru it as best she can. i can just see anya flitting around the shop like that.....LOL too funny. hope johnathan can help to put some pieces together. gotta tell ya, you do a fantastic job of portraying dru. its always a treat to see her. angelus is the stupidest vamp on the planet...can't wait to see him go down. can't tell you how excited i was to see that you had posted. hope you are doing ok. *hugs*

I love the tensions inside Order Aurelius. The coming feud should be quite interesting. Another wonderful update.

Thank the gods those nice paramedics got there in time to help Dawn out. Gods help this poor broken child heal. Anya having issues with Faith is so Anya. Giles trying to reassure her in a fashion she deserves, not like that idiot Xander. Gods I hope Jonathan can shed some light on things and have the spell be broken. Loved the hounds stalking Willow and she is too self righteous to notice. Shall be quite the battle to see who gets to Willow first the hounds or Angel. Dru giving out so much information and if they would just pay attention they would see what she is saying. You write such a fantastic Dru. Ahhh now Jenner and Lawson having a talk. Something is going to give here soon and it's going to be big. Great chapter, thanks for posting.

This is so sad, I just love it. I'm also intrigued about the new vampires that you are throwing into the mix. Good chapter and I can't wait to read the next one

Oh wow, that was wonderful. I've still got tears running down my cheeks from it. Man, so many secrets, and the one I'm really waiting for is for everyone to find out what Willow did. Hmm.....and might Jenner switch sides, too? This is going soooo great, and I really can't wait for another!!!

I guess now i know who Kristen's brother is. I love the glimpses of their future. Will you ever write the future story? The moments that led to Kristen making the jump. It would be really interesting to have the full circle.

such a sad but great chapter.....Poor spike and buffy if they lose dawn i don't thiink buffy will ever recover from it with her blaming herself foe what happened to dawn and spike trying to be the strong one to hold his family together so sad and kristina she is so her daddy little girl i hope dawn can pull through this with the love from her parents and little sister..Look's like willow will finally get what's coming to her and it couldn't happened to a more evil person like her.Great chapter nia..Get well soon

Great chapter.

Can't wait for the hounds to get Willow. She infuriates me to no end. She hasn't even bothered to find out what's changed since she cast the spell. So selfish and stupid. It's her fault Angelus was able to get to Dawn and her boyfriend.