Date: 03/09/2005 - 02:03 pm Title: Judgments
wow that was really great. i hope that buffy will be ok and that parker will not do anything to badly to her but i'm highly doubting that. i've heard of situations like this before and your doing a great job portraying all the emoitions and the story beatuifully. can't wait for more update again soon.
Date: 03/09/2005 - 01:06 pm Title: Judgments
I'm sensing a angst-ridden story here... VERY well written though. I like that you are using parker (his name doesn't deserve to be used with a capital) as the bad guy in here. Good choice. I am really excited to see how this whole story plays out!
Date: 03/09/2005 - 11:18 am Title: Judgments
I only read the summary and that got me uber-hyped about this story so great job there. Also this is a new kind of fic that I haven't seen before and can't wait for it to unfold. It had the balance of dialogue and description and the writing made me feel I was in the story instead of just reading it. Great job.
Date: 03/09/2005 - 11:02 am Title: Judgments
I like the part where you showed Buffy's emotions - nobody know because they're not in her situation. If you can, I think it would help to go into this further. I think people understand that it would be hard to leave if you're married or have kids, the financial and legal attachments in addition to the fear. But Buffy is in college and has no real attachments to him, or so it seems. So, why can't she leave him?
Date: 03/09/2005 - 11:00 am Title: Judgments
aww poor buffy. hope spike will be able to talk to her soon n then beat parker up. hee hee. great job.
Date: 03/09/2005 - 10:29 am Title: Judgments
How sad, sadly familiar that is. You've caught the 'psyche' of an abused woman (or lover, male or female) so well. Sigh... hope Buffy and Spike can get it together, soon. Luv, Spuf
Date: 03/09/2005 - 10:06 am Title: Judgments
really good more more please
Date: 03/09/2005 - 10:04 am Title: Judgments
Yay, you updated! This was another great chapter. Can something really bad happen to Parker? Pretty please=)
Date: 03/09/2005 - 03:35 am Title: Getting to Know You
I like this!! hope to see more of it, you've got such a way with words
Date: 03/08/2005 - 09:22 pm Title: Getting to Know You
Hey Ashlee, love the new story. I imagine it's hard to write Buffy as a victim, when we know her as a superhero. Can't wait to see where this is going. Update soon
Date: 03/08/2005 - 09:08 pm Title: Getting to Know You
Glad you're posting the story here. Very good start.
Date: 03/08/2005 - 07:40 pm Title: Getting to Know You
that was a great chapter i loved it. i hope spike kicks parkers ass so that he won't hurt buffy anymore. i'm hooked all ready and it's only the first chapter. can't wait for more updae again soon.
Date: 03/08/2005 - 07:15 pm Title: Getting to Know You
Sounds like another great story is comin up, cant wait to see what else u have for this.
Date: 03/08/2005 - 05:38 pm Title: Getting to Know You
definitely good so far
Date: 03/08/2005 - 04:02 pm Title: Getting to Know You
So glad you posted over here. I can tell this is going be great. Loved how gentle and playful Spike was with Buffy, getting her to laugh and smile. I get the feeling that those little moments of joy have been limited thanks to Parker. I'm curious though as to what prompted Willow to go specifically to Spike for help. Was it because of his major or was it because she knew how he felt about her friend? Or maybe a combo of both?
Date: 03/08/2005 - 11:18 am Title: Getting to Know You
sounds very good, please update soon!!!
Date: 03/08/2005 - 10:04 am Title: Getting to Know You
Very interesting. You're going to be delving in to some seriously dark territory--I can't wait to read on :)
Date: 03/08/2005 - 09:30 am Title: Getting to Know You
Very happy to see that you've started a new story! I'm really liking where this is heading, and I can't wait to read more of what you're going to write. Very nice! Update soon, mmkay? :)
Date: 03/08/2005 - 08:57 am Title: Getting to Know You
Sounds like you have a winner here. More please!
Date: 03/08/2005 - 06:41 am Title: Getting to Know You
Oh my gosh! I was so happy to see that you'd started a new fic! But it's so sad! (at least s far). I can't wait for Buffy t dump Parker so that the Spuffyness can begin! Please update soon!
Date: 03/08/2005 - 05:39 am Title: Getting to Know You
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeah! Get hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiim Spike! WOO WOO! What's your LJ name?? I must friend ya! If you'll allow me to that is. :D Great start to this story by the by. Make Spike beat his ass! YEAH!! HOLLA! :P
Author's Response: Hey- LJ name is ashlee_999 and I have no problem with you friending me. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 03/08/2005 - 04:46 am Title: Getting to Know You
Yay a new Ashlee story! So excited about it. What a great start. Can't wait to see what happenes. =)
Date: 03/08/2005 - 03:41 am Title: Getting to Know You
Hi, i think it's a great start so update quickly...please
Date: 03/08/2005 - 12:02 am Title: Getting to Know You
Parker, that bastard. One can always hope that Spike can save her. A wonderful start.
Date: 03/07/2005 - 11:24 pm Title: Getting to Know You
Great start! The interaction between Buffy and Spike was really natural. I also like the bits we saw of Willow and Spike's friendship.
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