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Reviewer: HollyDB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 04:33 pm Title: 24

He’d thought he’d tame her—and he had to a degree. But the real slave in this relationship was him.

Now, where have I heard THAT before? ^_~

Just wanted to check out the buzz on the smuttastic Rarmony, and see if Sara had replied to my comment yesterday (snerk). Finish up, already, so I can read it! :P

Reviewer: cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 03:59 pm Title: 23

sara, the entire story has been a parody of epic proportions, and you are hung up on a single chapter's occurrences? i have yet to find a character in this story written even remotely near canon, but you find riley ooc. dude, lighten up! and please stop reading, because you are obviously clueless and don't need to review any more chapters...

a fruit-loop of a paring, but shallow riley and airhead harmony deserve each other. harmony needs someone to appreciate her boobies.

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 11:41 am Title: 24

Yikes! What a cliffhanger-- you are really evil if you don't update *very* soon !!

Reviewer: slinkyPK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 09:59 am Title: 24

Big mistake, Riley! If the Slayer goes nuts over someone trying to hurt her boyfriends, what do you think she's gonna do to someone trying to hurt her mate and child. This is gonna be good!

Reviewer: Isabel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 09:57 am Title: 24

Oh yeah, I forgot to ask... Can you make Lia make Riley's head explode? Please? You'd be fulfilling one of my fantasies lol :D

Reviewer: Isabel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 09:53 am Title: 24

Don't listen to flames, hon. I actually like the Riley/Harmony thing. I think they're perfect for each other. Both dumb as can be lol. I'm a little worried for Lia right now, but with parents like Spike and Buffy, I'm sure she'll be fine and Riley and Harmony will get their asses kicked... HARD lol Or at least, I really hope so. Good job.

Reviewer: slinkyPK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 09:21 am Title: 23

Oh, Holly! I bow before you! There is no way I could have rebutted Sara's argument in so eloquent a manner. I agree. Not that I'm bashing someone for disliking a fic or voicing a complaint about something that has been written. Folks have a right or dislike what they choose. But, seriously! This chapter was a RIOT! I loved it! And, c'mon, Sara was fine with everything up until this? With all the controversy from the beginning of this story, she chose now to bitch? That just shows a complete lack of both intelligence and sense of humor.

But, hey, to each his or her own, right?

Reviewer: Athenewolfe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 09:20 am Title: 23

This story rocks... Harmony and Riley rock... i love this pairing and of course... you rock
*hugs*

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 08:18 am Title: 24

Ok Rarmony did not bother me at all. Especially if they come to a bad ending. HEHE. I love this story and will continue to follow. Sorry to see it ending soon.

Reviewer: ComedyofErrors Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 08:00 am Title: 24

*smacks Riley* I can't wait for the vengeance that approacheth. Nice chapter.

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 07:25 am Title: 24

oh goodness me....... riley should really reconsider waht he's doing...... waiting for more!!

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 06:31 am Title: 24

great chapter

Reviewer: just sue Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 06:03 am Title: 24

Yikes! Someone get a blanket - now! I can't stop laughing at the wickedly hilarious Rarmony! Cruel kidnappers and am so gonna love it when they get their butts kicked! Way to go, sweetie. So longing for next update!

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 04:46 am Title: 24

Somehow I think a delusional soldier and a ditzy vampire kidnapping a baby that when it's upset will let out a head exploding scream can't be good for them.

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 03:39 am Title: 24

Hmm don't see why anybody would be upset with this comedy/parody, I'm having a great time reading it. Normally I like the angst best but this is just so much fun to read and it's just hilarious.

Reviewer: daisy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 01:36 am Title: 24

is riley's head going to explode when he tries to take lia, can't wait for more. soon please. also does it really have to end i love this one.

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 01:27 am Title: 24

Riley deserves castration and in the most painful way. What a jerk, and Harmony's no better... but this is not new news LOL I hope things work out for the blonde duo that we love so much. I can't wait to see what's next:)

Reviewer: HollyDB Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 12:03 am Title: 23

Sara, sweetie, you need to lighten up.

Harmony would NOT turn Riley, at least not at first. Are you kidding me? She is the most inept vampire ever.

And honestly, if you can't understand the hilarity that is Riley/Harmony, you need to stop reading fanfic. It wasn't like Raven had Spike with Harmony, or Buffy with Riley...or any characters that people would care about (on a Spuffy site, at least) with other people, in which case, at this point in the fic, I would understand your protest. Pairing two minor characters together and - GASP - writing about it is hardly grounds to bitch. And definitely not reason to storm off of a fic so close to its finale.

Though, since I haven't seen your name on the review pages, I suppose Raven can afford to lose you as a reader. If you're only going to turn up to complain about something trivial, it's better to leave this territory for the big kids.

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2006 - 11:56 pm Title: 23

Eeee, just thinking of Spike in that baby contraption had me giggling...and then the bumper sticker idea....hehe, that's great!!! Oh man, 'let me be your wild Bronco, baby!' I almost spewed my soda on my computer. That's classic!!! Hehe, loved it all, and I seriously can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2006 - 08:55 pm Title: 23

eww, that was disgusting. i really didn't need to read that. i don't even know how you can write that. riley was way out of character. he wouldn't act like that and definitely not with harmony. she'll probably end up turning him. sorry, that was just gross and disturbing. that is enough to make me quit this story.

Reviewer: ComedyofErrors Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2006 - 05:15 pm Title: 23

Fun patrolling, stupid Riley.

Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2006 - 01:45 pm Title: 23

This story kicks ass. You rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: just sue Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2006 - 01:26 pm Title: 23

What a hoot! You were so right about the Rarmony and am longing to see where you go with it. And the line about getting a 'Baby on Board' sticker for Spike's car - had me in fit of giggles! Nope, you definitely can't write amusing stuff! *snorts*

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2006 - 01:04 pm Title: 23

riley and harmony are a perfect match. great chapter :D

Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2006 - 12:43 pm Title: 13

That was one of the most loving and beautiful chapters I've ever read. Well written :)

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