Date: 02/05/2005 - 06:29 pm Title: 2
Yes, I really enjoyed reading it :-D
Date: 02/05/2005 - 06:20 pm Title: 1
The idea is great! I'm going to the next chapter
Date: 02/05/2005 - 10:51 am Title: 2
So funny, so sexy, so everything ! More please!
Date: 02/05/2005 - 10:39 am Title: 2
Absolutely love the humor of this story. Can't wait for more.
Date: 02/05/2005 - 09:28 am Title: 2
I can't wait for the next chapter. I think that this story rocks so far. Keep writing.
Date: 02/05/2005 - 04:51 am Title: 2
Loving this fic so far...especially the nappy changing bit...
Date: 02/05/2005 - 01:04 am Title: 2
can't wait for them to get spike back!
Date: 02/05/2005 - 12:58 am Title: 1
spectacular! love the idea!
Date: 02/05/2005 - 12:03 am Title: 2
wow,what a great story!!! I'm so glad i stumbled onto this little gem. I'll be keeping an eye on this one, you can be sure!
Date: 02/05/2005 - 12:02 am Title: 2
Wow! Thanks for the speedy update! How about another one for tomorrow, hmmmm? ^.~
Date: 02/04/2005 - 11:36 pm Title: 2
haha spikes smart. poor giles. but spike was right about keepin his lil member in his pants. more guys should be told that. lol great chapter.
Date: 02/04/2005 - 11:13 pm Title: 2
Great start. Lots of humor potential with this one.
Date: 02/04/2005 - 10:27 pm Title: 2
"that oozing sex he called a voice" haha.....love that line. Can't wait for ol' Spikey to change some poopy pants.
Date: 02/04/2005 - 09:44 pm Title: 2
ok, I already reviewed this chapter, but since I needed another laugh, I read this fic again and thus read the reviews. Oh, and I signed in so I wouldn't be the old 'anon" reviewer. TAMMY. Quite honestly, there was no reason for the type of review you just left. Do you KNOW all it can take is one review that hits a writer on a bad day, and they can just say FUCK IT and bail on a fic or writing all together? Or is that what you are looking for? This is not angst, this is a tongue in cheek fic, the girls are SUPPOSED to be annoying. how could Spike be the all knowing guy if they were all calm, cool and collected? So go ahead, be as opinionated as you feel you need to be, But don't expect fic writers to just sit and take it, because believe, as a group? We're getting damn sick of it.
Date: 02/04/2005 - 09:42 pm Title: 2
It really lovely to have a story around that just grabs your attention so well. Awesome job more soon please!!
Date: 02/04/2005 - 09:33 pm Title: 2
LoL, omg! This story is fast becoming my favorite comedic relief. I LOVE how you write season 4. This would fit perfectly into what the BtVS writers gave us. You have a true gift for dialogue, description, and comedic timing. Spike's reaction to Buffy telling him he is going to be singing her to sleep had me laughing out loud! Oh, poor conflicted, hornball Spike. My god, I would pay to see this story on television. Love it!
Date: 02/04/2005 - 09:29 pm Title: 2
Okay, I have to comment about this: “That is so not possible,” Buffy barged right in, her body tensing with a strange form of jealousy. Giles was hers…where did he get time to go and find someone else to be with? I'm sorry, but that sounds like Buffy has a thing for Giles. I know that's probably not where you were going, but that's what I'm seeing and I was a bit disturbed by it. I think it could have been put differently. Also, I'm confused on the whole Giles having a kid thing. Is it Olivia's or did you make up another person? Hopefully that would all be explained soon. It is interesting so far and I have to admit funny. I don't really like how the girls are acting though. They're kind of annoying, especially Buffy. And even if you're not British it would be common sense to guess what knickers are. Girls shouldn't be that weird around babies. I feel bad that Giles got abandoned and has to deal with it on his own, but then again I suppose it is his responsibility. Okay, think that's all I had to say. I tend to be very opinionated when I review and I always speak my mind. So, sorry if I offended you or anything. I guess when you write stories you have to take some criticism. Interested to read more.
Date: 02/04/2005 - 09:11 pm Title: 2
Very very cute story. I like how Willow was all in denial. Very classic. And Spike hiding in the bathroom was priceless. My favoirite part was "Sitting on the Slayer’s bed, singing her suggestive rock songs while he got her off with the huskiness of his voice. Oh yeah, he could see real potential there.Buffy’s cheeks flushed hot as she imagined Spike sitting beside her bed, or better yet, on it and using that oozing sex he called a voice to lull her into the land of lusty dreams." Very sexy
Date: 02/04/2005 - 09:10 pm Title: 2
You've got a reviewer for life, dear! This chapter was fabulous! I like the fact that Spike left and didn't compromise his wants for their 'needs' LOL And having Spike sing Buffy to sleep would be classic!:)
Date: 02/04/2005 - 09:06 pm Title: 2
Loved the chapter, can't wait to see where this is going
Date: 02/04/2005 - 08:36 pm Title: 2
Oh my god, this is priceless!!! "ding dong in his pants" that was hysterical!!!!! I just LOVE this type of Spike, the one that's not as evil as he really wants to be. Please more!
Date: 02/04/2005 - 08:34 pm Title: 2
don't blame everyone for bolting...i want someone to change my sons dirty nappies too!
Date: 02/04/2005 - 08:34 pm Title: 2
loving it so far
Date: 02/04/2005 - 08:11 pm Title: 1
"...rumpy-pumpy and Bob’s your uncle.” HAHAHA LOL! loved it loved it loved it! this was great! awesome work!
Date: 02/04/2005 - 07:02 pm Title: 1
Off to a great start. Can't wait to read more. Adorable so far!
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