Date: 03/27/2005 - 09:39 pm Title: 10
Aww...shopping.... and nice fast updates too sweets!! *hugs*
Date: 03/27/2005 - 09:32 pm Title: 10
I loved Spike's suggestion for what to buy Lia, clothing-wise LOL And his reaction to everything in the first store was just brilliant! Plus, the saleswoman's comment about his voice cracked me up:)
Date: 03/27/2005 - 06:46 pm Title: 5
I think I reviewed this somewhere else, but just in case....Loving it! Must have missed something if people are complaining about the britishisms. Hard to believe that even if someone had never read any thing else using British/Aussie terminology, that context itself wouldn't make meanings perfectly clear. Be that as it may, great, fun little story and looking forward to an update.
Date: 03/27/2005 - 12:57 pm Title: 9
Well that was a little taste of yummy! Love the internal buffy dialog and the bit with the fashion and willow's lack thereof. Showing the many facets of Spike is nice too! as far as their first time being crude? 2 consenting adults - babe asleep, vamp with 100+ yrs of kink experience to go with the missionary victorian? I don't see crude - I see Spuffiness spurting all over the place! Thanks for the GREAT chap! Can't wait for more!
Date: 03/27/2005 - 09:32 am Title: 9
Buffy's mental aside about Willow's fashion sense was funny and appropriate - you'd think Buffy would have had a talk with her years ago! Sweet, comforting Spike is lovely to read. Buffy hates to be vulnerable, and you're doing a good job keeping her on the knife's edge questioning if her desire for Spike makes her weak. I'm sure there'a lots of reassurance and passion to come.
Date: 03/27/2005 - 08:32 am Title: 9
Oh, no smut, lol, only kidding.......nice chapter with now letting them, especially Buffy start to wonder about the passion.....can't wait to see where you go here......
Date: 03/27/2005 - 04:23 am Title: 9
And I really love your story :) Mmmh, like how Spike cares about Buffy. And:
Happy Easter to you!
Date: 03/27/2005 - 03:23 am Title: 9
This is in no way squicky! What is beautiful is their passion! Champagne and roses: boring! Plus how more cutesy can it get: teary buffy and daddy spike, I am melting. You're writing my fav combo of sexy, silly, smutty, fluffy, funny spuffy! i hope you'll write more stories with this recipe.
Date: 03/26/2005 - 11:48 pm Title: 9
great update cant wait for more
Date: 03/26/2005 - 11:43 pm Title: 9
great chapter!! wonder if Willlow picked up anything from the two of them.....
Date: 03/26/2005 - 11:15 pm Title: 9
wasn't saying it wasn't hot...just saying it wasn't roses on the bed, bubbles in the bath, romantic, either...the way all girls picture how they want their first times to be; especially with their true love. They want it too be special and on the sofa isn't exactly what I'd call special...hot, yeah, special; no! same goes for the shower scenerio - was it steamy ---hell, yeah--, but in the end I always pictured spike being tender and caring, and that wasn't...and I know it isn't a relationship, but damn it I want the girl to be treated right...with Angel she wasn't, with Parker, she wasn't...with Riley, she wasn't she should be with Spike!
Date: 03/26/2005 - 10:14 pm Title: 9
Really loving Spike and Buffy's reactions to each other.
Date: 03/26/2005 - 09:47 pm Title: 9
oh, I do like this. Sweet and smutty. Add Spuffy and it's a winner! Ahh, do carry on....
Date: 03/26/2005 - 09:44 pm Title: 9
I know I keep saying it but another great chapter. Spike was very sweet to Buffy. Please update when able. I love this story.
Date: 03/26/2005 - 08:40 pm Title: 9
Another fabulous chapter! Willow needs to improve her fashion sense, though LOL So true to her character's outfits, especially in the beginning seasons. Still loving the Spuffyness:)
Date: 03/26/2005 - 08:20 pm Title: 9
Absolutely nothing squicky about anything in this story. Its so right on and adorable. And Buffy's inner voice is great. So sweet. Don't stop writing this . . can't wait for the next update.
Date: 03/26/2005 - 08:20 pm Title: 9
damn good chappie, poor spike no sex this chappie :P
Date: 03/26/2005 - 08:19 pm Title: 9
Another great chapter. I like sweet Spike. Whatever are they going to buy at the mall?
Date: 03/26/2005 - 03:42 pm Title: 8
i'm all for the smut!!! so keep it up!! thanx
Date: 03/26/2005 - 12:10 am Title: 8
Hot dog that was HOT!!!! I so don't mind the smut, can ya tell, and the chapters just keep getting better and better...can't wait to see what their gonna do while shopping...hehe.
Date: 03/26/2005 - 12:03 am Title: 7
that was a bit crude for a first time
Date: 03/25/2005 - 11:56 pm Title: 8
definately some smutage going on there...spike getting in for the long haul!
Date: 03/25/2005 - 06:55 pm Title: 8
Freakin' awesome again! You don't have to apologize for the smuttage, I think we all approve. ;) So glad Buffy didn't make with the immediate denials. Bouncy couch action is much better. The "Buffy boobs" part was sooo funny. LoL. It took me a little bit to catch on to what Spike meant by that. Loved the line about Spike being greatful Lia knew when to sleep so "dad could get in his not so little poke." That was absolute Spike, 100%. Great chapter again! I can't wait to see what hilarity ensues with the shopping excursion!
Date: 03/25/2005 - 06:02 pm Title: 8
great updates
Date: 03/25/2005 - 05:12 pm Title: 8
Too much smut ?! There's never enough smut... especially if the smut is as hot as your smut... love the story too, btw... keep posting, I'll be here.
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