Date: 03/30/2005 - 07:29 pm Title: 13
huh, can't say i was offended! Wondering what will happen when Giles comes back though... thanks for the frequent updates!
Date: 03/30/2005 - 07:23 pm Title: 12
Ahh! Very sweet. Loving Daddy-Spike...
Date: 03/30/2005 - 07:20 pm Title: 13
Definitely didn't lose this reader. I absolutely loved this chapter, love the deep connection that Buffy is beginning to develop with Lia and Spike and how she instinctively knows, even if at first she was afraid, that they're her family now. Can't wait for more!
Date: 03/30/2005 - 06:52 pm Title: 13
No problem with that chapter since I am the mom of 2 breastfed babies. Things like this do happen and at least Buffy didn't have to deal with the lack of sleep and lack of desire most new moms do. Love this story.
Date: 03/30/2005 - 06:50 pm Title: 13
Wow. That was probably the most sensually erotic and loveliest thing I have ever read. Many who have never had children won't understand that nursing can be a very erotic and arousing experience. Significant others (husbands, boyfriends, girlfriends, etc) tend to enjoy nursing on the mother's breasts as well. I think you perfectly captured the eroticism and natural splendor that is parenthood with this chapter. Buffy's fear and confusion giving way to awe, possessiveness and climax was just amazing. I am intrigued to find out more about Lia's species and how she was able to "choose" her parents and make Buffy lactate. Spike's extreme arousal at Lia nursing on Buffy was very hot. His possessiveness towards his new family makes me wanna jump his sexy bones. I love how you have infused a feeling of human and demon family traits and feelings with this chapter. Wonderful, amazing chapter. And don't let anyone else tell you otherwise. If people don't this chapter and give you grief, they have no excuse. Your warnings were very clear and noticeable. Kudos to your bravery!
Date: 03/30/2005 - 06:46 pm Title: 13
Awe... that was the end? I just started to read this.. ummm, last night? Or something... on bloodshedverse and folloed it here.... So, just wanted to say I enjoyed it!
Date: 03/30/2005 - 06:37 pm Title: 13
I just want to say that I really enjoyed this and every other chapter, and I really look forward to reading more.
Date: 03/30/2005 - 06:33 pm Title: 13
Completely awesome! Crazy twists but nicely written nonetheless. Nice tie-in with the 'burning baby fishes' line...Lia's not going to burn, right?! LOL This chapter didn't bother me, so you've still got at least one faithful reader:)
Date: 03/30/2005 - 06:27 pm Title: 13
I liked it, but im a little confused/ so the baby wasn't Giles and Olivias and is magically now biologically Buffy and Spikes? Or she jsut chose them as surrogates? I jsut want to know so i don't get behind plotwise....I'm easily confused, but regardless im enjoying the story, and i understand why you're afraid about losing readers, but people likely won't get disturbed (I'm not a mom, but even i know that all these situations minus the vampire thing are normal, i mena babies are sort of oblivious..) Anyway loving it so far, take care
Date: 03/30/2005 - 06:22 pm Title: 13
okay, i kinda skimmed through that one coz it did kinda wierd me out, but i'm still loving the story! just a thought- at the start of the next chapter could you maybe put a summary of what happened here (just the important parts about the bonding etc) so that everyone is up to speed? Thanks!
Date: 03/30/2005 - 06:02 pm Title: 13
I was confused at first because I didn't know that the baby had some demon in her or that Lia could choose her parents (and I thought it was Spike who was sucking on her), but then it all came clear. Nice story direction! Didn't expect it, but it was very interesting and not disturbing like I thought it might be. In fact, I think it's more erotic in the way that they have now bonded together in a family fashion ;)
Date: 03/30/2005 - 05:55 pm Title: 13
I can understand Buffy being confused and wigged, but she got in the swing of things quickly. I hope you explain Lia's origins and how she was able to "choose" Buffy and make her lactate. The family bonding is going to be hard to explain to Giles, but I'll bet it will be an entertaining explanation for your readers.!
Date: 03/30/2005 - 05:37 pm Title: 13
Is it over *whimper* It can't be over. I love this story! Plus, Giles hasn't gotten back yet and we don't know what Olivia has to say for herself and, and..I can't think of anything else right now, but I'm sure there's more..It has to be...please?
Date: 03/30/2005 - 01:11 pm Title: 4
I've been reading your story and I haven't posted a review for your other chapters because I usually wait until I am done reading the story. However, I really thought that this was a great chapter. Spike and Buffy's reaction seemed really typical and true to form. Good for you. I'm sorry that Tammy person gave you a hard time about how girls are supposed to act. I think Buffys reaction to the baby was a reaction Buffy would have. Although, I have to say (please don't be mad) that Willow would have been more accepting more quickly. That's my only problem but I still reallly like the story so far. Good job!
Date: 03/30/2005 - 01:02 pm Title: 12
This story rocks! Love it (Spike thinking of Lia as his and Buffy, thinking of changing for her .. ) I'm not so good with words as you are... Thanks for writing
Date: 03/30/2005 - 09:58 am Title: 12
i really liked , keep writting.
Date: 03/30/2005 - 09:30 am Title: 12
That chapter was wonderfully descriptive, and you're doing an excellent job portraying Spike's deepening feelings for both Lia and Buffy.
Date: 03/30/2005 - 09:12 am Title: 12
The last two chapters were very good. I can't imagine what will happen when they find out about Lia? I hope it won't be horrible?
Date: 03/30/2005 - 05:41 am Title: 12
aww that was such a sweet chapter... cant wait to see what happens next!
Date: 03/30/2005 - 04:06 am Title: 12
Oh, lovely chapter......yes dreams can come true and ememies can become lovers and friends.....and of the best kind.......great moving to the next level of the relationship....
Date: 03/30/2005 - 03:38 am Title: 12
Wonderful chapter. Very sweet and sexy. Almost heartbreaking. I hope she doesn't freak out when she finds out about Lia.
Date: 03/30/2005 - 03:33 am Title: 12
brilliant chapter!! i loved how u did the intemate sex scene!! it was so touching, i love this story!! cant wait fot the next chapter!!!
Date: 03/30/2005 - 12:08 am Title: 12
Awwww, they're so cute! Sweet Spuffy luvin' and the letting down of their emotional walls..Lovely..Need more, please.
Date: 03/29/2005 - 11:58 pm Title: 12
WOW!! i think this is the best scene of love-making i've ever read...really...it was...for a lack of better word...perfect. a perfect combination between spike and william, the words, the feelings, everything...and the little bundle of joy it's just the icing in th cake thanx so much...it was so beautiful hope you update soon ;)
Date: 03/29/2005 - 11:04 pm Title: 12
Aww, that was soo sweet!! I love Spike's slow descent in falling in love with Buffy, and hers too of course. This is great!
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