Date: 02/16/2005 - 11:29 am Title: Whispers and Screams
You are sooooo mean. Another cliffhanger (huffs). I really love the twist with the prophecy about a slayer/vamp child. I second the request for 3 updates per day.
Date: 02/16/2005 - 11:20 am Title: Prophetic Future
Cliffhanger! No! What an intense chapter - should have guessed it was the council. Evil, evil Travers - he must be stopped. Great chapter, totally surprised me with the prophecy - but I love the idea! Can't wait for more!
Date: 02/16/2005 - 06:29 am Title: ...Reckless
OH MAN!!!!!!! And the culprit in getting her kidnapped would be Riley........ And thanks for the two chapter updates!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!
Date: 02/16/2005 - 03:20 am Title: ...Reckless
Grrr it's Riley,eh???? Awesome chapter!! Keep up the good work :)
Date: 02/16/2005 - 02:07 am Title: ...Reckless
Well, we've gone from deaf Slayer to special connection between B & S to claiming that didn't work/feel right to kidnapping - do you have to pay Joss a royalty for all these "plot twists?" GREAT update(s) (GO YOU 2 IN ONE DAY) - you realize though that now we are all gonna want 3 in one day?!!? THANKS so much for this incredible tale. Please update soon with more twists/turns and Spuffiness (of all kinds)!
Date: 02/16/2005 - 01:55 am Title: ...Reckless
WOW! Suspense galore! Initiative or Council? I can't wait to find out....poor Spike! At least he was willing to risk a migraine from hell to save her. Great chapter and I can't wait for more.
Date: 02/16/2005 - 12:47 am Title: Helplessly, Hopelessly...
Wow, great update! I love singing Spike! :)
Date: 02/16/2005 - 12:29 am Title: ...Reckless
Riley and his men strilke again!
Date: 02/15/2005 - 11:03 pm Title: ...Reckless
Getting better and better. I knew things were too good to be true for our favorite blonde duo. My brain just kicked into overdrive trying to figure out who took Buffy and why. You did good with the cliffhanger. Great chapter. And I loved that Spike was desperate enough to save her that he fought despite the chip threatening to fry his brain.
Date: 02/15/2005 - 10:58 pm Title: ...Reckless
*points at you* Evil! More soon. Pretty please?
Date: 02/15/2005 - 09:42 pm Title: ...Reckless
thank you for the updates to this story it is one of my favorites and i cant wait for more suprises that you have in store for us to come
Date: 02/15/2005 - 09:32 pm Title: ...Reckless
Why do I smell a Riley-Rat? Grr!
Date: 02/15/2005 - 09:30 pm Title: ...Reckless
My poor Spike and his poor head. Something tells me idiot boy Riley is behind these actions. Could be wrong, just smells of him. Thanks so much for the extra chapter. WooHoo. I love updates! :o)
Date: 02/15/2005 - 08:56 pm Title: ...Reckless
OMG, OMG... No, please update tomorrow morning. What happened? Who are the masked men? Will this spur Spike into getting his chip removed so he could protect Buffy? Will they call for reinforcements?
Date: 02/15/2005 - 08:51 pm Title: ...Reckless
Damn humans. Damn chip. Not fair.
Date: 02/15/2005 - 08:45 pm Title: ...Reckless
OK another great Chapter. Wonder who took Buffy. Hopefully They will gett her back soon. Please update soon and often. Hate cliff hangers.
Date: 02/15/2005 - 08:34 pm Title: ...Reckless
Ooh, and the plot thickens... Can't wait to see where you're taking this :)
Date: 02/15/2005 - 08:23 pm Title: ...Reckless
Grrrrrrghghghg!!! I just know who's behind this! Good chapter though! Luv, Spuf
Date: 02/15/2005 - 08:20 pm Title: ...Reckless
I know Riley had something to do with this!! Make him pay!!! Keep up the great work
Date: 02/15/2005 - 08:13 pm Title: ...Reckless
ARGH! Dammit!! Why must you do this to me?! You have me sitting on pins and needles! My ass is beginning to hurt! Update soooooooooon pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease! :D
Date: 02/15/2005 - 07:56 pm Title: ...Reckless
OMG! Knew something bad was going to happen, just never expected it to be like this. Don't know why I can't shake the feeling that Riley somehow is behind all this. Loved that Spike tried to prevent them taking Buffy away, even with the pain he must have been feeling. Can't wait for more.
Date: 02/15/2005 - 07:55 pm Title: ...Reckless
Ahh! No, not cool! Great plot twist, very neat idea. I'm completely hooked and can't wait to find out more about these guys and why they kidnapped Buffy. Can't wait for more!
Date: 02/15/2005 - 07:52 pm Title: ...Reckless
*cries angsty tears* Oh the angst, the angst! Damn those evil humans. Poor Buffy! My heart is just breaking in two for her. Isn't it enough that she faces the forces of darkness on her own and now has an isolating disability? Grrrr, arrrrgh! Stupid men in masks, with their stupid tranquilizer guns. Is it the Council, come to snuff her out so they can have a slayer that's 100%? Or is it some of Riley's old commando buddies? Poor Spike. He must feel so helpless and desperate. It hurts Ashlee. Make it stop. *sniffle* I'm gonna go cuddle up with some Ben & Jerry's and my blankie 'til the next chapter comes out, k? (Wonderful chapter by the way! Great action scene. Very exciting!)
Date: 02/15/2005 - 07:48 pm Title: Whispers and Screams
For some reason I thought the four humans would be important but then I realized it might just be the point that it's Riley. ugh riley. but then again im wondering if you'll throw a twist because wouldn't riley tell them to kill a certain blonde vampire?
Date: 02/15/2005 - 07:43 pm Title: ...Reckless
OHHHHH that bastard Riley, that Motherf**ker!!! Buffy please kick his ass, no wait...Spike kick his sorry ass, please. Great chapter but now I'm mad and my loathing of Riley has just grown more intense and I didn't think that was even possible:)
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