[Report This]Date: 06/23/2005 - 12:52 am Title: ch 21
Oh man, what place to leave this chapter! Truely an evil cliffhanger!
[Report This]Date: 06/22/2005 - 10:18 pm Title: ch 21
Well....they do say it's easier to labor when you're up and about. Though I'd never offer to test that theory since you need to be laying down to get that all-powerful epidural. Poor Buffy, I doubt they have those at the gas station
Author's Response: Just wanted to say your review made me smile
[Report This]Date: 06/22/2005 - 10:02 pm Title: ch 21
I like this story. Much better than on the show. Can't wait for more. Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 06/22/2005 - 09:04 pm Title: ch 21
wonderful chapter!! love the story!! thanx
PS: poor poor buffy...and i'm amazed they didn't have any respect for a pregnant woman ;)
Author's Response: Well, she 'is' pregnant with the key. They have no respect for human life when it comes to their key (remember Dawn and the general)
[Report This]Date: 06/22/2005 - 07:42 pm Title: ch 21
Another fab chapter! I cringe to think of BUffy giving birth in that abandoned bulding, but I"m sure she'll survive. Can't wait for Dawn to be born!
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2005 - 10:17 pm Title: ch 19
Uh Oh, Glory knows what's going on now. The bump is what she wants! Poor Tara to get brain sucked. I need more, but I'm scared I won't like what Glory is going to do next. Great update!
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2005 - 12:07 pm Title: ch 20
thinns are gonns get so much more intersting... waiting for more!
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2005 - 10:18 am Title: ch 20
Fab Chapter! hehe love Buffy's dream world. Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2005 - 05:02 am Title: ch 19
wicked wicked and triple wicked, i really reallly luv this story. keep writing it is brilliant.
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2005 - 04:52 am Title: ch 20
Oh my - very thrilling! But I fear the running away won't help much - especially now when Buffy is ready to give birth... wonder if they / Buffy will call a doctor they / she know(s). But could be Ben... eventually. Not so good.
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2005 - 01:10 am Title: ch 20
fun stuff??? fun stuff??? i think i'm gonna cry...poor buffy ;) love the action...loved the chapter!! wonderful characterization...thanx...you did a great job...hope you update soon...
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2005 - 12:32 am Title: ch 20
very exciting!!!! cant wait!!!
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2005 - 12:28 am Title: ch 20
Damn... and we thought having a baby was difficult under normal conditions. This really makes "difficult birth" have all kinds of new meanings. Guess its a good thing she's a slayer. And you say the excitement is yet to come?! Fabulous chapter. Too bad we couldn't get lost in the dream sequence too. Please, update soon!
[Report This]Date: 06/19/2005 - 11:58 am Title: ch 19
Wow! Now that is an evil cliffhanger if there ever was one! Please update soon! I am dying to see how Glory expects to get the key out of Buffy!
[Report This]Date: 06/19/2005 - 01:59 am Title: ch 19
Cliffhangers are evil. Can't wait for more. Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 06/19/2005 - 01:37 am Title: ch 19
OMG what is going to happen next?? Please Update Soon
[Report This]Date: 06/18/2005 - 11:24 pm Title: ch 19
Uh oh! A very nice nod to cannon with this whole chapter. Though I have to say, I wanna see the baby, give Buffy the chance to be mommy. But I suppose there are many things we have yet to endure before we get to the happy parenting stage. Beautiful chapter. Please, update soon.
[Report This]Date: 06/18/2005 - 11:21 pm Title: ch 19
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!! please plase say you'll update soon...OMG!!!
[Report This]Date: 06/18/2005 - 05:21 pm Title: ch 19
oh wow! this is awesome but then i really want to see the ending to this story.
[Report This]Date: 06/18/2005 - 03:14 pm Title: ch 19
Uh-huh... now the cat is out of the sack (commenting the end of the chapter first). I hope you'll able to update soon. To the begin of the chapter: Loved the description of the Spuffy time ot the two. Cute. (Buffy wanting him to move in but not daring to tell that she wants him hi her room.
[Report This]Date: 06/18/2005 - 01:33 pm Title: ch 19
great chapter! i cant wait for more!!!
[Report This]Date: 06/18/2005 - 12:53 pm Title: ch 19
OH!!!!! BIG BIG BIG trouble ahead!!! waiting for more!!
[Report This]Date: 06/18/2005 - 10:29 am Title: ch 19
oh no! Glory knowing about Dawnie can't be good. Loved the chapter, and the tender interaction between Spike and Buffy, look forward to the next update
Date: 06/16/2005 - 10:59 pm Title: ch 18
terrific, awesome chapter!! just loved it!! you're doing a fantastic job!! keep it up!! thanx!! hope you update soon..