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Date: 01/12/2006 - 11:04 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

oooohhh Dawn is so cool. Love how you wrote her here.

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Date: 01/12/2006 - 10:44 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

so typical of them. snark firt and think later. but they are both hurting. . . I hpe they see it soon.

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Date: 01/11/2006 - 10:39 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

Uhoh. hat's sooo evil. what's she gonna do now? bet she's gonna hide her head in teh sand like she always does and pretend she doesn't love hi annd his heart is gonna break because she's a biotch.

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Date: 01/11/2006 - 10:33 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

a dimension inside of another one. okay, its the hellmouth. I get it. it makes snese in a way. nor more or less sense than anything Wehdon came up with.

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Date: 01/11/2006 - 10:27 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

boy am I glad i started to read this after you finsihed it. damn, but that must suck, being sepeartated from your honey like that. I'm off to the next chapter to ssee what's gonna happen.

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Date: 01/11/2006 - 10:21 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

kay. can I hvae a Spike to read me to sleep every night? damn that Buffy, she's a lucky girl. so not fair.

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Date: 01/11/2006 - 12:32 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

coconuts? seaweed? you gotta spill that.

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Date: 01/11/2006 - 12:15 pm Title: Chapter Ten

wow. need a cigarette after that one and and I don't smoke.

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Date: 01/11/2006 - 11:51 am Title: Chapter Nine

couple of typos in there, nothing too serious though. its still good and I like it. Xander is stupid.

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Date: 01/11/2006 - 11:30 am Title: Chapter Eight

go Anya. lol. romance novel sex tends to be really good. . . . lol. funny line. there were a couple of good lines in this one. Is this supposed to be a comedy?

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Date: 01/11/2006 - 11:22 am Title: Chapter Seven

i like the way you write. its really easy to read and i get the pictures of what you're trying to say. nice image of Spike an dBuffy lost on the beach and funny bit about the land sharks.

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Date: 01/11/2006 - 11:14 am Title: Chapter Six

ah, happy belated birthday. I guess, right? since this was posted like ages ago. angle sucks in any form. don't like him. he's . . . he's stupid. and a jerk. spike is much better.

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Date: 01/11/2006 - 11:07 am Title: Chapter Five

boy that was a mouthful at the end. Looks like somebody said something to set you off on a mini rant. But hey, don't let the bastarss get you down. or something like that. nice chapter. but hwo was the two people talkign intead of Buffy and Spike? is that more wierdness from the book?

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Date: 01/11/2006 - 10:29 am Title: Chapter Four

I meant to say tonguetied . . not tongued . . . which isn't to say that's a bad thing, coz Spike tongue. . . . *sighs*

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Date: 01/11/2006 - 08:47 am Title: Chapter Four

He's so cute. Love it when he gets all tongued and twisted up into things and he has to back track and stuff.

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Date: 01/11/2006 - 08:41 am Title: Chapter Three

give an dtake between spike and Buffy, always of the good. nice chapter. like this one

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Date: 01/11/2006 - 08:32 am Title: Chapter Two

I'm curious. Spike is already in love with her, but she doesn't know it. Is this before or after Crush? So JOyce isn't cdead yet, which is cool.

Reviewer: Lulu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2006 - 08:23 am Title: Chapter One

Friend said read. So I read. Good so far. Kinda short. Not much going on. But its good.

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Date: 11/16/2005 - 03:10 pm Title: Chapter One

Hey Addie this is just a test review to check to see if you receive it ok in your email. Please detele this :) Thanks

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Date: 10/03/2005 - 06:17 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

oh! I loved it! I wish it would keep going!! Great story!

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Date: 10/02/2005 - 02:32 pm Title: Chapter Seven

I'm loving it!!! ; )

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Date: 10/02/2005 - 12:47 pm Title: Chapter One

I just started reading it and... I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol ; )

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Date: 10/02/2005 - 04:16 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

I love this story...I truely do...I started reading it at 12;00am and by time 3;30 came around my eyes were threatinging to explode if I kept reading so I just svaed your story to read the end later...I was SO tired but I didnt want to stop reading. Good Job! (Hye Im so tired I originally wrote Job Good...its a good think i re-read this) *Yawn*

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Date: 10/02/2005 - 04:10 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Ralph and leroy......Herdmans mayhap?

Reviewer: Erin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2005 - 06:38 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

Wonderful story. Couldnt stop reading. Keep up the great work!!

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