Date: 05/15/2005 - 12:19 am Title: Things Aren't What They Seem
I just found this stroy and i've read all u've wrote so far, I love it.. butyou keep typing "want" when i think you want to say "wont" i've noticed that a lot... but its a great story plz update soon
Author's Response: You are absolutely correct. Thank you for pointing that out to me. I will it a point to watch that in my future writing. I'm glad you liking the story. Thanks for the feedback and the review
Date: 05/14/2005 - 11:35 pm Title: Things Aren't What They Seem
I feel bad because i found this fic and read it right through without leaving any reviews so i hope this extra long one will make up for it :) I know that Cordy is supposed to be her bf so i dont understand why she looked down on buffy so harshly for being with Spike. I know she asked her not to go with him but that wasnt her place, a bf should encourage a friends happiness. I know she's friends with Faith but faith and Spike werent even dating, they where fucking a ton of other people. I hate people who have "open" relationships mutually but then freak out. It doesnt make sense to me. Cordy should have been there for Buffy esp. when she found out what Faitth did at the Doublemeat palace. Im so glad that Spike seems to have changed his ways even though i dont like the whole Dru incident. I feel bad that Buffy is getting an abortion but sometimes (in my opinion of course and im sorry if it offends anyone) its the only thing someone can do. I know someone who 'had' to get one and shes the strongest most wonderful person i know, not a monster like some people think people who have abortions are. This fic is absolutely mind blowing and i cant wait to read the rest once its posted. Im so happy that i found it, you are incredibly talented. BTW its 'nice' to see a fic where she doesnt keep the baby, in most fics it all magically works out evn if they are both too young and not close to ready. Good job, i cant wait to see where this gos and what happens after the abortion in terms of how Buffy handles it seeing that spike is suposed to be leaving!
Author's Response: This is the longest review I have ever received. First, let me say thank you for taking the time to leave such a nice one. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Yeah, that whole Cordy situation was bad but hopefully they will find their way back to each other again. God, you are so right about those couples and their "open" relationships. They are so full of s**t. The whole abortion thing is delicate and I know some people who have gone through it. Its all so sad. Boy the next chapter. I've already started writing it and I'm finding it a bit difficult but I'll get through it. It may take a while to post it. Thanks again for the wonderful review.
Date: 05/14/2005 - 11:26 pm Title: Things Aren't What They Seem
oh please let them keep the baby
Author's Response: These fics have a tendency to write themselves. I can't make any promises. Thanks for the review. Keep reading
Date: 05/14/2005 - 09:56 pm Title: Things Aren't What They Seem
I really love this story and I'm glad Buffy and Spike made up, but I really hope they keep the baby . . . . anyway, can't wait to read more so please update again soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review Jessica. I had to keep them together. Its the spuffy thing to do but not without some difficulty. Unfortunately there is more to come for these two. They got to pay that karma bill. I'll try to update soon.
Date: 05/14/2005 - 06:44 pm Title: Things Aren't What They Seem
It was really cute that Spike was dreaming of Buffy when Xander was fixing his arms/shirt. I'm so glad they sorted things out about Dru and the other stuff that happened the day before; and that Spike will be with Buffy for the appointment (I hope he keeps his promise). =)
Author's Response: He would be a jackass if he doesn't. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Everything is working out for them for now. Thanks for the review
Date: 05/14/2005 - 06:31 pm Title: The Gang's All Here
Sounds like a fraternity party... someone holding up the bathroom line...and the guys clapping as they walked down the hall.. such a guy thing.
Author's Response: I know. I've been to a few in my day. I thought it was perfect to put it in the story. Thanks for the review
Date: 05/14/2005 - 06:14 pm Title: Things Aren't What They Seem
i wonder what buffy is gonna do about the baby. is she gonna be able to go through with it???? Keep up the great work. i love this story.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're still reading and liking the story. The subject is so sensitive and I wouldn't be surprised if I got flamed. Thanks for the review
Date: 05/14/2005 - 06:08 pm Title: Friends With Benefits?
Ugh... Bad Boyfriend Spike.. tell her after..hope he's just playing macho for Xander. Guess I will see in the next chapter.
Date: 05/14/2005 - 06:05 pm Title: Things Aren't What They Seem
Even though I'm against the idea of Buffy having an abortion because I really think they'd make good parents and that they could work things out between them, I'm not going to leave a flame or anything because I know how you write and I know that you won't let me down. It's good no matter what that Spike will support her no matter what and that he didn't sleep with Dru. It'll be interesting to see what happens in the next chaper and if Buffy changes her mind.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback Allison and not flaming me. i know this is a touchy subject. I'm glad this chapter didn't turn you off. The next chapter will be interesting. Thanks for te review
Date: 05/14/2005 - 06:02 pm Title: Things Aren't What They Seem
Seems like Buffy and Spike are still together - yet. But too sad she won't keep the baby so far... We'll see what else will happen.
Date: 03/11/2005 - 06:26 pm Title: Bad Timing
loved the updates but i wish we could have seen her tell him that she's pregnant so we could see his reaction
Author's Response: She is going to tell him in the next chapter. It will certainly put his love for her to the test. Thanks for the review
Date: 03/10/2005 - 03:58 pm Title: Bad Timing
I won't flame too. Well, I hope Buffy gets a chance to tell him ... if he get te job, what then? ... I'll waiting for the update to find out.
Author's Response: Always thinking ahead Cordy but I will tell you this. You will definitely get your answers. Thanks for the review
Date: 03/10/2005 - 02:51 pm Title: Bad Timing
No flaming.. promise. =D I just wish Buffy had told Spike. *sigh* More twists!! Good twists... so yay! I have NEVER heard of pairing Kendra and Faith.. interesting. Anyway, please update soon!!
Author's Response: So far so good on the flames. I thought Kendra and Faith made a hot pair. Thanks for reviewing
Date: 03/10/2005 - 02:37 pm Title: Bad Timing
I think that you should have Buffy tell Spike soon, like within the next few chapters. I think that you are doing great. Keep the updates coming. Good luck.
Author's Response: I promise to not drag it out..trust me on that. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. The next few chapters are going to be pretty draining. Thanks for reading and leaving me a review. I really appreciate it.
Date: 03/10/2005 - 02:22 pm Title: Bad Timing
I don't want her to get an abortion, and I have a feeling Spike wouldn't like the idea, either. Quite a nice movie role he landed:) I wish Buffy would've told him...yes, I'm a procrastinator, as well, but I don't know if it's a good idea to keep news like that to myself for too long. And poor Anya- to be 16 and have a decision like that to make.
Author's Response: Things are going to be a little rough in the next few chapters. Peoples lives are really about to change. Thanks for the review
Date: 02/26/2005 - 06:43 am Title: No 'Hard' Feelings
Great chapter. Very sexy & romantic. Oh...and can I volunteer to kick Faith's ass...please?
Date: 02/26/2005 - 12:50 am Title: No 'Hard' Feelings
that is soooo sweet! What a true romantic!
Date: 02/25/2005 - 09:17 pm Title: No 'Hard' Feelings
I'm really enjoying this fic & I can hardly wait for more! God - Faith's really insane, isn't she lol!!! anyways, please, please update as soon as you get a chance.
Author's Response: Good and I hope you still feel the same way with the next few chapters. There is more drama to come. Thanks for the review
Date: 02/25/2005 - 03:40 pm Title: No 'Hard' Feelings
WHAT AN AMAZING CHAPTER!!!!!!! Ilove this piece!
Date: 02/25/2005 - 02:22 pm Title: No 'Hard' Feelings
Update :-D I feared when Faith was there, attacking both Buffy and Spike, that seh would do damage to their relationship - and that on special date.
Author's Response: Hell no, I want let nothing ruin the romance but it is a spring board to whats coming next. I might even get flamed...lol Thanks for the reviews Cordy
Date: 02/25/2005 - 10:33 am Title: No 'Hard' Feelings
After the debacle with the evil and satanic Faith, the chapter got very sexy and sweet. They're in love- such a good thing:) And him taking her to the tennis court was a nice touch, also!
Author's Response: Still Faith has the right to be pissed but I do think she is taking it too far but thats Faith for you. The tennis courts..well thats the sappy romantic in me. I love a romantic Spike...hell I love everything about Spike...LOL Thanks for the update
Date: 02/25/2005 - 08:06 am Title: No 'Hard' Feelings
I can't believe I got behind on this story again! argh!! But anyways, This story just keeps getting better! I love it! Please update sooooon! Hopefully this time I will not get so behind!
Author's Response: I so glad you think so. I hope you feel that way in the next few chapters because there is more drama to come. Thanks for the review
Date: 02/25/2005 - 06:59 am Title: No 'Hard' Feelings
So glad Spike confessed his love first.
Author's Response: Yeah, but does he mean it. Lets hope so. Thanks for the review
Date: 02/25/2005 - 01:55 am Title: No 'Hard' Feelings
aww, great update! Spike told a girl he loved her for the first time (again with the *aww*) And hopefully Faith doesn't come around again to screw things up, lol. Anyway, Great story and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that part. Lets just hope he means it. Thanks for the review
Date: 02/12/2005 - 04:24 pm Title: Bitch
I found time to read now! So all is in the open know. And Faith is looking for revenge .. that's not so good. I woudn't love having her with a knife behind my back. Faith thinks she's right to hurt Buffy
Author's Response: Hell, you can't blame her for being mad but three months had passed. Faith has that knife and she's about to use it soon. Thanks for the review Cordy
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