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Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2011 - 06:06 pm Title: Goodbye Blue Sky

"as that small glimmer of hope she had allowed into the light exploded into dust." I hope you mean that literally. Cause if not, well I have you know I am excellent in organizing mobs of townfolf weilding pitchforks and torches.
ooh, Giles being all shy like is adorable. I cannot believe Buffy meddling would work out, usually it doesn't.
Ooh crap, you are so evil. You just love that angst, don't you.

Author's Response: Hi Gopher101!!! Uhhhhh ... let me think ... do I like angst? hmmmm... yeah, a little! LOL! My muse LOVES to make me cry and I hate to cry alone, so I must share it with you! I'm keeping a look out for townfolk and pitchforks! yikes! heehee! Glad you enjoyed Giles/Olivia ... he is really cute ... hopefully Buffy's meddling will work out for him. He needs someone! Much more to come ... keep the pitchforks handy! -p4s 2011.10.13

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2011 - 02:34 am Title: Goodbye Blue Sky

Did someone give up their mission? Not being met at the airport by the council was really telling of their involvement. Now that they have been captured, can they hope that Giles will find them before anything bad happens to all of them? Glares daggers at your muse for the cliff hanger.

Author's Response: Hi Vette! Hmmmmmmmmmm.... did someone blab?!? We'll find out soon! You know my muse loves those evil cliffies ... and he gobbles up those daggers like candy! heehee! Lots more to come! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from U! -p4s 2011.10.13

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2011 - 02:25 am Title: Goodbye Blue Sky

I can't say I was surpriced that something bad happend. It started nicely with Buffy making Olivia arrive, nice Olivia/Giles interaction. And then later, trouble of course. I just hope that Giles won't be captured since he didn' expect this. It could have been Wesley who said something, time will tell. The watchers will of course be interested in a Slayer who can be pregnant by a vampire. Do they know she is pregnant now? They mayby will try to breed Buffy and Spike with different Slayers and vampires.

Author's Response: Hi Magnus ... yeah, you knew things had been going tooooo well for tooooo long ... my muse starts shooting spitballs at me if I do that very long! :-0 Some of your questions will soon be answered! New chapter up ... more answers later! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.10.13

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2011 - 05:57 pm Title: Come Fly With Me

Giles was so wonderfully Giles in that chapter. I can quite imagine how very non subtle our two were. Lovely interlude before the drama. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hi BuffyRat!! heehee! I'm glad you enjoyed Giles! He's a hoot with that dry sense of humor! Let the drama begin .... Thanks so much for stopping in! Love hearing from U! -p4s 2011.10.11

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2011 - 07:28 am Title: Come Fly With Me

Good picture of a flight attendent, very nice. You also had this intense Buffy picture, it felt like looked straight at me. They had a very good dream. And Giles was wonderful in this chapter. His dry humor, impossible not to like.



Author's Response: Hi Magnus!! I picked that flight attendant out just for you! :-) I love that intense picture of Buffy/SMG too ... glad it had the desired effect! And yeah, you gotta love Giles! I love him bantering with Spike ... ahhhhh ... Spike with actual friends! A spuffy lover's dream... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in!!! You know I love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.10.11

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2011 - 01:20 am Title: Come Fly With Me

Love how Giles educated the blonde duo on mile high etiquette. The brief diversion from economic stresses and upcoming search and rescue mission is nice but are they headed in the right direction? For Bess and Billy, I hope so. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Hi Vette! LOL! Yes, Giles, ever the educator! heehee! Well, the diversions are over ... let the action begin ... We'll soon find out if they're on the right track! Thanks so much for reading and always stopping in! Love to hear from you! -p4s 2011.10.11

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2011 - 04:24 pm Title: Come Fly With Me

Ok, the fight between Giles and Buffy funny.

Author's Response: Hi gopher101!!! Glad you got a laugh ... it may be the last for a while! :O Thanks so much for reading and stopping in!! Love hearing from U! -p4s 2011.10.11

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2011 - 07:47 pm Title: My Little Girl

Love that father/daughter bonding.

Author's Response: Hi gopher101!! Thanks so much! Writing Spike/Annie scenes is one of my favorite things to do. They've always had a really special relationship which I just love. Thanks for reading and stopping in! -p4s 2011.10.11

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2011 - 04:26 pm Title: My Little Girl

Annie's separation anxiety and fears soothed by Spike was written exceptionally well. Hope that rescue will soon be on the way to Bess. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Hi Vette! Thank you so much, that's very kind of you! I'm really glad you enjoyed the talk between father and daughter ... Spike really loves their kids and has a really special relationship with Annie. The rescue is on the way! Stay tuned! Thanks so much for reading and always stopping in! I love hearing from you, Vette! -p4s 2011.10.11

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2011 - 03:59 pm Title: My Little Girl

Great chapter. I really like Spike 's relationship with Annie. There is something about Fathers and Daughters.

Author's Response: Hi Bridget! Oh yeah, there is definately something wonderful about fathers and daughters! I'm glad you liked the talk and their relationship ... I love what a great dad he his and how hard he tries, too. He definately treasures the kids ... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from U! -p4s 2011.10.11

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2011 - 03:15 am Title: My Little Girl

Smart little Annie. And I give Spike much credit for handling that whole talk, there. Told her just enough for it to all make sense and not got to that place where it really doesn't make any sense. Very curious to see if it really is the council that has these poor vamps trapped. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hi BuffyRat! (I always type BuffyRate ... then I have to laugh when I think about Doyle and the commercial Cordy had him make... Low rats ...). I love Spike's relationship with the kids. He's really a good dad, doesn't always know what to say to them, but what dad does!? I think he definately handled that well... Now he just has to keep that promise to her ... the one about coming back. :O ... Lots more to come! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! -p4s 2011.10.11

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2011 - 02:02 am Title: My Little Girl

Well it won't be easy in London that's for sure, and I don't think the dungeon is in the main building. I just hope Wesley haven't told the watchers about the plan. I really liked the talk between Spike and Annie. It was sweet but also points out how hard thisis for the children.

Author's Response: Hi Magnus! You could be right ... the dungeon could be anywhere ... seems we found out that the Council has a castle outside of London, too ... never know! And Wes ... hmmmm .... where do his loyalties lie? That could be a problem! Glad you liked Spike/Annie talk ... it's definately hard on the kids to have superheroes for parents! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you! {hugs} -p4s 2011.10.11

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2011 - 10:41 pm Title: No More Mr. Nice Guy

They have a lot of things to deal with now. And I do hope they can bring Bess into a world and have her be a nice vamp. Yes dear, there are non evil vamps. Lots to learn. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hi BuffyRat! Yeah, there is still a lot to learn ... many things to cover. This is turning into a very long story with plenty of angst coming at them from all directions ...Will have more soon! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here! -p4s 2011.10.03

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2011 - 07:53 am Title: No More Mr. Nice Guy

A lot of sadnes but also determination. If it is the watchers that have her (which I still think) then it's a big secret within the organisation since neither Giles nor Wesley had heard anything. Wesley voiced some of my own thoughts from my former review, what would the watchers get from doing it? Later they need to figure out what to do with the other prisoners, destroy them or rehabilitate them?

Author's Response: Hi magnus! Yes, if the Watcher's have her, it is a well kept secret ... but then, would you really want to advertise that to the population of Watcher's in general? Probably not. They will discuss what to do with the other prisioners and also eventually find out just what the purpose of it all is. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in. Love hearing from you! {hugs} -p4s 2011.10.03

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2011 - 03:10 am Title: Dreamweaver

Hmmm... Bess, is a vampire. Perhaps still. Could surely get interesting. Maybe it's a bit Fray, twin sister is the slayer, but twin brother gets all the dreams? Just a hunch.

Author's Response: Hi Buffyrat! That's an interesting theory on the dreams! Since Dani/Billy's souls are so intertwined, it definately could be a possibility! Will have more soon ... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! -p4s 2011.10.03

Reviewer: VETTE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2011 - 01:00 am Title: No More Mr. Nice Guy

Bess and Billy talking about Spike keeping his word was touching - hope that Spike is able to do that. The emotions Bess was feeling prove that she is not so damaged that she cannot be redeemed. Since Bess and Dani are practically clones, couldn't they use a location spell using Dani's blood? - or give Billy or Spike a talisman that could be given to Bess in the dream world that can be used to locate her? Your muse better wear a atheletic support guard cause I feel the need to knee him in the crotch for all this angst!

Author's Response: Hi Vette! That's a great idea using Dani's blood to find her, too bad B/S didn't think of that ... no worries, tho, they'll find a way to locate her. Bess definately still has a heart within her, it's just a matter of whether she can let it out into the light or if she's just too frightened about having it broken again to really trust anyone. We'll find out. Oooooooo! No kicking my muse in the crotch! please! ouch! I better run out and get him some thick padding and a cup ... (XXL ... heehee!) The angst hasn't really gotten going good yet. Will have more soon! Thanks Vette! -p4s 2011.10.03

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2011 - 08:22 pm Title: No More Mr. Nice Guy

Go Buffy and Spike, stick to your guns.

Author's Response: Let the kicking of butt commence ... Thanks so much for stopping in! -p4s 2011.10.03

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2011 - 08:12 pm Title: I'd Do Anything

Poor Bess, hope they can help her.

Author's Response: Hi gopher101, yeah, they really hope they can help her, too! We'll find out ... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in, love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.10.03

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2011 - 01:10 pm Title: No More Mr. Nice Guy

Those Watchers are going down! I love it when Buffy and Spike kick butt!

Author's Response: Hi Sibb! There will be some spectacular kicking of butt to be sure! Hang on, tho ... got some bumps in the road first. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from U! -p4s 2011.10.03

Reviewer: Catrine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2011 - 03:57 am Title: I'd Do Anything

Poor poor Bess. What a life she has lead. I'm betting The Council has something to do with this, considering her watchers journal. I loved the way Spike handled the whole situation. Again he showed his big heart and will to keep his children safe. I believe he will have a lot of problems coming to terms with Bess being where she is and his role in making it so (even if she was destined to be a slayer)

I hope Willow can work her mojo and find out where Bess is kept both for her sake and Buffy and Spike

Let the angst come, I am ready:)!

Author's Response: Hi Catrine! The angst is on the way, my dear! heehee! Yes, Spike is definately guilt-ridden by what's happened to her, both because of leaving her as a human and perhaps being the reason she was called in 1900 because he killed the Chinese Slayer ... he definately feels responsible for her situtation and will do ANYTHING to get her out of it. We'll find out shortly what B/S plan to do to find her ... and whether their plan will work (for once). Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.10.03

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2011 - 01:01 am Title: I'd Do Anything

Your muse really knows how to break a heart with the abuse Bess has endured. Spike having to face the fact that his child's destiny was one of his worst nightmares. The scene is something out of a cheesy "Women in Prison" movie where they are exploited in the worst possible ways. This almost smells of Wolfram and Hart running a sex trade show for the demented. Anyhow, hope that Spike and Buffy can figure out how to find Bess.

Author's Response: Hi Vette! I'm glad my muse still has the knack for heart breaking ... there will be more to come, I assure you! It's definately something out of a prision exploitation movie ...to the guards, they're ';just vamps' ... demons, monsters ... with no worth or feelings ...so why not? That's something Buffy will comtemplate later. Definately something W&H could be involved with - it would be irornic if B/S had to take down W&H before they could heal Cordellia ... or have to fight Angel over it... Thanks for your always insightful reviews Vette! Will have more soon! -p4s 2011.10.03

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2011 - 06:52 am Title: I'd Do Anything

Poor everyone, now we are deep in the angst. It still seems like the Watchers are keeping the prisoners, but why? It's unclear what they actually are doing, reading some spells and watching them fuck, are they trying to breed them? Mayby they are trying to create an Arcslayer or an other superbeing. This makes me fear for the other Slayers, now that they are many some of them could be used. I have a lot of thoughts now.

Buffy and Spike need s to talk to Wesley and Giles, they are from Watchers familys and should know something.



Author's Response: Oh ... you think we're in the 'deep angst'? Au contraire mon fraire ... deep angst is yet to come! However, you and my muse have been talking yet again ...darn, Magnus! Can't I ever write anything that you aren't three steps ahead of me on? I'm gonna have to work on that! And, you are right, talking to Wes and Giles is in the plan. Well, I hope somewhere along the line here I can surprise you ... let me know if that happens, ok? Thanks soooo much for reading and always stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.10.03

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2011 - 02:16 am Title: I'd Do Anything

Pretty rough stuff. This would kill most parents. How are they going to get her out. And, let me guess, the Watchers?

Author's Response: Hi Sibb! Yes, very rough, very sad for Bess ... and yes, Buffy believes it's the Watchers. We'll soon find out if she's right... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.10.03

Reviewer: Catrine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2011 - 06:37 am Title: Dreamweaver

I've been away and what a treat it was to comeback back and have many more chapters to read:) iI loved the scene with Buffy being the vampire tamer (I laughed out loud:) ) I'm really curious what kind of gifts the twins have. They have thetelepatic ability, but Billy being able to see his long lost sister Bess.... I'm looking forward for more chapters-goodness.

I believe Bess is still alive, her sat her was probably just covering for her. Even as a vampire she has probably continued her slayer duties :)

Looking forwardfor an update. I love this series :)

Author's Response: Hi Catrine! Oh, don't you love it when there's lots to read in a gob!? I'm trying to update a couple of chapters a week. Glad I can get some LOLs from you ... hopefully some tears to come ... my muse loves to make me cry and I hate to cry alone! :)

Thanks soooo much for stopping in! I'm so glad you like the series ... hearing that really makes my muse happy and keeps him thinking! Thanks again! Hope to hear more from you later! Don't be shy! {hugs} -p4s 2011.09.29

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2011 - 06:23 am Title: Dreamweaver

It's a good feeling when I'm right :-)

A nice beginning with the dinosaur dream, but then the dungeon dream. Interesting, I wonder if Bess is dreaming at the same time? She probebly felt the connection again when Billy was born but after all this time she can't even even in her dreams leave her prison. Since she and Dani are somehow the same I suppose they can't exist in the same dream at the same time. It seems like a turned Slayer becomes a super vampire. Now they will try with sending in Spike I guess, and try to find out more.

Author's Response: Ya know, Magnus ... I think you've been hanging out in the pub with my muse ... apparently, a shot or two of whiskey loosens his tongue! I'm really gonna have to have a talk with him about that! :-)

Will have more soon and you can find out how right you are ... Thanks soooo much for reading and always stopping in. I always look forward to your notes! {hugs} -p4s

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