

Date: 03/24/2011 - 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 14
Yay Buffy asking for the perfect solution!
Yay Buffy being ready to sacrifice her looks and trusting William to still love her for her.
Yay Aphrodite for being nice--unless the task stinks. Hmmm...

Date: 03/24/2011 - 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 13
Awww!
It's funny how in these circumstances I find it tragic that William will remember while Buffy won't, yet in AtS I was incredibly pissed off that Angel got to remember while Buffy didn't. I guess it's all about choices and priorities, huh?

Date: 03/24/2011 - 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 12
This fantasy? Made. Of. Win!!!
Stupid baths in Istanbul had a short, scrawny attendant. Grrr!

Date: 03/24/2011 - 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 11
Lllllllllllllllloved this, even though William's pain breaks my heart!
I hate that I have to stop reading for a few, but dogs need to eat. Sigh.
Brilliant story and I can't wait to sit down and read the next chapter!

Date: 03/24/2011 - 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 10
"Aphrodite tended to dress people as she would prefer to see them. He was somewhat surprised to still be wearing pants." I know things were scary for William, but I giggled at that :D
That last line was beautiful, and YAY! Buffy loves him too!!!

Date: 03/24/2011 - 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 8
All the characters you've written that I've read here so far are really in character, but especially this:
"She stopped in the doorway and looked back at him over her shoulder. “I just want to make it clear that if I didn’t like the dress, I wouldn’t wear it.”
and this:
"She hated bullies; she couldn’t let the crowd tease him. If necessary she’d deal with it high school style."
Are so VERY Buffy, I think I squealed with delight.
Poor William loves her so much, he didn't let her fail the test. I just wanna squish him!

Date: 03/24/2011 - 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 7 & 8
Maybe she could have a deal like She does?
Ohhh, I'm intrigued, and I (obviously) want her to choose William, but I feel for her not wanting to give up her life. Argh!

Date: 03/24/2011 - 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 6
I'm hoping she won't want to make a great escape by then.
Poor William. I had the same reactions with Buffy to his story. Only I'd have cuddled him lots!

Date: 03/24/2011 - 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 5
"What am I going to tell them when I get back? How could I possibly explain this and not end up committed?" --- Somehow, I think this won't be an issue...
The club level would be my kind of hell :P I'm more the library type.
Still loving it!

Date: 03/24/2011 - 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm pasting here the comment I was trying to leave on LJ, because LJ is acting up:
It's been so long since I read the third chapter, but the story just sucked me right back in! Loved it and I'm off for more :D

Date: 03/24/2011 - 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 14
Loved the update! I wonder what task Aphrodite might have for Buffy...

Date: 03/24/2011 - 02:33 am Title: Chapter 14
That seems to have gone well. So glad she's trying to make things work for all. How terrifying is it to think that she would be stuck back in her real life, always feeling that something was missing, and never knowing what it was. Or that William would spend all eternity missing her... So amazingly sad. Glad to see there may be a brighter solution. And good going to thing that she kind of impressed Aphrodite. Update soon.

Date: 03/23/2011 - 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 14
Wonder what Buffy will have to do for Aphrodite! Can't wait for more!

Date: 03/23/2011 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter, I'm curious to find out what task Aphrodite is going to give Buffy.

Date: 03/21/2011 - 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Like your tale. When will you finish???

Date: 03/17/2011 - 01:48 am Title: Chapter 11
+100 to every word Buffyrat said!

Date: 03/17/2011 - 12:40 am Title: Chapter 11
This chapter was very bittersweet. I wish there was a way for them to be together! Loved it!
Date: 03/17/2011 - 12:17 am Title: Chapter 1
This is a wonderful story, I am enjoying using the myths as background. You can play with the characters more, making them deeper in emotion. That is the best!

Date: 03/16/2011 - 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 11
She loves him, and she knows it, and I just can't believe that she believes that she is saving either one of them angst by not saying anything. They're on day what, 5? I do not see her making it another 25 days without slipping up. Unless they stay on complete opposite sides of the underworld, there is no chance of them avoiding a lip lock. And I'm not sure that Buffy will regret it when it happens. Update soon!

Date: 03/14/2011 - 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh my... things didn't get easier for them now that Buffy is in love too.
It's late for me so I won't sneak ahead to read more @LJ, will continue later.
I'm enjoying this so far.

Date: 03/14/2011 - 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 8
Awe Buffy tries to protect William (the bullies, when dancing).
Uh-huh, not good who William vanished. Sounds as if he shouldn't have told Buffy. Is he to be punished now?

Date: 03/14/2011 - 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 7 & 8
Definitely not easy for Buffy, being forced to stay in Hades. It's very different there.

Date: 03/14/2011 - 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 6
What a fate for William. So that's why he has to stay in Hades.

Date: 03/14/2011 - 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 5
I'm still curious what's the what about William, what makes him special if everybody is happy for him to have Buffy there.

Date: 03/14/2011 - 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ah Buffy is part immortal? That's why she is so lucky?
Could be...