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Reviewer: ILoveLamp Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2013 - 06:02 am Title: Chapter 1

It read a little fragmented, but that took nothing away for me.

It was a good premise and really well executed.

Reviewer: a girl can dream Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2011 - 10:02 am Title: Chapter 1

exquisite.

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2011 - 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great premise; I have read a decent amount of baby fic and I do not believe any have done that conception story before. In a fandom where it seems as if there are no new ideas, you did the impossible. BRAVO!! Oh, and I really liked it too.;-)

Reviewer: spikes mrs Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2010 - 02:28 am Title: Chapter 1

Interesting little fic... nice to see Spike got the girl in the end.....

Could do with a little more editting and spell checking... Also didn't seem to flow as well as it should of done should maybe of had some more detail and made into a several chaptered fic instead of one chap story...

Over all though I liked this well done ......

Author's Response: This is a oneshot. It will not be any more than a oneshot. Mind helping me out and pointing out where it could have used "editting and spell checking?" I did think that MsWord was sufficient, but if you've noticed any errors that the word processor didn't catch, I'd appreciate being alerted to them.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2010 - 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice story but to quick would have been nice to see it alot longer or more chapter.

I found at times it was very choppy because of that.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2010 - 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

aw very sweet. but sad that it wasnt spikes no matter what biology says

Reviewer: BuffyXenaDQFan Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2010 - 02:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh, that was really sweet! I'd really like to read more, but I see that this is complete! Good job!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2010 - 03:13 am Title: Chapter 1

Awww... it brought tears to my eyes!

Thanks for sharing. :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2010 - 01:38 am Title: Chapter 1

So clearly the better man. Glad Angel had enough sense to let what should be, be. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Kate Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2010 - 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

So moving. I loved it. A really great twist on the aftermath of IWRY.

Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2010 - 11:22 am Title: Chapter 1

Loved it! I love how you tie together Angel, his day becoming human, and the Something Blue spell. Nice one shot!

Reviewer: magnus374 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2010 - 09:29 am Title: Chapter 1

A hopeful ending at least.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2010 - 02:01 am Title: Chapter 1

Spike is better father material than Angel ever could think of being. Brings out Angel repellent and sprays it his way.

Reviewer: Nana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2010 - 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

Angel never deserved having any child, Darla should have staked him first then herself. I really did enjoy how seriously Spike took his fatherhood while she was pregnant.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2010 - 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Angel's baby I guess. But Spike is the father and gets the girl. Happy ending..

Reviewer: tinkerbell Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2010 - 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Cute story!!!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2010 - 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aw, I wanted the baby to be Spike's Spawn! At least Buffy came to her senses at the end. She should have kicked Angel's arse for his deception. Spike's never going to be 100% comfortable knowing that his little William is really Angel's child.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2010 - 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

I feared for the outcome when Angel claimed to be the father...
otherwise - sweet.

Reviewer: carrot Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2010 - 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

it was beautiful!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2010 - 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

What a lovely little story! Wasn't expecting the Angel twist in the middle. It would be great to see this expanded into a longer story!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2010 - 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awww.... that was so sweet :D Liked reading it!

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