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Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2009 - 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 11

lovely chapter, i hope the initiative gets what's coming to them.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2009 - 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 11

*nods* I knew why I didn't trust the Initiative. This time Buffy was saved in time but from now on she has to be careful. That could have gone wrong.
And someone has to tell about a soul, huh?
~ Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2009 - 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 11

great update, really hate Reiley and hope he meets a sticky end..Where's Joyce with an axe when you need her??

loved it and look forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2009 - 04:20 am Title: Chapter 10

I'm loving the sweet Spuffyness. :D I'm kinda worried about Buffy right now though, when Riley tells Walsh about his conversation with Buffy much badness could happen. :( Great chapter!

Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2009 - 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 10

Oh no i hope Riley and Professor Walsh don't become a problem or hurt Buffy or Spike. Great update loved it like always. Please update again soon.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2009 - 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 10

So Buffy feels more for Spike than she is ready to say. Well that's better than not to feel that. Hopefully soon she fell good (secure) enough to tell him.
Ouch... maybe Buffy should have been so open to Riley about what she knows. Now she is the one that will get hunted if she isn't careful. :(
~ Enjoyed the update :)

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2009 - 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 10

Looks like there could be some trouble with the initiative. Hope it won't be too bad. Loved the Spuffyness! :)

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2009 - 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 10

love the spuffy, worried about what the initiative might have planned.

Reviewer: greyangel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2009 - 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 10

Awww, the interaction betweent Spike and Buffy was just tooooo sweet :))) But now danger in looming in the form of soilder boy and Buffy doesn't yet know how much of a problem he could be for her and her vamp boyfriend. More soon, please :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2009 - 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 9

I'm glad the issue got solved - I feared the worst when Buffy saw Harmony with Spike.
Well Buffy did try to let Parker back in; his loss to run away.
Enjoyed the update :) Seems Spike wait is over now.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2009 - 09:38 am Title: Chapter 9

Gotta say I'm loving that Harmony's dumb move helped pushed Spike and Buffy together. Loved the update! :D

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2009 - 02:38 am Title: Chapter 9

Yay, I loved it! So happy Buffy listened to him about Harmony. And they're finally together for real. Great chapter!

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2009 - 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 9

Loved it, I'm so glad they're finally together.

Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2009 - 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 9

Aaaawww so sweet! Stupid Harmony! I love this fic i get excited every time you update its great.... please update again very soon :)

Reviewer: greyangel Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2009 - 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 9

Just read chapters 1-9 and loved every one of them. I feel you should be getting more reviews for this story--it's great, and I don't usually like stories with teenage settings. But I do like this one. In fact, I'm jealous that I didn't think of the plot myself, lol.


You're introduction of all the characters is pretty seamless and so easy to read--just like a real episode. I love/hate your Harmony *g* and the flagpole thing--priceless, but I'm glad to see the back of him. Now I'm in suspence waiting for the next chappy, dying to see if and when Spike and Buffy get together, or if you have Spike kidnapped by the army guys. I just love the thought of that, especially if Buffy rushes in to rescue him. That would be too cute. Thanks for sharing this with us, and more soon, please :)

Author's Response: Wow, that's a great compliment coming from you, I'm very flattered. As for the lack of reviews, maybe I've just been doing this too long...lol! As long as some people are still interested, I'll keep up with it. I have way too many plot bunnies to stop now. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks again for the wonderful comment=)

Reviewer: PinkSatin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2009 - 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 9

OMG. I want more :)
Give me more :)

This whole chapter every few days is really annoying :) haha

KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK :)

Author's Response: I know, I used to post every other day, but since I started working, my updates haven't been coming as fast. I'm hoping not to take too long with the next chapter. Thanks for reading=)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2009 - 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 8

Buffy is jealous - but she has to decide what she wants: keeping the cake or eating it. If she really wants to be with Spike she has to give him a sign, not going out with other men (or letting Parker come back for the sake of Dawn). I'm sure Spike would wait even longer (what he is anyway but Buffy doesn't know it, huh?

Reviewer: sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2009 - 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 8

awesome chapter!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2009 - 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 8

Spike made a lot of really good points, he does have a right to date... but Harmony!!! Should be interesting to see how long it takes for her to get on his nerves. Good update!

Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2009 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 8

I love this fic so much, great update and please more every soon.

Reviewer: mscotstar Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2009 - 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 8

Loved every chapter, Loving this storyline so far. Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2009 - 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 8

well, i knew it was bound to happen, but i'm not worried about harmony. great chapter!

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2009 - 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 8

Love jealous Buffy, and Spike is right. Great chapter!

Reviewer: jessie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2009 - 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 8


Stupid Harmony! Loved the update though ;)

Reviewer: sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2009 - 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 7

nice turn of events, can't wait to see what happens next.

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