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Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2008 - 06:54 am Title: Chapter 2

Strange... just when Spike asked her to dance she leaves...

Maybe ghosts from the past or past lives?

Enjoying..

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2008 - 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 2

This is getting really interesting! Can't wait til the next update!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2008 - 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 2

Ah a new start :) Maybe they'll get along better.
Perhaps Spike remembered Buffy from back then too (therefore the reaction).
Neat, the double meeting in the club. ~ Looking forward to read more / from their past too.

Reviewer: Spuffy_obsessed Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2008 - 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wonderful start, I simply suggest a beta. But still a good start indeed. If you need help, feel free to e-mail me, and I can look at some of it, if not update soon. ^.^

Reviewer: djonie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2008 - 10:07 am Title: Chapter 2

Great start, can't wait to find out what happened!

Reviewer: becky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2008 - 09:15 am Title: Chapter 2

am i detecting some sort of a past life theme? that would be so neat! i'm actually working on something past life related! Update soon!

Reviewer: sam52 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2008 - 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 2

OH!!! I GET IT! I GET IT! I GET IT!

The idea is pure genius!!!! Love it! Cannot wait to read more and see about the whole "Spike-in-Uniform" thing! Yay!

=)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2008 - 08:06 am Title: Chapter 1

I've reread the summary again; so the dream is important :D

Author's Response: Yes the daydreams are important!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2008 - 08:03 am Title: Chapter 1

The unknown person that commented is right about a beta (there are a lot of exclamation marks) - if you get a good one they don't only help with grammar and spelling, they help with a plot too. When I reread my comments I sometimes could use a beta too ;) (A list of beta readers is here on SR when you're on the homepage.)
I'm only here to read :)
Seems this Buffy is determinate / knows what she wants, having long decided on the school she wants to go. Well at last regarding the school.
Mmmh only a daydream? Makes me wonder if you'll make more of this dream (if it's important).
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you for the comment and the advice =)

Reviewer: ... Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2008 - 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

More soon? Love it so far and can't wait

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm still working on the second chapter... Should be up soon =)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2008 - 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great beginning! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2008 - 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

It has potential, but would be so much better if you had a beta reader to look over your work before you posted, they really come in handy. Also, you have one too many exclamation marks, those tend to be distracting and make it seem like everyone is yelling, just something to think about.

Author's Response: Thanks for the advice and for reviewing =)

Reviewer: Aly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2008 - 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Interesting beginning. I'd really like to read more ;)

Author's Response: Thank you

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