[Report This]Date: 08/29/2012 - 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 7
Freakin awesome!!!
[Report This]Date: 11/14/2008 - 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 7
Taut and with quite a punch: I like this a lot. Good characterizations, too, with a truly diabolical exploitation of Buffy-kicked-to-the-curb Spike and his certainty of unworthiness.
[Report This]Date: 11/12/2008 - 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 7
It was good but did the ending have to be so sad... Call me a hopeless romantic but i'm still waiting for Buffy to get her Boy out of Hell.
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2008 - 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 7
Thank u for depressing me...
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2008 - 09:32 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh , wow, very twisty! I love this whole idea and particularly the fact that you don't tie it up nice and pretty. After all, it really is Spike's hell. Great idea nad wondeerfully executed. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2008 - 05:36 am Title: Chapter 7
Unexpected end; sad to see Spike get stuck in that day (hell) day after day with no way out.
That is indeed a personal Hell for Spike.
And no way out, huh?
[Report This]Date: 10/29/2008 - 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 6
Ah Buffy is running again? Just like old times. ;)
Not many chapters left I guess... looking forward to read more :)
[Report This]Date: 10/29/2008 - 02:21 am Title: Chapter 5
Buffy and Spike seem like they're both so close to getting it right...
[Report This]Date: 10/29/2008 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter 5
ooooo...interesting, I can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 10/28/2008 - 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 5
Buffy remembers her real mission then; but now she is in trouble. Oops, not in trouble. Xander is there to help (and now we know why he vanished before). So hopefully he just did that.
[Report This]Date: 10/28/2008 - 09:05 am Title: Chapter 5
This is absolutely great! I love the way you construct the alternate reality, say its the future, and then inject a different Buffy into it. I always love your work and am so pleased to see a new story. really looking forward to seeing what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 10/22/2008 - 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
Really weird, Dr. Harris looking like the old Xander Spike knew (but I expected that). Not Spike passing out.
Mmmm Buffy is really Spike's Buffy then? Thanks to magic and Willow. But I wonder what happened; Buffy seems to have to save him.
Ah for the sake of the world. Didn't guess that Spike was in hell here. That's why his memory is wonky sometimes?
[Report This]Date: 10/18/2008 - 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is very intruiging! Moody and mysterious... I want more!
[Report This]Date: 10/17/2008 - 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 3
Seems Spike has indeed no choice then to work with Buffy :D
But they two complete one another at work; Buffy love the technical stuff, sounds as if she loves (and knows) computers well.
And somebody loves to tease Spike (can't be all a coincidence, can it? These similar names).
[Report This]Date: 10/14/2008 - 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
Very interesting. Looking forward to seeing what is going on.
[Report This]Date: 10/14/2008 - 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
I keep reading the title as 'Like Mice in a Cocktail' and it gives me pause. LOL Anyway, I haven't read this yet as I'm waiting for it to get to some length first (cuz that's how I like em) but the premise is fascinating and I really am looking forward to reading it then. So please keep going with it as I'm lurking here and want to read it later. Thanks for sharing it with us.
[Report This]Date: 10/14/2008 - 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
Timing :) Another chapter up already.
Oh... weird. The women even is has the same name besides looking like Buffy? Wonder who (what) has caused that.
You made me very curious now. :D
[Report This]Date: 10/14/2008 - 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
I will read here then; had added the chapters to my LJ memories to read :)
Wow, things have definitely changed again. The whole world is different. And Spike as a police officer. Suits him, a white hat even if would have denied when being younger to be that.
Sounds as if the vampire there looks indeed a lot like Buffy.
~ Good start :) Looking forward to the rest.
[Report This]Date: 10/14/2008 - 10:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Great start. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting. I just posted the second chapter. I hope you will read and let me know what you think:)
[Report This]Date: 10/14/2008 - 10:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Great start. I'm looking forward to reading more.
[Report This]Date: 10/14/2008 - 09:46 am Title: Chapter 1
i like the beginning. futuristic is good, i'm curious where are you heading with the plot. the last sentence is weird though. you don't pass out if you breath. shouldn't the sentence go sth like this - 'If he'd needed to breath, he would have passed out.'?