[Report This]Date: 06/21/2008 - 01:00 pm Title: Suspend Your Disbelief
i dont know about your favorite lines but i like the gay part!!
love it and i knew that tara will know something!!
Author's Response: I forgot about that one! My fave line was the bat one!! Tee hee!! Glad you're still loving it! :) thanks for letting me know - really aprreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 06/21/2008 - 08:25 am Title: Suspend Your Disbelief
interesting, very interesting. This is a bit different from your usual stuff, but I like it so far. :) *hugs* Nice one luv!
Author's Response: Hi puska, glad that you're liking it :) I think it a bit different full stop!! lol!! Let alone diff from my usual stuff!! Tee hee! Having great fun writing it :) Thanks for taking the time and keep on letting me know!
[Report This]Date: 06/21/2008 - 05:45 am Title: Suspend Your Disbelief
Okay, so Tara knows about vampires. Interesting. I have to admit it's a bit weird to read about vampires in this story since it's the sequel to an all-human fic, but it's a good kind of weird. Please keep the chappies coming! :)
Author's Response: Hi Pet. The plot bunny came to me and just wouldn't go away. I had the idea even before CL was finished and had a little play with 'normals' being made aware of the world of demons and such in ALOP. It's just how my twisted mind works - figured it might be something completely different! Tee hee!! Glad you think it's 'good' weird! LOL
Date: 06/21/2008 - 04:29 am Title: Suspend Your Disbelief
You took the warning down again from the "main page" (recently added). It doesn't show Spike/other now. In my opinion it needs to show that (my opinion like I said). You don't have to write Spike/Dru if you want to give the plot away but I prefer to be warned before (especially when Spike is together with Buffy when it happens). Then I would have waited till I read and decided after reading the end if I would. Because in this situation "watching" Spike sleeping with Dru in the last two chapters? I could have done without it.
I'm not saying that it isn't a clever twist because it is. But Spike/Dru now? *shudder again thinking of the last chapter*
It's easier for me and the author if I stay away from stories I can't stand to read.
I liked Tara here, being able to help because she had a clue that Spike is becoming a vampire. Her being a witch may save him. With Buffy a 'normal' human she can't fight against Dru.
Author's Response: Hi Cordyk. The warning must have disappeared in the change over - I certainly didn't take it down so thanks for pointing it out. I have heeded your advise and put the warning on there properly. There is also another on there that might make you a little easier about the outcome of this fic! No more shudders me thinks :) Thanks for carrying on to read - sorry for annoying/upsetting you - hangs head in shame. :)
[Report This]Date: 06/21/2008 - 03:43 am Title: Suspend Your Disbelief
Wow, Mabel, why wasn't I surprised that this Tara was a witch as well? I love her 'net biz! Glad to see another chappie up so quick. Loved her explanation about parallels...and also love it when somebody writes Tara as she should've been (I'd heard Joss wanted to bring her back evil in S7 and Amber had refused to do it, if that's true), as a knowledgeable, useful resource, a strong if quiet woman, sensible, togetther and close to her Wiccan roots and powers. Seems like you've got her spot on. I'd thought at first, since she was with Rich, this Tara was just a filler character, a familiar name to a generic character, perhaps...glad to see otherwise. Will we be seeing Willow? (How wicked a turn could it be for our Willow to see this Tara, should she and Buffy have to fetch a wayward Dru? sorry you've got my mind wandering possible 'parallels' now!) Speaking of, if we have a wayward Dru, any chance of a wayward Slayer coming thru to fetch or stake Dru's skanky ass? Please say yes! (Besides, I think this Spike would have a cow to see that kind of alternate Buffy!) Are we doing the old Hollywood "Love at First Bite" type 'three bites to become a vampire' routine? If so, does Spike have 1 or 2 bites left to go since Dru hacked into his tattoo (awww...that was something, a memory for him to cherish and she messed it up!) So, he still is technically alive; he has a heartbeat, so still pumping blood, but has no reflection in mirrors... not gonna try out holding a bible or cross, a host (not Lorne), Holy water, and he might be feeling the effects of dawn on a vampy schedule already? (or he might just be tired from Dru shagging the daylight(s) right outta him) and what about sunlight affecting him, burning him? Can't really try a stake without possible permanent results, but garlic? And various other anti-vamp remedies and folklore? Will Tara show up supplies in hand to check him out? I gather he has breath the way he was hyperventilating (sounding) in his panic attack???
LOL! Fun, fun! Glad you give us such food for delightful thought.
Thanks, til next time,
Kara
~~fyreburned~~
Author's Response: Hi Kara, I'm glad that you like how I'm doing Tara. Your questions will be answered in time!! Thanks so much for taking the time to let me know that you're enjoying it. :) Won't keep you waiting too long.
[Report This]Date: 06/21/2008 - 12:03 am Title: Suspend Your Disbelief
i absolutely love the twist! So creative and surprising!! You are so talented! I adore your writing and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Hi shelly. I've just got up and come to check the revs and yours is the first one I read - and what a lovely one it is, thank you :) It'll set me up for the day! I'm having a lot of fun writing this fic :)
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2008 - 07:19 pm Title: Reflections
Now thats different, I loved it and can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Hi Nicka, thrilled that you think it's something different - that truly is music to my ears. Thanks for letting me know that you loved it. Will update soon :)
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2008 - 05:43 pm Title: Suspend Your Disbelief
Thanks for the update Mabel, I'm really enjoying this.
Author's Response: Hi CarolM, delighted that you're enjoying the story! Thanks for letting me know :)
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2008 - 05:42 pm Title: Suspend Your Disbelief
hi! I'm a recently member. I don't know what to write but I do know that I like your story, how you are taking it to vamp spike.....
Author's Response: This came up twice but I think that it's against my religion to delete a review!! LOL. Or not to respond to one! :)
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2008 - 05:41 pm Title: Suspend Your Disbelief
hi! I'm a recently member. I don't know what to write but I do know that I like your story, how you are taking it to vamp spike.....
Author's Response: Hi spikalover! Welcome to the Spuffy Realm and the Mabelverse in particular!! Saying that you like my story works for me!! lol!! Thanks for taking the time and I hope you keep on letting me know :)
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2008 - 05:32 pm Title: Suspend Your Disbelief
Nice explanation of what's happened and at least Dru only had this Spike when she had him in a thrall but it still makes me feel a little sad. Having said that I love the interesting twist you've got going and I can't wait to see where you take this next - hope it's soon.
Author's Response: Hi Sam. A thrall is the only way he'd ever let Dru near him but it just wouldn't have been believable if she hadn't had her evil way!! I'm delighted that you like the plot twist. Thanks for letting me know :)
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2008 - 04:25 pm Title: Suspend Your Disbelief
I really, really, really love how you're writing Tara - gentle and kind but strong and assertive when she needs to be. That's how her character should have been written in the show! Great update! More soon please!!
Author's Response: Hi Melly. Glad you like what I'm doing with Tara. I do tend to make the characters how I think they should be rather than how they were - that's why I write fantasy rather than canon I suppose. Thanks for letting me know :)
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2008 - 03:10 pm Title: Suspend Your Disbelief
So that's how it's all come to pass , I couldn't understand how she was getting in the room or anything, let her appear when buffy's there and she'll get a nice dusty end. The only problem i've had is that she had sex with Spike that was icky , thank god it wasn't graphic. You have kind of a devious mind you know.
Author's Response: I do indeed! Twisted is a word often bandied about! LOL! Seriously - I know many on here in particular hate Spike/Dru but if I had written it without her having sex then I don't think it would have been 'right'. No way would Dru not do what I had her do!! I think you'll like what I've got in store!! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2008 - 12:06 pm Title: Reflections
Oooo! This is so good. I'm looking forward to your next update.
Author's Response: Hi nea, really pleased that you're liking it! Thanks for letting me know - I really appreciate it :)
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2008 - 11:11 am Title: Reflections
wow, this one has moved along! Sorry for not reviewing earlier hon, this site had issues and I couldn't get on for a couple of days. And RL caught up with me. grr.
This is very interesting. Im intrigued. :) Great stuff Mabel! *hugs*
Author's Response: Hi puska, glad to see you're back!! And that you're enjoying it! :) *hugs* :)
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2008 - 08:18 am Title: Reflections
Love it!! Can't wait to see where you go with it. When will Buffy show up?
Author's Response: Hi Jenn, delighted that you're loving it! I'm having great fun writing it. Can't tell you about Buffy without giving spoilers! Tee hee! Thanks so much for letting me know :)
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2008 - 07:34 am Title: Reflections
Omigawd!!! You SO totally threw me for a loop? (Is this my punishment for straying and reading a Spillow/Spangelus(SpangelWes?)/Spordy et al really cool gen fic? Oh, Mighty Joss, (and Mabel) who sees and knows all, I repent and recant... Mea Culpa, I'll say 10 Hail Mary's and a 'alf dozen Our Fathers!.Save Spike!!!) I totally, TOTALLY did not expect this in this fic! I expected a AU/AH fic on this one! Wow! You did your job! Totally threw me for a loop! Wow, what can I say, did NOT see THAT one coming! I was like "Whuh?" doing the double take! I mean, I expected Dru to get him drunk or somehow take advantage of Spike, but to actually BE Dru (DRU-'Dru'!) and to be Vampire-Dru! somehow going all transdimensional and going after Spike, THAT I just did not see coming! And you win the "Harmony-Passions" 'Award for Unexpected-Wierdo-Shit with Paranormal-Origins and Intent ' for today, hell, everyday for a while while you are cranking out the upcoming chapters!!! Take it, you deserve it for gobsmaking me at least if not half the rest of the community here and elsewhere! So "A" Drusilla from ??? another dimension/plane/reality finds THIS William Pratt to somehow replace HER William/Spike and somehow (well, we ALL know how... or would like to specifically see it close up...) RE-MAKE SPIKE??? So (awwwww!) What happened to HER Spike? (would that be a post-NFA Spike who's off in Hell-A living it up in a deserted Playboy Mansion with a bevy of pretty much nekkid bimbos and some creepy chick with nefarous aims named Spider? The one who SO should have an irate Buffy, Dawn,probably Willow to boot as B's friend, throw in Faith and Dru for good measure, to kick the living shit outta his ass on a bad PMS day for living it up like that even if it were in hell? No...Dru just goes out and gets a NEW toy, I guess...) Or is this a "The Wish" 'verse Dru looking for a Spike long dusted? Wow! This is cool... in Spike's words... this is just ..."neat!"...But also kinda sad, cos from the buildup of the first story, and the initial part of this one, we just thought B&S were semi-regular (as far as rock stars go!) people who found the love of their lives, got lucky, worked hard, made it big, earned nice things, and got to live (NOT forever!) to enjoy it side by side with the person that they were in love with.... wait... for some of us, I guess that was just too idyllic! Mabel, kudos. keep up the good but unexpected work and will look forward to more totally amazing stuff outta you soon!
WOW!!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~
Author's Response: Wow K! Thank you soooo much for such a brilliant review! Your questions will be answered in due course. Thank you for my 'award' I shall treasure it! LOL! I'm so pleased that you didn't see it coming - best thing that I could hear. I love my plot twists and I'm having great fun with this story. Hope you like what I carry on to do with our hero and his friends :) Thanks again *hugs*.
[Report This]Date: 06/19/2008 - 07:32 pm Title: Missing You
what ? no concerts in the beautiful North West of England-nothing in Liverpool or Manchester two of the hottest music spots in the UK--disgraceful !!!! but getting the feeling that Drusilla will be making an unwelcome appearance sometime soon
Author's Response: Hi Scaryscouse!! Sorry about that - my bad! As you can prob tell - i'm from other side of the pennines - hence Leeds!! LOL!! As for Dru...you're not wrong!!!
[Report This]Date: 06/19/2008 - 01:27 pm Title: Reflections
ho god!! i want more !
Author's Response: Then more you shall have!! Won't keep you waiting too long!! Prob tomorrow or Sat! :)
[Report This]Date: 06/19/2008 - 09:20 am Title: Reflections
Oh God, he's a vampire?? *gasp* So happy you updated quickly, any chance of another chappie soon, like tomorrow? ;) Love this.
Author's Response: Will do my best for you Pet! As for him being a vampire...? Tee hee!! Thanks for reviewing!! Thrilled that you love it :)
[Report This]Date: 06/19/2008 - 06:48 am Title: Reflections
I don't know what dimension Dru is from but it's time for the slayer from there to show up and stake this ho biscuit!!! It's past time actually - please have someone - anyone - stake the fiendess ho and save Spike!!! The fact that you have me enthralled with this story is prove positive of how good a writer you are because I really don't like a lot of angst and yet here I am everyday, lurking on websites waiting for this story to be updated! Please have mercy and update soon (with some Spuffiness)!! Thanks for another great (& quick) update!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Melly, for letting me know you think that I'm a good writer. *huge grin*. Think that you'll be happy with what happens to Dru...I won't keep you waiting too long :)
[Report This]Date: 06/18/2008 - 09:13 pm Title: Reflections
Jeez Mabel ,can you quit it with the skanky ho and the "be in me" be in me" routine, this chapter seriously grossed me out, i had to read with my hand in front of my face and thru my fingers. I can't believe u had her turn him, how are they gonna save him mabel, huh! How? I don't see a way! Thank God u update fast otherwise i'd go nuts. Great story by the way, poor Spike didn't go through enough in changing lives , now you had to go and vampriize him.
Author's Response: Hi Jo, you so made me laugh with the first sentence of your rev! But has he been turned...? This is the Mabelverse remember - anything could happen and usually does! I must admit that I am tough on my Spikes! Check your email hun, bit of a present for you there :)
[Report This]Date: 06/18/2008 - 08:56 pm Title: Reflections
Gah! Death to Drusilla! Stake the cow!
Poor Spike being thralled into that and now he's a...what is he? half vampire? not fully vampire? Oh Well done I'm confused!
More soon please Mabel this fic is awesome.
Author's Response: @my, thank you so much for saying this fic is awesome. *Big smile* Really appreciate it. Things will be explained a little more in the next chapter. :)
[Report This]Date: 06/18/2008 - 06:08 pm Title: Reflections
oh no, now it's gettin freaky... hahah i still love it though. How could I not? I LOVE your stories! Very original, and I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Author's Response: Hi Veronica, I'm letting my imagination have a field day with this fic. It really is the Mabelverse! Thank you so much for saying that you love my fics - means a lot. Think you'll enjoy the ride this one takes you on! :)
Date: 06/18/2008 - 05:51 pm Title: Reflections
Can't say I like the story at the moment / where it is going to (because of Spike/Dru, to be clear).
(And dear Mabel, could you put the warning with in this case Spike/other up with the first chapter next time? That's why I asked about this / checked the story for xx/other when I read the first chapter.)
Hope it will get better soon or I just skip the story for a bit or till it's finished.
Author's Response: The reason i didn't put spike/other on the top is cos i wanted you to give it a go. Sorry for being sneaky. It would also be a spoiler. Things aren't as they seem. This part is pivotal to the story but not 'the' story if you know what I mean. :) email me if you want a bit better idea of what's in store - mabel.marsters@gmail.com
There will be a chapter soon that i'm sure that you will love!! :) Again - I apologise for being sneaky.