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Reviewer: Tanit Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2008 - 08:30 pm Title: Four

I loved this update. Having a couple of the boys over indeed. lmao!

More soon, I hope! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2008 - 04:37 pm Title: Four

Mmmmm I wonder if Spike invited gay friends of his as he read that Buffy wants to loose her virginity to one of his friends or if he did plan to invite these friends of him from the start.
Enjoyed the update :)

Author's Response: Hehehe-William can have a plan too. :D

Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2008 - 03:56 pm Title: Four

Execellent chapter. Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: quirks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2008 - 02:21 pm Title: Four

the temperature in here just got turned up a couple hundred degrees. hee! they're so doooooomed!

Author's Response: Doomed? You see it as a bad thing? Lol

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2008 - 01:53 pm Title: Four

*LOL* That cunning William! No way is Buffy gonna sleep with those two! :D Very sexy chapter - I love it. If it's sexy now, what will happen when things get steamy? Ha... I can only imagine. More, please!

Author's Response: He is a clever little thing isn't he? :D

Reviewer: dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2008 - 12:47 pm Title: Four

wow this fic is great, i just read all four chapters and it just keeps getting better and better :) poor buffy won't know what spanked..i mean hit her :) please hurry and update again soon.

Author's Response: lol-thanks dee. I hope you continue to enjoy it. More will be posted soon.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2008 - 12:22 pm Title: Four

Enjoying....

All the innuendos.. need to go back and reread.. Buffy doesn't have a thing for William.. or just thinks he is not interested .. or has someone else..

But sex with just ... anyone to not be a virgin anymore.. hmm..

Author's Response: She's an adventurous girl. :D

Reviewer: quirks Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2008 - 11:43 am Title: Three

OOh! I finally had time to catch up on your new story, and I love it. They're adorable together as kids, and now that they're older you've set them up as interesting people. I'm sure it'll be a fun ride. Can't wait to read more!


Author's Response: Oh thanks-you just gave me a big smile.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2008 - 07:59 am Title: Three

Thanks for another great update... loved it!

Author's Response: Thank You!

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2008 - 06:53 am Title: Three

Don't know if I already said this, but I love the banner. So sweet! And the chapter was great. I hate Dru, though, that bitch! However, I would love for Buffy and Spike to have another sleep-over... *lol*

Author's Response: Thanks :) Alissa definitely made an adorable banner. I gave a squeal of delight the moment I saw it. Sleep-overs can be fun.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2008 - 04:44 am Title: Three

Reviewer: maddonna001 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2008 - 04:34 am Title: Three

" The image of William’s pale skin against those sheets came unbidden into Buffy’s mind. "
So she is subconsciously attracted to him! I love the flashbacks, keep on going!

Author's Response: Thanks :D I think that even in fiction it's just too fantastical to create a girl that isn't attracted to his prettiness at least subconsciously. But yeah-she doesn't really know it yet.

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2008 - 03:45 am Title: Three

Awesome chapter, I love the little flashback with Dru

Author's Response: Thanks. I wanted to really encapsulate that whole situation in one short scene, so that we wouldn't have to see much of her.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2008 - 03:09 am Title: Three

Oh wow... I must applaud Will for being so strong when confronting Dru. Perhaps he realized Dru was right - he was never hers, but belonged to Buffy. I love this chapter! It's another good one. Love it. :D

Author's Response: Yeah our little William is growing up. It's not always easy for him-but it is making him a stronger man. Thanks!

Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2008 - 08:48 pm Title: Three

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank You !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: annie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2008 - 06:01 pm Title: Three

Ugh, I so don't like Drusilla - In any shape or form. You should just write her out of this, into a helldimension preferably. I love your william though, so sweet. And ahh, the misunderstandings - typical. And Buffy is ignorant as usual for her charachter. Throw in some drama and we have ourselves a winner!

If you can't understand my weird rambling (english is not my native tongue), here's the 101. I love this fic. So update! ;D hugs/a



Author's Response: I understand you just fine. LOL William=good Dru=Bad I agree completely. Thanks!

Reviewer: Tanit Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2008 - 04:49 pm Title: Three

Love it! Oh, if only the sleepover had happened! Rats! lol Regardless, I don't think it's going to take much for their feelings to become known. :) I also enjoyed the glimpse into William's short history with Dru.

Looking forward to the next update!



Author's Response: Yeah I like to drag these things out a bit. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2008 - 04:08 pm Title: Three

Loved the update! Buffy's thinking about a sleep over? I don't see a problem. Hope you'll post that next chapter this weekend!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2008 - 03:34 pm Title: Three

It was easier with MM because I knew there where more chapters when I checked the last one ;-) (regarding the xx/other).
Sad to see William unhappy back then when Drusilla cheated on him. It didn't turn out well that he wasn't honest about his feelings towards Buffy when winning Drusilla as his girlfriend instead.
Sleepy Buffy? Cute :)
Looking forward to more (sooner or later).

Author's Response: Yeah, I don't think there was much winning of her involved. Dru just sort of collected him and he was so distraught he just went along with it. Thanks for your review!!!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2008 - 03:07 pm Title: Three

Like the back and forth of time in the story to explain the events that lead up to the now..

Enjoying..

Author's Response: Thank You. I thought about telling the story in a more chronological fashion, but this seemed more fun. I'm glad to hear that you like it.

Reviewer: Suzee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2008 - 03:04 pm Title: Three

Ooh you updated this one! I love this so much-it might only be 3 chapters so far but I still love it :D (and I've never been good about waiting for betas either, didn't seem to hurt the chapter though)

Author's Response: Thanks. lol I'm glad to here that you're enjoying it so far. :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2008 - 09:47 pm Title: Two

So sad, her brother. Always more than that I suppose. Love the flash backs. Can't wait to see his apartment. Please, update soon.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2008 - 07:13 am Title: Two

*smile* I see you already got one (banner) :)) So sweet :))) It fits well.
~ Buffy was very eager to see William again. Oh I see, it was in 2007 when Buffy talked of him as her brother. No wonder William didn't take it well.
But he'll never will know for sure if he doesn't tell her of his feelings.

Author's Response: He should talk totally talk to her, but my William is a bit of an odd duck. Give him a chance-I think he might just surprise us all.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2008 - 06:56 am Title: One

Oh that's the story (chapter) I've read without the summary? Oh my it has xx/other? Not my favorite but I liked the first chapter very much so I'll read.
(Re: Banner: I know whom to ask for it but so do you. Do you want to contact her herself? If you don't / or don't find another I can ask her again. It's up do you.)

Author's Response: LOL I do know who to ask; I just figure I should put up a request and see what happens. It seems to be working for me. I got this one in under twenty hours. Also I like to see if my story inspires anyone. Re: XX/other- mostly flashbacks and NOTHING graphic. If you handled it ok in Maybe More-this won't be a problem for you. :)

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2008 - 03:26 am Title: Two

Awesome story so far, I can't wait to read more.

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