

Date: 08/04/2008 - 11:04 am Title: Fourteen
Poor William, that flashback certainly was embarrassing. I'm so glad Joyce didn't force him to come out. And I think William was very smart to seek out the help he felt he needed. Wonderful closing scene. ;) Fantastic update!

Date: 08/04/2008 - 04:31 am Title: Fourteen
Great chapter, I can't wait to read what happens next.

Date: 08/03/2008 - 11:58 pm Title: Fourteen
loved it:) hehe.... can't wait for the next chapter and loved the flashback in this chapter haha

Date: 08/03/2008 - 11:29 pm Title: Fourteen
AMAZING, LIKE ALWAYS!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i love that u write it in both the past and present and i just want to say u do it perfectly. i love that balance between the present and past and really enjoy reading how u write the developing plot. ne ways i hope that things continue to get more intimate between will and her and that they do get together soon. also again i hope that everything works out well and that they end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX

Date: 08/03/2008 - 10:27 pm Title: Fourteen
I wasn't at all surprised with his "I love you" but I can't wait for Buffy to realize just how much he loves her. I absolutely LOVE this story. The bits and pieces of their childhood is great.
Although angst is inevitable, I can't wait for the next update. :)

Date: 08/03/2008 - 04:59 pm Title: Fourteen
Loved the chapter! Can't wait to read more!

Date: 08/03/2008 - 02:10 pm Title: Fourteen
Love this story it should be up for an award.
Author's Response: Thanks. It is. This story has been nommed at the Cradle of Humanity Awards and at the Sunny D Awards. :D

Date: 08/03/2008 - 02:04 pm Title: Fourteen
Awe, poor William :) Buffy was a strain for his libido, too sexy for him already *g* These years must have been hard for William do 'endure' in a way.
Glad to see them so happy at the present time. Looking forward to more (and wonder what will happen after Buffy has to leave again, going back to the States and William staying there).

Date: 08/03/2008 - 01:52 pm Title: Fourteen
How could anyone NOT love your William? He's adorable. I always get a big smile on my face whenever I see this story has been updated and this chapter definitely didn't disappoint. Loved it, and can't wait for more! :)

Date: 08/03/2008 - 12:03 pm Title: Fourteen
Thought I missed a chapter.. like him carrying her to the bedroom and ... But now we are on a road trip..
Hmm... and still love William especially since he has developed that "hot sexuality" yet seems to love the take charge women . Must have been a good psychiatrist.. LOL
Enjoying..
Author's Response: Hehehe
Sorry-there will be more naughtiness soon.

Date: 08/03/2008 - 11:45 am Title: Fourteen
Yes I still love your William, why wouldn't I? He's hot and smart and funny and did I say hot? Loved William, loved the update but I want him to be mine!
Author's Response: But, he's mine. :P Thanks. I was a little worried that I might just be making him too quirky for you all.

Date: 08/01/2008 - 02:16 am Title: Thirteen
OHH SHE BETTER NOT GET ANOTHER GUY!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i cant believe william, he is sooooooo hot in this story, u write him very well. i love that theyre getting closer and i wish that he would admit how he feels to her. i really hope that william and her get together officially soon and admit theyree feelings very soon. also i hope that everything goes well and that there isnt too much angst in the future. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX
Author's Response: I just want to take a minute to thank you for ALL of your reviews. You rock and totally make me want to write and post more.

Date: 07/30/2008 - 05:26 pm Title: Thirteen
Not that I don't love Spike, but I hope we get to see a little more of William. Gotta love the angst.
Author's Response: Umm...do you mean sexy William=Spike? I'm not sure exactly what you are looking for. More awkward shyness? That's coming. More Flashbacks? That's coming too. Definitely there will be angst.

Date: 07/30/2008 - 05:57 am Title: Thirteen
OMG that was so hot that I read most of it holding my breath and then Buffy opened her mouth and shoved her foot in. This is such a good story and I am desperate for more - soon please.

Date: 07/29/2008 - 06:17 pm Title: Thirteen
Really loving this! Wpndering how the angst will present itself! More please!

Date: 07/29/2008 - 05:25 pm Title: Thirteen
What's the matter with the site today? I just want to read *sigh* but the stories don't open. I've cheated and went to another archive. Way way quicker, let me tell you. That sucks... because I don't have time to wait. Maybe I should start knitting ;) (/*end rant)
And see, the rant helped. All open now :)) *phew*
Loved Buffy's comment about the eyes. That's one he didn't expect to hear.
Neither her other comment. Her mouth works too quickly for her brain, huh? I guess being around William makes it hard to think for Buffy ;))
Looking forward to more (as always). Not the angst, but the new chapter. :)

Date: 07/29/2008 - 04:32 pm Title: Thirteen
Loved the chapter! Got a bit worried there for a moment, thought Buffy would screw things up completely. Maybe she still will, the night's not over yet. Hope not, though. *lol* Can't wait for more.

Date: 07/29/2008 - 01:56 pm Title: Thirteen
*breathes a sigh of relief* I'm so glad Buffy's big mouth didn't ruin the evening, and I'm happy Buffy regretted her thoughtless remark as soon as she said it. Wonderful chapter!

Date: 07/29/2008 - 11:35 am Title: Thirteen
Sometimes I just want to stick a sock in Buffy's mouth. LOL I liked Will's response, it's different than what we usually get when Buffy plays the jealousy card.
Fun, hot chapter -- up until you-know-who flapped her jaws. Really liked it, and I need a little drama with my stories to make them truly enjoyable. :)
Author's Response: Thanks. I figured the obvious route would be some kind of possessive sexual act, but that seemed more "Spike" than "William". :)

Date: 07/29/2008 - 04:57 am Title: Thirteen
Great chapter, looks like some feeling are starting to show. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Date: 07/29/2008 - 04:02 am Title: Thirteen
It's brilliant!! I'm loving this. Need more!! PLEASE PLEASE!!!

Date: 07/29/2008 - 03:57 am Title: Thirteen
*sigh* whats a spuffy story without angst:)
i'm loving it so far and can't wait for the next update:):)

Date: 07/29/2008 - 12:51 am Title: Thirteen
aargh! poor spike! but now that she knows how he reacts to the idea of someone else maybe she'll start to figure out what's going on? enjoying muchly
Author's Response: You'd think, right? Boy that poor girl is just clueless. :P

Date: 07/28/2008 - 11:23 pm Title: Thirteen
I am too lazy to sign in.....but I do have to say that I am sooo happy to see an update on this story. I absolutely love this one and can't wait to see what happens next. I hope you update soon.....

Date: 07/28/2008 - 10:28 pm Title: Thirteen
I saw it coming all right. I just hope that Will tells Buffy his true feelings for her or at least Buffy realizes it. I don't think that is likely because they are both clueless. Great story.