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Reviewer: claire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2008 - 08:39 pm Title: Sixteen

It's great to see this fic updated. I'd wondered about it a couple of days ago. I think this is my first time reviewing (bad reader!), but I've really been enjoying the story so far--it's so sweet! Personally, I hope someone gives Buffy a clue pretty quickly, because Will is too wonderful for words and deserves a break.

Reviewer: Pixiecorn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2008 - 07:46 pm Title: Sixteen

I hope Buffy realizes that Will is serious and we all know theirs going to more sex involved haha..... I hope you update again soon because i can't wait to see what happens next. Awesome chapter btw:)

Reviewer: jeanieofoz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2008 - 07:31 pm Title: Sixteen

you are the writer you tell me how long she will continue to be a dumb blonde about her hunk.

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2008 - 07:18 pm Title: Sixteen

Buffy will probably remain oblivious ,that's just her .
Loved the chappy, very hot.. Will is so sweet and sexy and Buffy just won't see that he loves her and she loves him too. Silly Buffy ;P

Loved the line ...he's from British. Is that near LA?
I think so .LMAO

More soon please , can't wait to see what happens.*grin*

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2008 - 07:04 pm Title: Sixteen

I wonder if Buffy is "in love with him. Will is hot and turns her on in bed but considers herself a nympho and not someone in love and turned on by him for that reason. . And she does wonder how he feels.

Unfortunately, I am afraid it will be Buffy dating someone else, breaking Will's heart because he won't be able to tell her she is much more than a friend to him.. before she realizes what he truely means to her.. Then will it be too late? Hoping for a very Spuffy ending..

Might be wrong.. you may have the story going in another direction. Loving the story.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2008 - 06:49 pm Title: Sixteen

Really love this fic! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2008 - 06:34 pm Title: Sixteen

You want a review? I can give you one :)
Enjoyed the read.
Buffy's explanation were William was from was cute :)
Maybe after some lessons Buffy will be able to say what she wants. William is a good teacher. :D

Author's Response: Yeah, I want a review. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: Braydie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2008 - 02:23 am Title: Fifteen

Wow. I am so glad that I stumbled upon this storey! I love it! The characters are incredibly well written, and the dialogue had me laughing out loud quite a few times. I love the fact that this is an AU, but it parallels the characters' attitudes toward sexuality in the Whedonverse so well....

I have a feeling there's going to be some messiness when their feelings finally come out, and I can't wait to read how you write it!

I'm definitely keeping up with this one! More...? Please...?*

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2008 - 09:45 pm Title: Fifteen

Wow - what an update! Very happy to see too I might add. Hope you get lots of lovely reviews so you'll post again soon!

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2008 - 04:14 pm Title: Fifteen

Yay, I was so happy to see a new chapter of this story! And I loved it! *lol* More please...

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2008 - 01:02 pm Title: Fifteen

Loved Buffy's teasing about the flashing. And that William couldn't understood that Buffy loved the books too. :-D
Hot :)) And William almost confessed his love... this is his deepest secret, huh?
Loved to see the update and hope for more :)

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2008 - 12:50 pm Title: Fifteen

Loved the great conversation and the hot sex. ;) Wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: hollyp Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2008 - 06:22 am Title: Fifteen

love it...

post more please??

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2008 - 05:18 am Title: Fifteen

Great chapter, I love how Spike mocks his uncle's books when in the regular universe for Buffy and Spike it's their relationship to a T. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2008 - 03:20 am Title: Fifteen

An update - yippee - and what a good one it was. William is managing to keep his feelings under wraps but surely it won't be long before he slips up? Neither Buffy or William are making any real mention of lessons anymore they are just making love and oh my god how hot was that? Loved it, especially William's little speech about the woman he loves. Just one more thing, is there really an Uncle Simon?

Reviewer: Jessy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2008 - 01:32 am Title: Fifteen

totally awsome!! please write more!

Reviewer: Vanilla Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2008 - 07:25 pm Title: Fifteen

GOD I love this fic. Like, seriously, I saw there was an update and SQUEALED. And it was totally worth the wait. I love the slow evolution of their relationship---sure it's not following the standard pattern, but it works for them. I love seeing how Buffy is slowly realizing there's something deeper going on with Will. And the sex! Oh, so hot. Wonderful, wonderful chapter.

Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2008 - 07:19 pm Title: Fifteen

Loved it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hot chapter

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2008 - 07:02 pm Title: Fifteen

Awesome chapter! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2008 - 06:40 pm Title: Fifteen

YAY, LOVED THE UPDATE, THANX!!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. im glad that theyre getting closer and i wish that he would tell her that he loves her. i really hope that buffy develops deeper feelings for him and doesnt leave him. also i hope that everything works out well and that they end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX

Reviewer: dampersandspoons Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2008 - 01:44 am Title: Fourteen

I'm so loving where you're taking us! This is highly entertaining and I feel underlying angst but it's so mild that I almost missed it. If you plan on something major, I'll love that, too. After all, I'm a total slut for angst.

And...if you're still looking for a beta, send me an email.

Reviewer: dampersandspoons Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2008 - 03:23 am Title: Nine

So I just started reading this and had to stop at this chapter.

GOOD LORD, WOMAN! WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO MY LOINS? *pants* *gasps* *wheezes*

Ok, phew....off to read more.

Reviewer: gemma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2008 - 06:49 pm Title: Fourteen

loved it please let there be more i want to know wat happens

Reviewer: quirks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2008 - 01:44 am Title: Fourteen

it's great to see them being friends, and have buffy be all protective of william. poor boy - he's had it bad for a while now. and go buffy with the temptress role. great chapter. also, the love comment felt perfectly natural to me.

Reviewer: maddonna001 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2008 - 03:18 am Title: Fourteen

hey,I had a lot of catching up to do re many of stories lately,but I gotta tell u,this one still makes my heart smile

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