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Reviewer: DawnofMe Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 07:26 pm Title: Bite Me


“Wot can I say, I’m not a nice man,” snapped Spike. To his dismay she just chuckled at him.

Loved it : )

Great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens when Buffy shows up. : )

Oh, and Brad. LOL!

Author's Response: Loved idea of stroppy spike just getting laughed at - bless him!! :)

Reviewer: DawnofMe Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 07:20 pm Title: It's Too Much...

“I can’t even tell when I’m having a piss. Oh Jesus. Does that mean…? Will I be able to...? No, don’t answer that, I don’t want to know.” He squeezed his eyes shut as more tears pricked at them.

“As I said before, it’s still early yet, and things may still improve from what they are now. I’m sure that you will still be able to father children but …”

“I won’t be able to shag, will I?”

You are just sooooo mean to my Spike : ( Bad Mabel. Taking his manhood away. : )

Author's Response: What can I say...? I break him but always put him back together again! :)

Reviewer: DawnofMe Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 07:13 pm Title: Consequences


""He turned to go but was stopped as a strong hand grasped his arm.""
I liked this line and the fact that later you write that he still had a hold on the man. Shows the emotions that Angel was feeling with out telling us.

Very good.

Author's Response: thanks for picking that out - means a lot when you do :)

Reviewer: DawnofMe Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 07:09 pm Title: It'll Soon Be Time...

I'm reading this now, so while you sleep, I'm spamming your email box with reviews. I'm sure that will really bother you. LOL!

Anyways, I love how Angel is so concerned for Spike. Nice to see.



Author's Response: hi Dawn!! such a nice thing to wake up to! thank you! thought it was about time A started to look out for his grandchilde :)

Reviewer: lilladybug Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 05:05 pm Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

Ahhh! Killing me with the ellipses at the end!!


Love how you capture Spike's personality...he's moody at times, but always the same guy inside :D

Author's Response: hey there lilladybug! how ya doing? I just love leaving things hanging!! lol!! thanks for saying that I'm capturing spike's personality :) it means a lot!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 04:26 pm Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

Bugger I've read from the beginning and now I've finished and - I NEED MORE. Love it.

Author's Response: What a day to start reading!!! Ends on a cliffhanger!! Glad you've found it and not sure if you're familiar with me or not but i update v quickly so you won't have long to wait!! :) thanks for letting me know!!

Reviewer: maddonna001 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 02:33 pm Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

Oh man, you can`t do this to me! More! Please! I`m begging! What about the prophecy???

Author's Response: *chuckles evilly* did I tell you that I'm going away for a week...? Just kidding - more when it's back from my lovely beta Carol!! :) Couldn't resist it! :)

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 12:54 pm Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

that was an evil ending!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Hi shelly - i know!! But I just couldn't resist it! it's been so long since we had a really good cliffie!! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 11:25 am Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

Yeah you're a busy bee and so is your beta :)
Wouldn't want to have it in another way :))
Eating breakfast together is always better, it tastes better.
And another misunderstanding out of the way. Good that at last Buffy treats him normal :)
Evil cliffhanger though even if I can guess what's that about.

Author's Response: You know me too well and there have been plenty of clues along the way:) It was important to get B and A being normal with him - he's used to spats and banter and being humoured just demeans him! :) More soon! x

Reviewer: serinah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 11:22 am Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

I was actually talking about Angel moving around the building during the day time. I remember S's room being shady and the main entrance in the shade, but A had to go through corridor's to Moira's and then to the lunch with her, etc. The possibility of it makes me think that Rosendale is really a dim castle. Because all modern buildings have corridors and cafeterias with large windows. Though I guess, it does not really matter. Now, I REALLY want to know what Angel and Giles discovered! :)
Spuffy, I don't think Brad did not notice, he was just discreet.

Author's Response: Think Brad has probably seen it all before!! LOL!! In my head (being English) the old part of Rosedene is like old country house which would have dark corridors - it's not a modern building and so Angel's safe as long as he watches his step!! LOL!! Won't keep you waiting too long I promise!! *hugs*

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 07:53 am Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

Ohhhh, evil cliffie! Update soon please, I really liked the interaction between all three of them and loved how Spike had even his last doubts about why Buffy is with him dispelled!

More now, please!!!
*hugs*

Author's Response: It's been a while since i had a good cliffie so i shall savour it for a moment!! *evil grin* But won't keep you waiting too long! :) *hugs*

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 07:17 am Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

ho come on!!! a) you didnt updated yesterday!! then you finish the chapter like that!!! what the hell were you thinking?!?!?!?!?!?!? i want more!! (so much more!!) . anyway angel laughing.... that a sight that i didnt think ill see!! .
"poor" spike having buffy give him a massage! lol. i just dont understand how brad didnt see the.... affects of buffy touching him! :)

Author's Response: Sorry about missing yesterday! didn't get time to do it! working:( I thikn spike turned over just in time to avoid Brad spotting his problem!! :) Just couldn't resist the cliffie!! :)

Reviewer: Serinah Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 03:32 am Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

oh, god, update, ye sod!! lol. Anyway, I'm afraid I've been betaing all day straight yesterday, so sorry about this but I have 2 comments.
1- I'm not sure that Daniel using words 'attempted suicide' in front of Spike was professional. Unless he did it on purpose to make him feel sth or other. But even then it should be Moira's work I think. But maybe it just shows what I know.
2 - I expected the Rosendale building would have plenty of large windows. Or at least normal windows. How come Angel is there during the day and walking around as he wishes?
On that note let me assure you that you are still a good writer and I love your stories. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: hi there! Fair comment about Daniel the doctor - but just figured he was a professional and was just commenting on what had happened but yeah - not big with the bedside manner! lol!! As for Rosedene - the rooms are huge like an english stately home so have lots of dark spaces and corners! and i did say that Spike's room was at the front and the front is shaded in the morning so that would help the dimness. sorry i didn't say that Angel sat in a shadey spot - just took that as a given, bad writer to presume anything! that's also why he can get in in the mornings without trouble as mentioned in previous chapter.glad you still think i'm okay! :) thanks for your comments!!! See you in the next chapter I hope!! :) couldn't resist the cliffie!!

Reviewer: puska Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 03:08 am Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

naww Mable! You cant leave us there! Love it as usual.

Author's Response: Sorry puska! Couldn't resist -thanks for saying that you loved it! *big grin*

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 02:44 am Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

You just had to leave it at a cliffy didn't you. Loved it like always.

Author's Response: *big grin* for letting me know that you loved it!! sorry about the cliffie - just couldn't resist! LOL!!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2008 - 07:56 am Title: Dreaming eh?

YAYYYYYY!!! *hugs and peppers you with kisses* You just made be feel a whole lot better! Thank you!!!
*hugs*

Author's Response: the timing of this chapter was good so it can cheer you up when you're feeling bit ill!! :) Glad you liked it!! *big hugs* take care of yourself! xx

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2008 - 07:06 pm Title: Dreaming eh?

Whew , that sizzled Mabel , so glad their finally together , can't wait for chapter 21, as for it seeming realistic as far as attempted suicide goes ,this is fantasy not real life i read Spuffy to get away from RL . It was great Mabel.

Author's Response: thanks for that Jo! :) Glad you liked it! Won't keep you waiting too long for more!!

Reviewer: Bryntrev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2008 - 03:59 pm Title: Dreaming eh?

Yay! FINALLY some lovin'! and Spike seems to be getting back to himself. Hopefully he'll be getting better physically too before you torture him some more *you evil woman you*! I'm just wondering if Angel is going to be so supportive of the new couple even though he's the one that brought Buffy back?


Author's Response: Hi Bryntrev! *you evil woman you* - you know me sooo well!! lol. Glad you liked the chapter - thought he deserved a break! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2008 - 03:56 pm Title: Dreaming eh?

Clever to have the door's lock so high. Effective :)
*grins* They made up again. And maybe Spike does indeed believe Buffy now :))
Carol was fun.

Author's Response: I liked Carol too - named in honour of probably the hardest working beta ever - I've written over 360,000 words since Aug and she's beta'd the lot!! Bless her!! Thanks for letting me know that you liked it :)

Reviewer: Michelle D. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2008 - 11:12 am Title: Dreaming eh?

Sweet!

Author's Response: glad you liked it!! :)

Reviewer: puska Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2008 - 08:21 am Title: Dreaming eh?

*grins* dreaming indeed, lol. This was as per usual, just perfect. I love the intereaction between Buffy and Spike, its great! Love it!

Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know puska - was a bit nervous of that chapter! Really appreciate it! :)

Reviewer: serinah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2008 - 05:38 am Title: Dreaming eh?

well, I got to read 2 chapters straight this time. What a pleasure! I'm glad that S feels relatively well, but to tell you frankly I find it rather unrealistic. Ppl after suicide do not usually bounce back so well, even if the love of their life gets returned to them. Shame and feeling of worthlessness intensifies after the attempt. Still, I can't wait to read how S gets on his feet again.

Author's Response: Watch this space! He responded to the love offered but that's not to say he's feeling all puppies and daffodils about it! :) Just figured the guy deserved a bit of sex! lol!

Reviewer: akarinacj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2008 - 02:51 am Title: Dreaming eh?

This was a really fantastic chapter. Please update soon. Can´t wait.!!!!!

Author's Response: Hi there! thank you so much for letting me know that you liked it! :) Really appreciate it!

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2008 - 01:22 am Title: Dreaming eh?

lol !
i want to dream with spike too!! lol
it just so funny! couldnt he think of something more believable ?!
any way it was good to see them back to normal (and normal for buffy and spike is fighting and.... dreaming!)
keep it up!
p.s
its nice that you answer our review!

Author's Response: Cheers Spuffy - I strongly feel that if someone takes the time to review that the author should reply - it's only polite! And i love doing it!! (I don't leave reviews for authors who don't respond) Glad you liked it! I loved making him feel a bit embarrassed with Carol! LOL

Reviewer: maddonna001 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2008 - 01:18 am Title: Dreaming eh?

that was smokin` hot! Can`t wait to see what`s next. Really liked nurse Carol`s wink. Maybe there is a chance for Buffy playing naughty nurse in a sexy outfit? LOL

Author's Response: thought you might like that!! Tee hee!! Thanks for reviewing! I liked making Spike blush!! lol!! :)

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