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Reviewer: puska Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2008 - 08:09 am Title: Baby Steps

that was great! Its so nice to see Spike and Buffy happy together. And this mysterious stranger, hmmm. I wonder who it is..
Great stuff luv!

Author's Response: cheers Puska! Glad you liked it! All will be revealed fairly soon....:)

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2008 - 02:36 am Title: Baby Steps

aww how sweet . i love it ! and good for spike! he really made a progress! so am i going to know who this mysterious "peeping Tom" is anytime soon?? cause i know he isnt human (i mean ha growl)

Author's Response: When my horse is naughty - trust me I can growl and I promise that I'm human tee hee!! but as for the figure.....who knows? Oh right - I do but you'll have to wait a little while longer!!! Tee hee!! Thanks Spuffy :)

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2008 - 01:42 am Title: Baby Steps

That was sweet, and I can't wait to see who these figures are.

Author's Response: You won't be waiting long!!! Thakns for reviewing - much appreciated as always! :)

Reviewer: Terapsina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 06:36 pm Title: See Yer Later, Peaches

Wow, 25 chapters in a month, I ordinary read only finished stories, but I have read some of you're other works and loved those.
So I will read this one, and gotta say that you're first chapter was incredible I can practically see Spike really freaking out.
Now about those many chapters, keep on going and don't leave us waiting for too long.
Tootles!

Author's Response: thank you so much for leaving such a lovely review! That really keeps me scribbling away! I am the queen of quick updates I think! Work's interfering a little but hopefully will still be able to write three chapters a week at least - I have no life!! :) Thanks again and keep on letting me know! :)

Reviewer: puska Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 02:44 am Title: Peaches Has Been Busy

I love the banter between the three of them. It sounds like something straight out of the show. Love it.

And good luck with the horsey's. I have some myself and they're great fun! (though sitting up with them must be tiring)

Author's Response: Glad you liked it :) I love writng dialogue :) The sitting up does seem so bad if they foal - it passes the time and keeps you awake - but when they don't it really knocks me for six!! :)

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 09:31 pm Title: Peaches Has Been Busy

Great chapter Mabel , really enjoyed it. It's that shanky ho Dru , isn't it? She spotted them and has now follwed them, It wasn't the disgusting Immortal because he/she said Spike , the immortal (Pooey) would have said Buffy name, so it is Dru right ? Oh what am i doing , you won't tell me anyway . I'm anxiously waiting for the next chapter so those foal's better hurry up and foal already ( I bet there adorable) so you can write some more. Til next time.

Author's Response: Hi Jo! glad you liked the chapter :) You're right that I won't tell you who or should that be what the stalker is!! :) Thanks for reviewing. BTW some of the foals are cute but one I'm sure is the spawn of the devil!! Tee hee!! *hugs*

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 03:14 pm Title: Peaches Has Been Busy

OK I'm officially stumped with who the mystery being is - and don't you just love that?!! Loved it as ever.

Author's Response: You're stumped...what about me...? Tee hee! Seriously though, you won't find out for a little while!! Glad you liked the chapter and thanks for letting me know :)

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 01:42 pm Title: Peaches Has Been Busy

OK, WHO IS THE FIGURE FOLLOWING THEM????

*pouts* I knew it wouldn't all be hearts and roses now on, wicked woman!

Hope RL clears up some,
*hugs*

Author's Response: thanks sotia! I love having my readers nervous! Will update asap!! but will the next chapter tell you who or what that is....? Tee hee! *sniggers evilly*

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 12:58 pm Title: Peaches Has Been Busy

love the chapter!
and you better update soon!!! i wanna know who is it!!! (the one that folowing him)

Author's Response: Hey spuffy! Will update as soon as I can but not sure that you'll find your answer in the next one!! Tee hee!!! ooh the suspense! *sniggers evilly* thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 12:13 pm Title: Peaches Has Been Busy

Glad to see Spike enjoying the water / doing better. I wouldn't have thought to worry that the pain gets less but he's right, they told them it was a sign for the healing. Hopefully it only means he is almost healed.
Angel did a lot of work; it will be good for Spike to be able on his own (=wheelchair) at the Hyperion. The fooling around (duster, wheelchair) was fun.
But I wonder who did follow them? Must be a human.
~ Looking forward to find out who it is (and to read more).

Author's Response: Thanks Cordyk! All will be revealed but maybe not right away!! lol!!! Thanks for your reviews always look forward to them :)

Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 11:27 am Title: Peaches Has Been Busy

Angel is being such a sweety. Can you play matchmaker for him? He needs a nice girl. I absolutely love the Spuffy domestic bliss they've go going on although I am a little nervous about this mysterious new arrival.

Author's Response: Glad you're liking it! I have plans for Angel! More about that later! As for the mystery person/creature/thing...lol!! Time will tell - but nervous is just how I like my readers!! Thanks for taking the time to review Francine - it's always appreciated :)

Reviewer: puska Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2008 - 11:33 pm Title: Making A Splash

aww, i love that last line. Its good to see Spike regaining his confidence. Great stuff hon!

Author's Response: Thanks puska! Had to nip back to see what the last line was! tee hee! Yes B has always been able to push spike's buttons!!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2008 - 03:45 pm Title: Making A Splash

Another beautiful update! Keep them coming honey! I was delighted at how Buffy helped him overcome his fear even as I felt sorry for him for bearing the weight of his dad's loss on his shoulders!

*hugs*

Author's Response: thanks Sotia, glad you liked it :) I like saying why Spike's dad wasn't around - did it in UV too! more soon! *hugs back*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2008 - 01:05 pm Title: Making A Splash

Oh that ... Brad wanted to take Spike swimming. That would in fact help his legs without hurting Spike. Didn't expect Spike's past with the water. It takes courage to go in the water with that fear (bad memories).
Fun, Buffy teasing Spike with the swimming trunks *gg*
Enjoyed the read.

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it Cordyk! :) thought of Spike in surfer dude shorts tickled me!! personally i wish he'd opted for the black pair!! lol! More soon! :)

Reviewer: Bryntrev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2008 - 11:26 am Title: Making A Splash

Great chapter, as always!
Loved your use of canon. Explaining Spike's fear of water and then having Buffy helping him with her own fear. I especially liked how you used the sub - that *so* sounds like somthing Angel would have done. (plus one of my all-time favorite scenes is when Spike does the "You can just swab my deck" LOL and God he looks so adorable in that uniform... hmmm....) Okay... I'm digressing... back to review...
Also the First Evil "drowning" - had to be a reason they did that since vampires can't drown.
*hugs*

Author's Response: I nearly forgot about the submarine ! Then when i remembered nearly scrapped the chapter! then managed to work it in - Spike with black hair looked sooo different didn't he? So glad you liked it! :) Thakns for letting me know.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2008 - 10:15 am Title: Making A Splash

Fab chapter and Buffy knows exactly how to manipulate Spike into getting her way - loved it.

Author's Response: Buffy plays poor spike like a fiddle - but he wouldn't have it any other way! :) thanks for taking the time to review :)

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2008 - 05:25 pm Title: Making A Splash

Loved that, the way his dad died was interesting and I liked the aquaphobia.

Author's Response: Glad that you loved it! Thought it would be good to show why his dad wasn't around when he was turned! :) thanks for letting me know!

Reviewer: puska Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2008 - 07:56 am Title: I Can...I Can...

hee, whats brad up to?, im intrigued. Great stuff


Author's Response: Won't keep you waiting long to find out! Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2008 - 12:34 am Title: I Can...I Can...

ho nice! its good to see spike getting back to his cocky self! :)

Author's Response: glad you liked it:) Thanks for letting me know!

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2008 - 06:45 pm Title: I Can...I Can...

Loved how cute they were, more please.

Author's Response: your wish is my command!! more later today! :) Thanks

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2008 - 04:43 pm Title: I Can...I Can...

Awe :) Good to see Spike so happy again, having more hope now. And being able to move his feet :)
Now I wonder what Brad has planned to help Spike. Looking forward to find out.

Author's Response: Im mending him slowly but surely!! lol! thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: maddonna001 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2008 - 11:26 am Title: I Can...I Can...

Hahaha, so typical Spike! The first thing he does when he can move his legs is to shag Buffy senseless :-)

I hope Brad has some cool ideas which will make our vampire guy hot ;-)

Keep on the good work hun!

Author's Response: cheers Maddonna! Yes...Spike ...got to love him!! lol!

Reviewer: DawnofMe Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2008 - 11:12 am Title: I Can...I Can...

Aw, leave us hanging why don't you : ) Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: what can i say? I just can't resist it when opportunities like that pop up! lol! Thanks Dawn :)

Reviewer: Bryntrev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2008 - 10:57 am Title: I Can...I Can...

I just know something bad is going to happen. Everything is going too well for our happy couple. I wonder what Brad has up his sleeve.... :)


Author's Response: God I really have you all not trusting me don't I? lol!! just how I like it tee hee - will try not to keep you waiting too long! :)

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2008 - 09:59 am Title: I Can...I Can...

Yayyyyyy! I love that things are constantly improving! Still waiting for the other shoe to drop though :( Please don't make them go through any more pain, his efforts to get better are straining enough!

Can't wait to see what Brad told Buffy!

*hugs*

Author's Response: Now would I be that mean? Don't answer that! lol! *big hugs*

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