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Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 12:31 pm Title: Gone!

No, no, my Spike is gone. Cries for my Spike. Maybe whoever has him doesn't want to hurt him. Maybe whoever has him just wanted him. Wishful thinking I know. But Spike has come so far with his healing. Don't know if he can take a beating. I just hope Dru isn't behind this. Cause writers always make it Dru. I hope it is someone different. Not to say that I won't like your story if it is Dru.

I love Brad in this story. He seems to care for Spike a lot. They have form a great friendship. I always love to read a story where Spike makes a new friend. I guess because he just seem so lonely on Buffy and Angel sometimes. My heart went out to him.

Author's Response: Hi there! Glad you're enjoying it and that you like Brad! He's a good guy. :) cna't say who's got Spike just yet but it won't be long before you find out. I promise! if you haven't read my fic Changing Lives give it a go - Spike makes a good friend in that one too!! :) Sorry for the shameful hint to read it!! :)

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 11:17 am Title: Gone!

I want them to find him stat! *pouts* Only good thig is if whoever has Spike wanted him dead they'd prolly have killed him on the spot, so there's hope... Please update soon!!!

*hugs*

PS“God, you sound like one of those self-sacrificing heroes in a bad action movie. I have the weekend off and since this is a hotel I’m presuming that you’ll have a room I can use?”
GO MOIRA!!!

Author's Response: Yeah i'm glad you picked up on that line! Moira a strong woman!! Won't keep you waiting too long!!! :) *big hugs*

Reviewer: maddonna001 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 11:01 am Title: Gone!

Just read the 3 last updates in a row and I have to say I didn`t expect this to happen but it`s mind blowing! I just hope Spike won`t get hurt again, he suffered too much already. I don`t like seeing him weak.

Author's Response: Hi there Maddonna!!! Love that you didn't see it coming! Can't say any more just yet!! Tee hee!!! *hugs*

Reviewer: Kandrin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 10:53 am Title: Gone!

You are *evil evil evil*!!!!!
It must be Dru.
Update soon. Please.
*hugs*

Author's Response: I'm taking *evil* as a compliment!! Tee hee!! Won't keep you waiting long but as for whether it's Dru or not...? Time will tell!! :) *hugs back*

Reviewer: puska Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 08:26 am Title: Gone!

Good lord woman! I'm gone for a little while and this is what happens!! They have to find Spike!
Great stuff!

Author's Response: You should know me by now puska - turn your back for a second and all hell could break out!! Tee hee! :)

Reviewer: Michelle D. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 07:59 am Title: Gone!

Great chapter - I love it!

Author's Response: Hi michelle D - glad you loved it!! More soon! :)

Reviewer: Avalon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 07:35 am Title: Gone!

Oooooh, who took Spike???

Can't wait to see who it was and what the "Normals" find out ;)

Author's Response: Hi Avalon! You'll have to wait to find out!! tee hee!! :) thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 04:16 am Title: Out To Dinner

Evil cliffhanger, evil author!! It was all going too well wasn't it? Love it.

Author's Response: Hi Sam!! You really know me now!!! lol Glad you loved it :) I love cliffhangers!! tee hee!!!

Reviewer: Kandrin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 12:04 am Title: Out To Dinner

Oh.... you *evil woman*! I hope Spike is okay.
Liked the bickering between Spike and Angel - that seemed more like the two of them! :)
Looking forward to your next update!

Author's Response: hi Kandrin, thakns for reviewing!! I'm taking the whole *evil woman* thing as a compliment!!! LOL!!! I love writing bickering Angel and Spike! As even tho 'my' Angel is nicer to Spike there is no way that they'd not bicker!!! lol!!

Reviewer: Terapsina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2008 - 07:14 pm Title: Out To Dinner

Yay, problems. I know I shouldn't be too happy about that, but really - it is time to see Buffy in action. That is why we love this show so much anyway. Well that and Spike "dancing".
Who the heck kidnapped him? I know you wont tell, but just promise us you wont make him a vampire again.
And just so you know I like when people are dragged in this stuff, be a nice writer and let atleast one of those new friends find out. It doesn't have to be right now, but it just isn't a real AU without a new guy seeing some demon for the first time.
Finally, I am thrilled for your updates, you are the first writer I had the pleasure to find that gives updates so regularly.
I could go on... but that would probably drag you away from the stuff you are doing right now - to get to the chapter we (I'm sure I'm not alone in this) are waiting for so impatiently.

Author's Response: Hi Terapsina! Thanks for such a great review! Glad you're happy about the regular updates even tho they've not quite hit the daily target of late with work being a bit busy. :) Can't tell you much apart from I like the way you're thinking.....!!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2008 - 05:44 pm Title: Out To Dinner

OMG!!! That stupid dark figure's got Spike!!!

Aaaaaaand we're back to the batting of eyelashes!!! They have to find him soon and get him back! And he could be hurt again!

Fix this Mabel *bats eyelashes more rapidly than ever before*
*hugs*

Author's Response: Hi Sotia! I thought that this might be hazardous to eyelashes!!!! Tee hee!! Will update soon I promise!! *hugs back* in desperate hope the eyelashes will survive!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2008 - 04:56 pm Title: Out To Dinner

And again: Ch. 27
Awe, Spike tried very hard :)) I think he was simply to stubborn to give up now that he has come so far. *g* And Moira will like that Angel is invited too (as the others will going out instead of Buffy cooking).
Oh my and then I wanted to write how wonderful the dinner went. *sigh*
It was the man that followed them, right? I hope you can update soon after leaving us with such a cliffhanger.

Author's Response: Won't keep you waiting too long Cordyk!!! At leastthey had an enjoyable dinner!! Tee hee!!! More soon and thanks for reviewing!! :)

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2008 - 03:56 pm Title: Out To Dinner

Why do I have the feeling that whoever has him( I think Dru) is going to vampasize him again. Hope they find him before that happens.

Author's Response: Hi Jo!! You'll just have to read the next couple of chapters to find out! :) Thanks for reviewing!!! *hugs*

Reviewer: serinah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2008 - 03:35 pm Title: Out To Dinner

You evil, evil witch!!! That is the only thing I have to say right now 'coz I simply have no other words. You evil, evil witch, you! You know what you have to do! *pointing her finger at your computer*

Author's Response: I'm cackling evilly as i write this!!! Got to sit up tonight again with foaling mare and no access to computers there!!! Will update tomorrow eve UK time!! *grins*

Reviewer: Dawnofme Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2008 - 02:56 pm Title: Out To Dinner

Oh, no!

I loved this very in character line of Angels: “My tie’s not boring,” muttered Angel, looking at it.

Author's Response: I got a good visual of Angel holding the end of his tie up as he muttered as i wrote it!! Tee hee!! More soon! *hugs*

Reviewer: Dawnofme Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2008 - 02:46 pm Title: Baby Steps

Loved the end of this chapter with Spike going on about his past and Buffy falling asleep. Nice domestic moment.

I'm thinking I know who's lurking in the shadows.

Author's Response: I just thought he has so may memories of his past to tell her! Glad you liked it! If you are right - i'll give you a cookie!! lol! :)

Reviewer: Avalon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2008 - 02:36 pm Title: Out To Dinner

Arggggggggggggggggggggg! That has to be the MOST ebol cliffhanger EVER!!!!! *pounds head on desk*

Can't wait for the next chapter :P

Author's Response: Hi Avalon - sending headache tablets to you as i write!! Won't keep you waiting too long!! :)

Reviewer: jeanieofoz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2008 - 08:17 am Title: Baby Steps

who is the suspicious and dark stranger? please don't let them hurt spuffy!

Author's Response: hi there! Brace yourself there is trouble ahead! Can't say anymore just now!! Tee hee!! thank you very much for reviewing :)

Author's Response: hi there! Brace yourself there is trouble ahead! Can't say anymore just now!! Tee hee!! thank you very much for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2008 - 01:15 pm Title: Baby Steps

Great chapter. Who is that figure. It is after Spike.

I want a Spike. Pouts, iz jealous of Buffy

Author's Response: You and me both being jelous of B!! Tee hee!! I'd share spike with you honest!! lol!! Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2008 - 12:35 pm Title: Baby Steps

Well I'm always looking forward to read the new chapter(s) :))
Awe, little steps but he made it :) Good to see him walking again even it wasn't far.
And even better that this old misunderstanding is out of the way now. :)

Author's Response: Yes, had to clear up the Immortal thing!!! tee hee!! Thanks cordyk!! :)

Reviewer: Bryntrev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2008 - 11:32 am Title: Baby Steps

Having a hard time picturing Spike willingly using a walker! LOL
And, like most of the fans on this site, hated "The Girl in Question" (did the writers actually think that that we would buy that Buffy would move on that quickly?)
Kind of a slow chapter, but thanks for giving us a more tolerable reason for the whole "Immortal" thing! :)
See you next update!

Author's Response: I think he sees it as better than the chair!!! But sure he won't be a fan of it soon!!! Had to get the Immortal thing out of the way - i'm sure they only wrote it like that cos SMG wouldn't guest in Angel!!! lol!! Thanks for reviewing!!! :)

Author's Response: I think he sees it as better than the chair!!! But sure he won't be a fan of it soon!!! Had to get the Immortal thing out of the way - i'm sure they only wrote it like that cos SMG wouldn't guest in Angel!!! lol!! Thanks for reviewing!!! :)

Reviewer: Bryntrev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2008 - 11:15 am Title: Peaches Has Been Busy

I'm still having trouble getting used to this Angel!
I do like that he is trying to help Spike and Buffy though.
I love how you blend canon/non-canon and your character dialogue. Your miror reference (Spike saying how Buffy would worry about her ass looking was dead on! LOL) and then the Thanksgiving reference. Having Buffy driving the Viper. Spike's coat in the closet - and it being too clean.
Great chapter as always. :)
Hope your mares/foals are doing well. I'm sure that is exhausting work! :)

Author's Response: Well, I'm not a big Angel fan so I decided to make him nice!! lol!! Sonce he had to be around so much!! Plus Spike and Buffy are all he has left!! Glad you liked all the references to canon! The mares are hanging on to their babies this yr - keep going over due which means we have to sit up more often!! If floors me but will soon be over!! :) thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2008 - 10:42 am Title: Baby Steps

Oh come ooooon, who is that figure? And growling? If it's Harm wanting him back I might giggle uncontrollably...

LOVE how he's improving step by step (literally this time). More soon please! *bats eyelashes*

*hugs*

Author's Response: Oh no!! don't lay the responsibility for the eyelashes on me again!!! *chuckles* Won't keep you waiting too long!! *big hugs* :)

Reviewer: Michelle D. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2008 - 10:07 am Title: Baby Steps

I just caught up with all the new chapters - spring break here last week and we had company so I didn't have any reading time. Great as always - I'm looking forward to finding out who the mystery person is.

Author's Response: Hi Michelle D hope you had a great time!! Glad you liked what you had waiting for you! :) Thanks for letting me know!

Reviewer: serinah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2008 - 08:50 am Title: Baby Steps

Somehow my fav sentence in this chapter is: "There was a horse this one time and …” :) Thanks for updating.

Author's Response: Hi serinah - I liked that sentence too so it made me smile when you noted it! :) thanks for letting me know! :)

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