[Report This]Date: 03/14/2008 - 09:54 pm Title: Sometimes It Hurts
Hee, Love: “Amy?” Buffy said in surprise, her heart sinking that yet another person she knew was vamped. So much for the getting used to it all. “How’ve you been?”
“Dead. You?”
“Different dimension.”
“Ah.”
I also love the dialogue between Buffy and Willow. Really good dialogue in this fic
Author's Response: Thanks! Dialogue is my favorite part to write, I'm glad you're enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: 03/14/2008 - 09:36 pm Title: Who We Are
I like the dialogue.
Author's Response: Thanks, GDO! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: 03/14/2008 - 03:39 pm Title: Unwell
The interaction between Buffy and William continues to be wonderful. Fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, MidnightGirl, I'm happy you're enjoying the couple's interaction! I have a lot of fun writing it, so I'm glad it's coming off well. Glad you liked the chapter!
[Report This]Date: 03/14/2008 - 10:22 am Title: Unwell
Well, that's interesting. What accounts for the, er, 'temporal fold'? And seriously, whose voice was Buffy hearing in her dream? I should probably be asking more important questions, but that one just keeps cutting to the front of the line.
I adored the clichéd spark. :) Not so keen on William running out on the poor girl, although I get why he did so.
Lovely chapter. :)
Author's Response: Ah the temporal fold. And the voice. And the multitude of other things I will probably confuse you with in chapters to come. All will be explained in good time. :) Aw, the spark, William was very afraid and does not handle confrontation well. Glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 03/14/2008 - 09:17 am Title: Unwell
I am pretty bad about getting out of my hole to write reviews but I really really love this and I can't wait to see more. This plot is so original, which seems to be pretty rare in Spuffy fanfic by now, and I just wanna know whats gonna happening next. thanks for writing!
Author's Response: I'm bad about reviews too, so any time you can crawl out of your hole to let me know what you think I'm immensely grateful. :) So so happy you like the story and think it's original, that's one of the best compliments I can get! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 03/14/2008 - 04:50 am Title: Unwell
Poor William. He wants her so badly it scares him.
And now that Buffy has finally gotten a taste of what she's been missing, I don't think she's going to let him keep thinking of her as a little girl.
He doesn't stand a chance.
Hopefully they have time.
Author's Response: The things working against them, time, location, age, confuse them both and scares poor William right off. And nope, Buffy will not stand for being seen as a kid...and she'll be showing him just how mature she is.
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2008 - 06:23 pm Title: Was It A Dream
ooh! I'm all caught up now. Vampire Giles was pretty scary. And poor William trying to sort out his/ not his Buffy.
I'm really enjoying this story!
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying it, quirks! Always fun to know I've captured a new reader. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 03/09/2008 - 10:49 pm Title: Who We Are
i'm completely fascinated by this story but it's past my bedtime so i'll come back to it another time. i'm really liking seeing the vamps as scoobies.
Author's Response: So happy you like it so much, quirks! Can't wait to hear what you think of the rest of it.
[Report This]Date: 03/08/2008 - 06:42 am Title: Was It A Dream
Read all ten chappies last nite, really very good, interested in what's gonna happen next. Update soon.
Author's Response: Oh, so glad I have a new reader, and glad you're enjoying it! Updating ASAP!
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2008 - 07:32 pm Title: Was It A Dream
OMG!! This chapter was awesome! I was sitting on the edge of my seat, feeling her pain, her suffering. It was so well written you deserve every nomination you get.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you loved it that much. More soon, keep reading! :)
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2008 - 06:05 pm Title: Was It A Dream
Buffy's dream was a bit confusing first till I saw the pattern.
Sounds as if both worlds will continue to exist, Buffy's old one or her new one. She has to decide then... big offer for her.
But a very hard decision. The new world isn't perfect either.
Author's Response: Just as confusing for Buffy too! And nope, neither world is at all perfect...some definite tough times ahead. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2008 - 10:15 am Title: Was It A Dream
You did really well with the turmoil in Buffy's mind - the headache is excruciating!
Author's Response: Thanks, Lou! Glad her confusion and pain is coming through the way I want it to!
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2008 - 06:32 am Title: Was It A Dream
Poor Buffy. Luckily William's there for her. Really liked the way you had written the dream. Looking forward to next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Pet! Glad you enjoyed the dream sequence, it took a lot of rewriting to get juuuust right.
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2008 - 04:04 am Title: Was It A Dream
The dream sequence was very intriguing, and I loved the closing scene. Good update!
Congrats on the noms!!! :D
Author's Response: Thanks MidnightGirl! I loved the closing scene too. Keep on reading!
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2008 - 03:34 am Title: Was It A Dream
loved the update and congrats on the nominations. well deserved
Author's Response: Thanks so much, jamies_lady! Glad you're enjoying.
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2008 - 01:58 am Title: Was It A Dream
Ah... she has to choose! Now I couldn't say for the world which dimension she would choose. But William is yummy here.. and I really like the difference in the persons you created.
Job well done I would say... please continue your story.
Oh... and I'm pretty proud of myself... I moved all my stuff on one day and could find working internet on the same day :).
Author's Response: Good job on the moving! I can't live without internet for more than a day haha. So glad you're still enjoying...and yes AU William is quite yummy...And I'll definitely be continuing!
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2008 - 01:29 am Title: Was It A Dream
Good chapter though it was a tad confusing, because the lines were so blurred between the two worlds. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Yep, definitely a confusing chapter, but glad you're still eager for more!
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2008 - 12:37 am Title: Was It A Dream
Wonderful - I felt as confused as Buffy with the flashes from one reality to the other. Both realities having such harsh happenings - I mean - either a lover who treats you like crap after your first time or dusting your mother! I really wonder who was telling her to choose... and what will she choose - its a braintwister. Still loving it all!
Author's Response: Thank you! I definitely wanted you to be as equally confused as our poor lost Buffy. Glad you're enjoying!
[Report This]Date: 03/06/2008 - 10:50 pm Title: Was It A Dream
Oh, that was wonderfully done. Such a jumble of memories - poor Buffy! :( Which will she choose? (I have my theories!) Who was it telling Buffy what she needs to do? Whatever will become of the other Buffy - and Spike? Lovely chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! Poor, poor Buffy definitely has some hard and angsty times again. I'd love to hear your theories though...always fun to see what people think might happen.
[Report This]Date: 03/03/2008 - 06:00 pm Title: Better Version Of Me
*phew* Glad William came for Buffy. That was just in time. And Buffy got in trouble for the second time now; maybe it's time to rethink and take indeed back-up with her.
I thought he would stay with her when he took care of the wounds. He really was worried sick to find her hurt. Ah he was fond of Buffy before. ~ I wonder if William's reaction when Buffy called him Spike was partly because of being jealous.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, cordykitten! Yeah, maybe our little Slayer shouldn't be so quick to wander off alone! Good call on a possible reason for William's reaction...keep reading, it'll definitely get brought up again!
[Report This]Date: 03/03/2008 - 01:15 pm Title: Better Version Of Me
A beautiful scene between them.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Lou. Glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: 03/03/2008 - 01:04 pm Title: Welcome to the Cruel World
Giles, Willow and Xander make a truly scary trio.
Author's Response: I'm glad they're frightening, it was my goal! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 03/03/2008 - 12:10 pm Title: Inside Wants Out
This is so fab! Really hooked on this! I hope you post more soon; I'd really like to learn some more about Buffy and William. Also... what is happening back in Buffy's world?
Author's Response: Thank you, Alissa! So happy you're enjoying the fic.
[Report This]Date: 03/03/2008 - 09:37 am Title: Better Version Of Me
Great story, can´t wait to see what happens next. I kind of curious to know what happened to the other Buffy and her reaction for Spike as a vampire.... (?).
Please update soon!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, akarinacj! Glad you're excited to see what's coming up. William's research is showing there may not really be this other Buffy...keep reading, things will become clearer soon!
Author's Response: Thanks, akarinacj! Glad you're excited to see what's coming up. William's research is showing there may not really be this other Buffy...keep reading, things will become clearer soon!
[Report This]Date: 03/03/2008 - 02:40 am Title: Better Version Of Me
William's talk with Buffy was very informative, loved the dialogue between the pair. Fantastic update!
Author's Response: Thanks, MidnightGirl! Glad their talk made things a little clearer for you. So happy you're reading!
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