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Date: 06/10/2008 - 08:34 am Title: Chapter 4

i am sooo loving ur story!

Author's Response: Pleased to hear it.

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Date: 06/10/2008 - 08:21 am Title: Chapter 3

this is gonna be awesome!

Author's Response: Glad you think so.

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Date: 06/10/2008 - 07:54 am Title: One

very interesting! i'm loving it already!

Author's Response: Thanks for your kind comments. More soon.

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2008 - 06:17 am Title: Chapter 8

Aliens??? Great chapter, wonderful action, lots of mystery. Hope you update soon : )

What is it about men that they feel free to rape young girls in a conflict? I really hate that - hope you make Finn suffer a horrible death for accepting that kind of thing. He is a wanker!

Author's Response: Thanks Heidi. Yes was treading a fine line there. Don't want it to appear that I think men/soldiers would normally commit such acts - only the 'Warrens' of this world. Finn's reaction is also ambiguous and I fell back on the Initiative's 'less than human' attitude as a partial excuse for his behaviour. Love that none of you have twigged to the 'aliens' yet.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2008 - 06:03 am Title: Chapter 8

what a place to leave it, cliff hanger extrodinaire. Loved this chapter. poor SPike, he was just protecting the females, don't blame himfor what he did. you imagination has taken us all to an amazing place. more please and hopefully soon, but this was well worth waiting for.

Author's Response: I do love a bit of primal protective Spike - dread to think what that says about me but then imagination and reality are two different things which is probably just as well. Will try my best to keep you interested.

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2008 - 04:08 am Title: Chapter 8

I was so happy to see this story again! I was actually just thinking about it the other day, and lo and behold. Definitely a gruesome chapter, however needed to start us into the main plot. Can't wait to see if Spike gets to see the footage and what answers he'll have. Surely Buffy and Spike still have a truce however fragile it might be now.

Author's Response: Yo B. Yes I was channeling my inner Stephen King a bit there. The Truce is taking a bit of a battering but all ( well some anyway) will be revealed soon.

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2008 - 02:59 am Title: Chapter 8

Kennedy, huh? Bitch (not you, her). I freakin' hate her. It looks like Giles is leaning toward torturing Spike for info. Crap.
So am I right in gathering that Anjell is evil and sacrificed Spike as a distraction? Or did I gather wrong? Orrrr, I should probably just hold tight and wait and see, huh? Well, as always, love this story. I was so happy to see an update! It was the first story I read tonight!


Author's Response: LOL - glad you liked my choice of villian. Love your stream of thoughts in the review too and that I've got you all worked up! More revelations very soon.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2008 - 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 8

What a mess.. So the human army reacted ... on assumptions..

Enjoying..

Author's Response: Will try to be even handed with good and bad on both sides. There will be a lot of jumping to conclusions for a while though. Thanks Pam.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2008 - 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 8

ERRR I CANT BELIEVE THOSE STUPID BASTARDS TRIED TO RAPE THEM AND I HOPE THAT SPIKE AND BUFFY GET BACK TOGETHER!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i really hope that they find that it wasnt them and that they fight who ever did it. also i hope that everything works out well and that spike and buffy end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX!!

Author's Response: EEK more capital letters! Yes, they were bastards. Yes, it will work out. Love a bit of angst but also love happy endings. Hang in there.

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2008 - 12:09 am Title: Chapter 7

Well, now that you mentioned it...no one has asked about her have they? You know, for me it may be b/c everything seems so original with your story that I'm waiting for you to introduce her to me. Even though you've used the same characters from the show you've changed the names and repositioned relationships (ie Dorn being Spike's sister) and surroundings in such an atypical way, thereby changing my expectations completely (so much so that I really have none-except for the legend you invented-clever, clever). Spike doesn't even seem like our Spike. Oh, there are aspects (quite a few) that are HIM, but what you've done here is create a world so new that I won't even presume to know these characters. I only wait in earnest for the brilliant author to allow me more. And oh how I want more.

So...is it Faith? Or Faythe? TeHee! :)

Author's Response: I hope my version of Spike is still appealing to readers - it's hard when I can't rely on his normal speech patterns - plus I had to imagine his personality with a different history and responsibilities (as a soldier rather than carer, although I hope a few nurturing qualities are still there). Your review did me the world of good - and Faythe? wrong but nice try - will be using your spelling later in the fic if you don't mind. ;)

Reviewer: mikim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2008 - 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 7

I'm totally loving this fic!! I've just discovered it and while I admit I was a bit sceptic a first, it was just great! I just can't wait to see what is going to happen now!! wonderful story, great pace in the writing i love it!
thank you for sharing
mikim

Author's Response: Know what you mean - I'd be a bit suspicious too :) Actually it's been a liberating experience not having to tie everything neatly together with canon/the series. Glad there are enough fantasy lovers out there to go with the flow. Thanks mikim.

Reviewer: Deb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2008 - 12:16 am Title: Chapter 7

Another update soon? Pretty please. Love the story and it's so intriguiging! You are keeping us on the edge of our seats. More please!

Author's Response: Just for you Deb - another chapter - so don't faint (drat, where are the 'virtual 'smelling salts when you need them).

Reviewer: quirks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2008 - 06:12 am Title: Chapter 7

yay! hadn't seen the new chapter, i'm glad to see more of this story.
the war is back on? what will happen to spike?
i look forward to learning more. great fic!

Author's Response: Thanks quirks! Yep, an actual plot is trying to break through now. All will be well - eventually.

Reviewer: Dorians Kitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2008 - 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 7

Noooo!!!! grrr Argh...more please!

Author's Response: I know - I'm such a meany aren't I !? New chapter ready very soon.

Reviewer: Deb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2008 - 03:15 am Title: Chapter 7

I was so thrilled at their surrender to each other (Finally! and so fun at that). Only to discover that the plot has entered back into the scene. Drat. Oh well, you've made it phenomenal thus far. Have more fun writing, we'll be anxious to see the future chapters!

Author's Response: Pleased that you enjoyed the 'surrender' - gave me many a sleepless night working on that, not that I didn't enjoy it too ;) Hope the plot will keep you curious too.

Reviewer: Zaira Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 7

Just caught up with this story and just totally love it! Was a little suspicious first when reading the summary - StarTrek meets Buffy? But I just couldn't stop reading, this story is great and your latest twist is even better. God, now I'm dieing from suspense! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: I know - Can't blame you for being suspicious of the summary - glad you gave it a go though and hope you haven't expired before the next chapter is up. Thanks Zaira.

Reviewer: nichbuket Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2008 - 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 7

No! Not when everything was fitting together. Poor Buff, watching her new world crumble.

Author's Response: I know. I know. And I'm the first to yell at the screen when another author does it to me. The evil muse made me do it.

Reviewer: Record Breakers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2008 - 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 7

Well I am offically a eturnal fan of yours!
Lovr your story!!!!

Author's Response: Nice. Very nice. Thank you Record Breakers.

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2008 - 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 7

Oh that was just amazing!! Loved the whole seduction.

Can't wait to see how the 'claim' turns out, and to find out Buffys reaction ; ) Spike sure is a sneaky one isn't he?

You are, of course, evil for leaving it like that - but I for one crave to know what happens next : )

Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks Heidi - I think sex scenes are the hardest to write (no pun intended). So glad you liked. Bit of action now - after all, you wouldn't want a happy ending straight away would you? (don't answer that)

Reviewer: MonsieurRipper Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 7

oh my god I can't believe you ended it like that!! What a cliffhanger, jeez! I can't wait, I love this story.

Seriously, so great. Keep it coming!

Author's Response: that's me - find a cliff and hang by my fingernails till the next chapter is up. My arms are going numb now - n e a r l y finished now. Whew.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 7

Swoon-worthy romance, smokin' hot sex, and intriguing drama... this chapter rocked! I can't to find out what happens to Spike and Buffy now that they've mated. Fantastic update!

Author's Response: Wow. Praise indeed - wish I could print it somewhere! Thanks so much.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 7

Oh, my, GOD. If that wasn't seduction at its best, then may God strike me down. Seriously hot and sweet and so passionate. It made me very happy to see them finally come together and care for each other. And of all things that could go wrong, that stupid warrior had to show up - hope she didn't kill Spike, that would mean Buffy's death as well. The Truce is over? Well, that throws a monkey wrench into the mix of things, especially since they're already married, bound together. Can't wait for the next chapter, I'm biting my nails over what's going to happen next. Fab chappy darling. Hugs.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the seduction scenes - coming from you that's a real compliment. Do you really think I'd kill our couple off? (thought not). Hugs back.

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 7

Oh no that bitca didn't!!!!!

Spike....Buffy help him, please.

I can see a dilema here and Buffy will have to choose sides again, right?

Great love scene.

spuf

Author's Response: Good deduction Spuf - this is all about choosing sides and the consequences of doing so.

Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 10:40 am Title: Chapter 7

....his bundle of Buffy ....

Great line!!

Plot is good!! Looking forward to more!!!

Author's Response: Going to up the pace now. Hope the plot will be to your liking and new chapter soon ( no need for that blunt instrument you promised to bash me with in London!)

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 08:31 am Title: Chapter 7

Oh that was so good - absolutely loved it.

Author's Response: Loved writing it too.. although am not sure if my hair is going to grow back. Thanks Sam.

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