[Report This]Date: 06/19/2007 - 08:48 am Title: Dinner
OH please oh please tell me she is an ex and he is single, which I believe he is witht he way you are writing it and the Willow and Tara matchmaking.
More please love it.
Author's Response: Well, you just have to wait and see, but I guess you know you're on the right track :)
Thank you, I'll update soon!
[Report This]Date: 06/19/2007 - 08:37 am Title: Dinner
oooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhh.......i like it............
Author's Response: Thank you :)
[Report This]Date: 06/17/2007 - 05:13 pm Title: Getting To Know You
Plotting Wicca, love it, I wonder if it will happen.
I love the story, but on a side note, college is spelt with and e not and a.
Sorry just thought you should know.
MOre please.
Author's Response: Thanks :) And thanks for noticing the college thing ;) I didn't think of it.
Another chapter will be up soon!
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2007 - 11:56 pm Title: Getting To Know You
I enjoyed Spike and Buffy's conversation, I think it's great they're taking the time to get to know each other. I also loved that they've decided to be friends. Fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, MidnightGirl! I'm very happy you liked the chapter!
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2007 - 11:34 pm Title: Getting To Know You
I love it so far so please update soon.
Author's Response: Oh, I will update again soon :) I just sent chapter 5 to my beta so I guess it'll be up in a few days! Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2007 - 04:07 pm Title: Getting To Know You
Asking questions was a good way to get to know the other better. They don't have a lot of chance with Willow and Tara wanting to play matchmaker :)
Author's Response: Thank you Cordykitten! Haha, you're right, they really want them together huh? :)
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2007 - 11:31 am Title: Getting To Know You
Um, okay, first of all, this story does have a lot of potential, but the writing needs some work. There are too many mistakes, which can be distracting for the readers:
“Summers. Why doesn’t people call you William?”
That should be don't, not doesn't.
“Ho said I blaamed o?”
Was her mouth full or something? It was hard to even tell what that's supposed to be. I have to say that it sounds like Buffy is drunk here, just with the way she's talking.
And also, it's college, not collage. I notice that a lot of people make that mistake. Sorry, I'm just strict when it comes to this stuff, but I do think you have a good idea here. Just reading it over more carefully, or getting a beta to help you out would make it a lot better.
Author's Response: Thanks for noticing the wrong spellings. I just talked to my beta and she missed that part, but everyone makes mistakes :)
As for the spelling, I'm sorry if it bothers you but I can't write everything right since I'm not a native speaker. I'm doing this because I want to train my english a bit, and of course because it's fun to write. But I hope I'll get better later.
Thank you for the comments!
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2007 - 08:02 am Title: Getting To Know You
L-o-v-e it! you shoule post the rest of the story like... now!
I think you have a really good start here.
Author's Response: Thanks! Oh, the whole story right now? No, that's no fun :) But I'll post another chapter in a few days. I do have pretty much the whole story finished but I need to rewrite some things. Thank you for you review, Aidan!
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2007 - 06:27 am Title: Getting To Know You
Good start weldone!
Author's Response: Thank you, Katkin :) I saw that you said you were gonna read this story, means a lot you did :) I haven't had any time to read The Superstar and the Single mom, I have just read the first chapter but I have to soon! I loved Her shoulder to lean on!
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2007 - 06:25 am Title: Getting To Know You
Ooh, it just keeps getting better! I can't wait to find out more about Spike's past, it seems like there are a lot of things he doesn't want to talk about yet. Great update, you're a very good author! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You just put a big grin on my face :) That makes me really happy, especially since it's coming from you, you're absolutley one of the best authors on the site! Thank you :)
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2007 - 06:23 am Title: Getting To Know You
Nice interaction between both couples. I see Tara and Willow are going to help the situation along a bit oh and I've always loved Willow's resolve face.
Author's Response: Oh me too! She's so cute when she does the resolve face in the series :) Thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: 06/14/2007 - 06:41 pm Title: Falling Down
Loved the Spuffy interaction in this chapter, it's so nice to see Spike and Buffy getting along. Wonderful update! :D
Author's Response: Aw, thanks :) You made my day!
[Report This]Date: 06/14/2007 - 06:00 pm Title: Falling Down
OH that was good, love it, more please.
Author's Response: Thank you, smlcspike :) Another chapter will be up soon!
[Report This]Date: 06/14/2007 - 11:59 am Title: Falling Down
Jag gillar verkligen den här historian än så länge..
Hoppas du fortsätter på den!!
Ser verkligen fram emot surfningen ;)
Skynda på att uppdatera =)
Author's Response: Oo vad kul med ännu en svensk :) Kul att du gillar storyn, och jag har den faktiskt nästan klar så jag ser ingen anledning till att lägga av med den om den fortfarande är uppskattad :)
Promise, ska uppdatera snart igen :) Jag skickar nästa kapitel till min beta ikväll har jag tänkt så kika in igen runt lördag-söndag :) Tack för kommentaren!
[Report This]Date: 06/14/2007 - 10:41 am Title: Falling Down
Naw, they're so cute together! *lol* I love this story, please update again soon. :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked this story, that means a lot! I will update again soon, promise ;)
[Report This]Date: 06/14/2007 - 09:14 am Title: Falling Down
Nice story so far. I like it.
Author's Response: Thank you, that's very nice of you!
[Report This]Date: 06/14/2007 - 09:10 am Title: Falling Down
Oh yeah they're in BIG trouble. Nice update.
Author's Response: Thank you, and yeah, kinda big trouble huh :)
[Report This]Date: 06/14/2007 - 08:30 am Title: Falling Down
Ah Spike was lucky that he had run into Buffy. So he got to give her the tour around :) A wonderful place he had there (he found). Buffy sure appreciated it.
Author's Response: Yeah, he was pretty happy and I think Buffy was pretty much happy too ;) Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: 06/12/2007 - 06:16 am Title: Wicca
Oh this is a good one, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm happy you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 06/12/2007 - 06:05 am Title: I've had enough
Oh this is a good start.
Author's Response: Thank you!!
[Report This]Date: 06/11/2007 - 09:12 pm Title: Wicca
looks like a good start to a gr8 story cant wait to read more. update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you, that's realy sweet of you :)
[Report This]Date: 06/11/2007 - 05:30 pm Title: Wicca
very cute i love it
update soon
Author's Response: Thank you, and I will :)
[Report This]Date: 06/11/2007 - 05:30 pm Title: Wicca
very cute i love it
update soon
Author's Response: Thanks :) Oh, and I will!
[Report This]Date: 06/11/2007 - 03:51 pm Title: Wicca
Lovely update, can't wait to see what happens next! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Pet :) I'll update soon!
[Report This]Date: 06/11/2007 - 03:04 pm Title: I've had enough
Oh yes, a story about my fav couple set in Cornwall, my fav place. There was no way I wasn't going to read this. Although I'm not sure that anyone in their right mind would get a cab from London to Penzance because it is a journey of over 300 miles!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it :D Haha, ops I didn't think about where Cornwall actually was since I never been to England, sorry about that! Let's just say she has a lot of money ;)
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