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Reviewer: anon462 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2007 - 08:30 am Title: While you were gone.

Interesting first chapter. :) I like your Willow voice, she babbles so nicely. :)

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Date: 06/22/2007 - 03:25 pm Title: Regrets and Revelations

Missed a chapter.. to the previous one: Hope Willow can help Spike...
Oh Buffy knows the truth now :) And ready to find Spike; that's good.

Reviewer: Terra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2007 - 01:54 pm Title: Regrets and Revelations

Just found this story, and its really interesting, love Magda. And feeling worried for Spike back in LA with Willow! Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2007 - 02:11 am Title: Regrets and Revelations

great chapter, I can't wait to read the next one.

Reviewer: Lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2007 - 03:27 pm Title: Regrets and Revelations

More, more, more... very good I can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder if Magda will take her up on the offer?

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2007 - 02:09 pm Title: Regrets and Revelations

For someone who doesn't have a beta, this is a wonderful and well written story. I would read a chapter of this everyday if there were one.

Reviewer: Nina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2007 - 11:28 am Title: Regrets and Revelations

This is very good. The first chapters had me curious, but now I am totally hooked.

I am excited for more. Thanks for updating! :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2007 - 04:44 pm Title: Damage

Wonder what did that to Spike?? Can't wait til the next update!

Reviewer: Pin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2007 - 01:30 pm Title: Damage

This looks really good. I'm very anxious to see what Willow can do for him! THanks!

Reviewer: bishbashbosh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2007 - 05:47 am Title: Damage

noooooooo dont stop and mess about for ages trying to find a beta its just fine as it is i've read worse with a beta!!!!! the plots there and the story has promise the grammar is only a small part of a good story and this is not a problem with this story if you call a halt theres no telling when or if you will come back to it and i'm getting into this now so please carry on

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2007 - 02:10 am Title: Damage

Great chapter, I can't wait to read the next one.

Reviewer: RandiGiles Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2007 - 08:15 pm Title: Damage

Its not hard to read at all. PLEASE continue.

Reviewer: melb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2007 - 04:17 pm Title: Damage

poor spike


please keep going i need to know what happens next im sooo interested

Reviewer: dark amia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2007 - 04:02 pm Title: Damage

Oh poor Spike. The pain he must be in. It's up to you if you'd like to continue or not but I've really enjoyed the beginning and would love to find out what happens next.

Reviewer: B_Mac Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2007 - 01:56 pm Title: Damage

Please continue the story. Grammatical inconsistancies aside it's very good and not difficult to read. Looking forward to seeing how Spike recovers, what the fortune teller is going to say to Buffy and how she is going to react.
Keep the chapters coming

Reviewer: Aidan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2007 - 01:54 pm Title: Damage

Hun, i think you are doing fine. I cant wait for the next update.

Reviewer: dark amia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2007 - 08:45 am Title: Cotton candy and fortune-tellers

great chapter

Reviewer: amandamanda3 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2007 - 11:51 am Title: Cotton candy and fortune-tellers

:) Love the start to this, can't wait to see where it goes.

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2007 - 01:02 am Title: Cotton candy and fortune-tellers

Awesome chapter, I really can't wait to read the next one

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2007 - 07:22 pm Title: Cotton candy and fortune-tellers

Wonder what the fortune teller will say?? Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2007 - 04:17 pm Title: Cotton candy and fortune-tellers

Buffy is with the Immortal here? Not a pairing I love *cough more like dislike*. He seems even nice here but I wonder if he does know that Spike is alive. It seems so.
*nods* He didn't tell Buffy even if he could have. He's not so nice. I don't think Buffy will like it that he lied to her (didn't tell her).

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2007 - 11:41 am Title: Cotton candy and fortune-tellers

I wonder if the fortune teller will tell Buffy that Spike is alive and needs her? Please update soon. Good chapter.

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2007 - 02:41 am Title: While you were gone.

Awesome story so far, I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Holly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2007 - 01:57 am Title: While you were gone.

Please continue! I never comment and am guilty of lurking but am enjoying this and would love to read more.

Reviewer: Frannabelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2007 - 08:02 pm Title: While you were gone.

This sounds really good so far. Please do continue.

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