

Date: 04/20/2007 - 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
OH this is interesting
Author's Response: Thanks!

Date: 04/20/2007 - 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 3
GREAT CHAPTER. I can't wait to find out what happens inthe next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll be posting it in a sec.

Date: 04/09/2007 - 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
Very well written--you've done a great job capturing the characters' voices. Love the angst, love the mystery--I'm excited to find out the why's. Thanks, and I can hardly wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! This is my first real angsty writing, so I worry about the cheese factor. I'm glad you're liking it!

Date: 04/06/2007 - 05:06 am Title: Chapter 2
Aww. Cuteness. Loving the penance seeking Spike. Exited to see what's going to happen next.
Author's Response: Sorry about the delay! Glad you're liking it though!

Date: 04/06/2007 - 04:44 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh this one is going to be different (like Spike being not dust) :) I noticed that the lets call it "Book of the Death"-Stuff this one will be different :) (Saw a bit of Ch. 6) *reading Ch. 2 now*
This is so heartbreaking sad.. (means also written good). Loved how Dawn and Spike did console the other.
Author's Response: I love love love Egyptian mythology, so I've been stewing over this one for a long time. Glad you're liking it! Thanks!

Date: 04/05/2007 - 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hmm, so Spike drank holy water.. and lived. Interesting. Then the save by Dawn.
Author's Response: I promise I'll explain. :-) Thanks for the review!

Date: 04/05/2007 - 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 2
heartbreaking. Good chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you!

Date: 04/01/2007 - 03:37 am Title: Chapter 1
I was waiting to see how it ends; it's bookmarked in my LJ. I wasn't sure about this one because I like my happy spuffy ending.
I'll try to read here when it doesn't get to hard for me.
The broken promise is Spike not keeping Dawn safe? I don't see what he could have done but oneself blames one the most (hope that made sense).
I love your writing; you make Spike's feeling visible, gives us a glimpse in his head. Bittersweet (sad) tale but good.
Author's Response: I tend to keep a happy(ish) ending clause in effect for all of my stories, because I'm a sucker for an upbeat ending as well.
Spike couldn't have done anything else, but that doesn't stop him from feeling like it was his fault. I'm glad you're liking it so far, and thanks for the review!

Date: 03/31/2007 - 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Excelente!....soy una de tus fans.
Author's Response: Gracias!