[Report This]Date: 03/13/2007 - 04:04 pm Title: Five
Glad Buffy has Tara to talk to since Willow flipped! Can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 03/13/2007 - 12:48 pm Title: Five
Yeah, Tara may be a silent one but she watches closely.
Willow isn't okay with Buffy being with Spike? She screamed at Spike and hit him? No, not very accepting indeed. He still has the chip and couldn't defend himself.
I'm glad Tara stayed with Buffy and talked to her, making her feel better. Willow has to get a grip. She should be glad that Buffy found a new love; she's not acting as Buffy's friend like she was till now (and still is I guess).
[Report This]Date: 03/12/2007 - 08:28 pm Title: Five
can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
[Report This]Date: 03/12/2007 - 08:07 pm Title: Five
sweet chapter. It's interesting how you're shifting the threat of potential evil off of Spike and onto Willow. i can't help but feel a little worried about why it's so "quiet upstairs..." Spike IS vulnerable now, we all are when we reveal a truth that our loved ones don't want to hear. I always found it tiresome that Buffy's friends remained so stupidly blind to Spike's good qualities - it just didn't ring true after a while. But this makes sense that the sky wouldn't fall if Buffy told them and that Willow might go to a dark place with it. Looking forward to the next chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 03/12/2007 - 07:50 pm Title: One
nice balance between Buffy's uncertainty and Spike taking matters into his own hands. nice ending too - I've always loved the idea of them dancing.
[Report This]Date: 03/12/2007 - 07:32 pm Title: Three
hi again - still enjoying your story. of course the date would be awkward, of course they'd want to revert to the sex, change is hard. but it's the intention that counts. and you still managed to make it funny with spike nonchalantly dusting the intruding vamp. so now onto the fighting, the OTHER thing they do so well.
And by the way, I'm glad I review before I read others' opinions. That last chapter's negative review was so unnecessary. You're one of the best writers around and besides, that's why they call it AU. You gave back just as good though - good for you!
[Report This]Date: 03/12/2007 - 07:02 pm Title: Two
Your first line was great - made me laugh out loud. Spike without the sex - unimagineable! But you're so right - you're describing the early stages of falling in love and sex too soon can just mess it up. I love that Buffy remembers the feeling of falling for Spike - the way I think we all did right along with her - before it got derailed. Your image of the phoenix is so hopeful and beautiful. And I also love the worrying part of Spike coming out - the one who looked after Dawn like a fussy parent. He has so many sides - wonderful JM acting. So, now a date with Spike - I can hardly wait...
[Report This]Date: 03/12/2007 - 06:48 pm Title: Five
What a wonderfully insightful assessment of Willow. Her behaviour is as worrying as ever and I am interested to see where you take that particular plot thread.
I love the way you express Buffy's thoughts in this chapter: the doubt; the fear; the thoroughly justified indignation all mixed in with a touch of her natural irreverance. Above all the hope shines through and is such a mood-lifter.
Thanks for the great read and I'm glad your spirits are so well improved!
Author's Response: LOL, Holly tells me she's glad I've managed to finally write my animosity for Willow in a fic and that I've made it believable. Hopefully everyone else will think that last as well. Nothing worse than character bashing without a point!
Buffy is seriously complex to write--particularly in this season. I hope that she does come across as hopeful--they really had a lot going for them if they'd had the smarts to look! I do feel more positive lately, and I am so glad you're reading! Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 03/12/2007 - 06:34 pm Title: One
oh - such a sweet thought that Buffy would actually just give Spike a chance at this point in their relationship and not cave and force that horrible breakup scene (which makes me cry every time). You draw the emotions of each character so clearly. I know there's probably SOME trouble ahead but I like the way it's going. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: britta, that scene devastates me too, every single time. There's definitely trouble ahead, but hopefully the journey toward it won't be too bumpy and will be filled with affection. And thank you so much for reading! I'm very glad you're enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2007 - 05:02 pm Title: One
Hope Buffy tells the others about Spike soon! Can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2007 - 03:03 am Title: Three
Just found and read this new story of yours and I really love it. I so wish the show had gone this way instead of the decidedly depressing direction it took. It's going to be interesting to see this relationship develop sans the sexcapades. I'd love to see them just be able to really talk to each other the way they started to when Buffy first came back from the great beyond. Great work!
[Report This]Date: 03/10/2007 - 06:49 pm Title: One
Loved to hear (read) Spike's thoughts (musings, worries) very much. And Buffy fears again to tell the Scoobies. She want have too, they saw ;-)
[Report This]Date: 03/09/2007 - 04:29 pm Title: One
Wonderful update as ever.
Spike's inner conflict makes for an enjoyable and insightful read whilst the minimal mention of Buffy during the scene at the table serves to show just how out of place she currently feels.
I also feel a sense of foreboding as Spike considers each of the friends' potential reactions to him. Willow seems particularly ominous.
This builds the suspense beautifully and I can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 03/09/2007 - 10:38 am Title: One
You've painted Willow as a real threat, and now that Buffy's shown the gang that she and Spike are friendly, there could be more than an intervention on the horizon. This was another entertaining chapter. The details of Spike's jangled emotions and wariness were nicely realized.
[Report This]Date: 03/09/2007 - 10:27 am Title: Three
This story is deliciously romantic and hopeful, and I'm really enjoying how strained and awkward they are with one another. The difficulty of getting to some sort of even footing rings true and I hope it takes a while for Spike and Buffy to relax and enjoy themselves.
I loved this line: " To hell with her dress. Spike would appreciate it more for seeing it flying up around her face with a snap kick anyway." Yeah, flying up around her face would make the fetching dress even more appealing in Spike's eyes!
[Report This]Date: 03/09/2007 - 05:50 am Title: One
Great presentation of how un-fun the Scoobies can be, in contrast to the rosiness of Buffy & Spike's feelings.
[Report This]Date: 03/09/2007 - 05:42 am Title: Three
Lovely step forward. I lover the way you show her excitement and hopefulness and how skitish they both are.
[Report This]Date: 03/09/2007 - 05:37 am Title: One
can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!! :D
[Report This]Date: 03/09/2007 - 04:22 am Title: One
Fantastic story... so enjoying this... update soon.
[Report This]Date: 03/09/2007 - 02:31 am Title: One
Ooh, just read all four chapters and love them!! I like how you've made Buffy be the one to change their relationship at the beginning and have her try to start a relationship with Spike. Very interesting way of getting it started, too. And this ender....oh yeah, you know I can't wait for the next chapter cause I know I'm gonna want to be kicking some Scooby buttage.
[Report This]Date: 03/09/2007 - 12:19 am Title: One
Spectacular chapter! It's like a dream come true, haha. Keep writing. :D
[Report This]Date: 03/06/2007 - 12:27 pm Title: Three
The sisterly banter was fun :) And Dawn is more then okay with Buffy wanting to impress Spike / Spike being the 'new guy'.
Awe, how romantic! Midnight picnic :) But working for being together seems isn't easy for both of them, it's all too new, both are a bit unsure. Their relationship will still need some work but I'm sure (well I hope) they'll manage it :)
[Report This]Date: 03/05/2007 - 09:12 am Title: Three
Just read it from the start and I love it. Please keep up the good work and post soon. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 03/05/2007 - 05:38 am Title: Three
can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!! :D