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Reviewer: Adriana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 03:55 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

All right!! I;ve been waiting ALL week for this chapter! Wonderful interaction between them and Gunn is just adorable.

Don't make me wait too long!!

Smooches!



Author's Response: Oh I'm so happy you like Gunn, he just seemed so perfect for this fic and I've always wanted to write him. I promise I won't make you wait long sweety. I should be updating sometime this week if everything goes smoothly. Thank you for the awesome review darling, hugs.

Reviewer: Kitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 03:52 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

Oh Sweetie! I'm so sorry that I didn't comment on the last chapter but I was ill and spent the most time in my bed. :(

But now I'm feeling better and can make my fangirl comment! *grins*
Wohooo sparks are flying! Spike seems to become softer and let Buffy in his cold heart.
It was so sweet when he wanted to learn her how to play poker and then realised that she knows about the game and also won! *giggles* Poor boy! :D

I'm really looking forwart to reading the next chapter and I hope there's no more teasing woman! *eg* Let them have their fun!!! *whines*

*hugs and kisses* kitty

Author's Response: Awww, that's okay, you've got school commitments and a hot boyfriend you should be visiting every chance you get, giggles. I'm just glad you got a chance to read the chapters and enjoyed them. I'm still staring at the yummy pic you made every day for inspiration. Buffy played him good huh? He appreciates her strength and personality though - so sassy, lol. As per your request, my muse has seen fit to grant your wish, rofl... let the ust build then break. Thanks for the lovely review hon, smoochies.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 03:49 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

Oh I love it, so Spike is going back to being a regular soldier, does it mean they will be stationed together. I love the questions Buffy asked Gunn.
More please.

Author's Response: Yup, that he is and glad you liked Buffy's question. To answer yours, I maaaaaaaaaay have foreshadowed a bit as to their future, giggles. Thanks for the great review darling, hugs.

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 03:44 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

Well we knew she could break down those tough walls Spike has built up, and to just look at him is to appreciate him, plus he really has a good heart. It must be hard for him, all these lusty feelings and having to maintain his facade.......ahhhh inner turmoil. Can't wait for more, great chapter and thanks

Author's Response: I sooooo loved what you said, just look at him is to appreciate him, plus he really has a good heart.... so true, so very true. It's just going to take a strong woman like Buffy to knock all the bricks away from his heart. It's very tough on him right now, you're right. He's a professional and in no way would compromise the integrity of his position as Buffy's charge. All the poor man has for now is his hand and some porn, giggles. Loved your review sweety, thanks so much. Smoochies.

Reviewer: lidija Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 03:32 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

great chapter, I like Spike more and more if thats possible. The sandwich thing was so sweet, as the rest of it, upadate soon please, please,please.

Author's Response: Oh wow, that's awesome, I'm glad you're liking Spike more - I was trying so hard to make everyone hate him, but he had to have a few 'weak Buffy moments'. Thanks for the awesome review honey - chappy five will be posted sometime this week.

Reviewer: jo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 03:28 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

boy your really building up the tension in more ways than one . Hope next chapter, theres a little resolution .
as usual your the best ,eagerly await next update.

Author's Response: LOL, I hope so, I've never had an opportunity to write UST until now, so I'm going for the gusto with this fic. I hope you like chapter five once it's posted... there may be a tad of that resolution you're looking for sweety. Thanks so much for the wonderful review. Hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: blondiebear. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 03:19 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

as always loved it lots and lots. glad you graced us all with another update. also glad spike realized (if only a little bit) that he is crushing on ms. summers. staying away from her may not make things better for him but when does spike's plans ever work out??? lol. loved it lots and lots. please PLEASE post soon.

Author's Response: Awww, thank you very much sweety - I love to entertain with S&B going at it whether a battle of wills or pugils, lol. Spike's plan, as you guessed, is going to backfire on him... the guestion is, will he be happier as a result. I'm sooooo teasing you right now, cuz I'm super psyched about the next chapter now that it's nearly finished. Smoochies to you hon - I'll update sometime this week.

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 03:15 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

Fabulous chapter, funny, sweet, hot, full of revelations for the two of them, especially Spike. I can't wait to read how buffy is going to react to him leaving her alone, so more please? .

Author's Response: Giggles with glee - I can hardly wait for you to see the plans I have sweety. Thank you for all your help and your review. You know my Buffy won't be too terribly happy from lack of attention, *winks*.

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 02:59 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

Oh, I can't wait for the next chapter! I love this story! More please!

Author's Response: Awww, thankee sweety. Look for chapter 5 sometime this week and I do hope you enjoy it.

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 02:53 pm Title: To Win the Battle but Not the War

great chapter, can't wait to see how Buffy responds to being ignored :)

Author's Response: Thanks hon. She's definetely not going to be happy about it, *winks*.

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 11:09 am Title: A Stayfree Moment

love love LOVE this story!!!! I cant wait for the next update!!!!

Author's Response: Giggles, glad you enjoy it sweety, thanks for the awesome review.

Reviewer: squawks Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 07:39 am Title: A Stayfree Moment

hope you're still updating soon - at the moment this is the only fic that i actively check to see if its updated so i hope that tells you just how much i like it!!!

Author's Response: I should be updating sometime today sweety - just had a tough week dealing with RL issues. I'm very happy you're looking forward to the next chapter, and I do hope you like it. Thanks so much for the lovely review. Smoochies to you.

Reviewer: HELTERSKELTER Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 07:19 pm Title: Welcome to Hell

are you updating tonight!??!
I've been looking forward all week.
also I've been baking.
I think it's a procrastination thing... but this story is so great!!

Author's Response: I wish it was procrastination holding me up on posting sweety, but alas it's been RL stuff this week. I hope to post by this weekend, we'll see. I'm busy working on it now, I promise hon, thanks so much.

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 03:32 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

yeah, this chapter was slow paced but... how many things happened! spike sees buffy oogling him... and realizes he's not the only one lusting. buffy discovers that spike is... human, and able to laugh and care. And being embarassed too! lol
but... it could have been interesting if buffy had caught spike slapping himself. i really can see him try to explain that to her! :D

‘Buffy the Drill Sergeant Slayer’
LMAO!! this is sooo funny!

“It smiles?”
best line ever sweetie! couldn't stop laughing for a while!

smoochies, luv! :D

Author's Response: LOL, glad you liked the ogling and 'it smiles' parts. I couldn't resist making Spike slap himself back to reality, giggles, that would have been funny to have him explain why he was doing it to Buffy. B the DS slayer - giggles - I had to come up with something to that affect. Thanks for the lovely review hon, smoochies back at ya my friend.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2007 - 05:21 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

I really love this! Quite a unique idea and even though I didn't serve in the military, many of my family did with 2 uncles making it a career and boy have I head the horror stories of basic from everyone, my brother, my dad and even a couple of nephews! And I used to date a marine and a guy in the navy -- not at the same time of course. (I'm pretty sure with the rivalry between those two branches I was breaking some law even mentioning them in the same sentence), so between them, my airforce borther and my army dad... well I can appreciate what your experience might of been and am thankful I didn't have to experience it first hand. You have my utter respect for your accomplishments and my undying gratitude for your service to our country (okay, I guess I should actually review the tale now and stop getting all maudlin).

I especially love the fact that you've placed them in an evniroment where the tension can build and build but where any action on their part could really be an issue for both their careers. I know you've thrown Lindsey and his "inappropriate behavior" in for a reason so I can't wait for that boot to drop!

You are an excellent writer and I look forward to your updates! Many thanks for sharing! Oh and I love your humor too! More please.

Author's Response: Oh wow, that's so neat you've had so much of your family in the service. I can imagine the stories they must have told you, it's not just a job, its an adventure, be all you can be, and the host of other military sayings, LOL. Oh my, saying marines in the same sentence, uh-oh, giggles. I dated a marine once and had one as a roomate in my civilian days - they're a.......... unique bunch in that they like to stand out alone. I appreciate your kind words sweety, it was an honor to do my time and part for my country - wouldn't trade it for the world. I'm so thrilled you're enjoying the fic, it has been too much fun to write what with all the funny things that can happen during boot camp. I think I liked using this scenario not only b/c of that but b/c of what you mentioned... nothing can happen between 2 people while in that setting - so let the UST build baby. Thanks so much for the lovely review hon, I'm very happy to see you here, smooches.

Reviewer: Ashley Granchester Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2007 - 10:58 am Title: A Stayfree Moment

I'm really loving this story. Its fun and original.

I just found myself LOL every now and then. The tampons scene is priceless with Spike's embarrassment. I always wondered whant happened with that kind of stuff in the army, now I some how have it more clear. Even though granny's underwear YUK.

I'm only concerned about Lindsey trying something now that Spike has a couple of days . . . Lets hope nothing serious happens, at least not to Buffy.

I can't wait to read more so I hope your muse is a busy bee right now.

Thank you for gifting us with this story.

Ash.

Author's Response: That's great, I'm very pleased you're enjoying sweety. I find myself digging deep into my memories to find situations from my own experience and then make them spuffy. Oh GOD. I had to go to my DS once about getting some tampons and though it was during the day and he sent me to go get them myself it was still embarassing for both of us. I wouldn't worry too much about Lindsey, yes he can definetely stir some trouble but this is most definetely not Buffy/other. I hope to have another chapter up by the end of the week hon, thanks so much for the lovely review. Smoochies.

Reviewer: Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 11:56 pm Title: Welcome to Hell

Would've loved to know exactly what Spike was picturing behind his closed eyelids there at the end! But alas, we're only on ch.3 and have plenty of time for hot Spuffyness!

Author's Response: Hee hee, I thought about going there, describing what he pictured but I didn't want to potentially detract from the main event when it happens, giggles. Thanks for the lovely review darling, smooches.

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 09:56 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

When I saw the title, I had a feeling I knew where this one was going...and you did not disappoint! :-)

Loved Buffy's verrrrrry detailed examination you the yummy goodness that is Spike's bod, and his examination of her in the car was hot too. I love it that he likes a girl with a little junk in her trunk, LOL.

Great chapter, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: LOL, I do have a twisted sense of humor when it comes to certain things. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chappy sweety, especially Buffy's anatomical dissection of Spike's yummy bits - sighssss, I'd stare too. Oh yeah, he was more than checking her out during their ride to the store, poor boy couldn't help himself. My Spike doesn't care for a twig figure, he likes soft curves, something to hold onto. Thank you so much for the wonderful review sweets, hugs and kisses to you.

Reviewer: Ashley Granchester Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 04:12 pm Title: Welcome to Hell

Wow, I just started to read this fic and I really like.

I just can't believe you went through all that. My most sicere respects to you.

Just a question, Isn't a Federal Offence to read somebody else correspondence? I'm not so sure about that in the army.

Cant wait to read the next chappie right away.

Ash.

Author's Response: LMAO, well, it was no picnic, but lots of people do it. I guess I really wanted to join and in so doing, there's some crap you have to put up with until you're settled into the regular lifestyle of it. I'm not up on the laws, but I know it's a federal offense to open or steal someone elses mail. As for reading it? I'm not so sure. But hey, it's just a fic and I needed Spike to know a little something about Buffy's intimate life, giggles. I'm very happy you're enjoying the story hon, thanks for the great review, hugs.

Reviewer: slayercaro Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 11:57 am Title: A Stayfree Moment

Oh yeah, feminine stuff can be such a good thing. And a Spike who is not wearing any shirt is just as good. I think I couldn´t get my eyes off, too. *gg*
But I think it was a nice trip they had and I also think that it was funny to read that Spike can be a nice guy too. I´m waiting for the moment when he looks at Buffy that why. But I think that I have to wait a little.
Looking forward to reading the next one and also you´re other stories. How do you find time writing all the stuff? I hardly have time reading all of it. *gg* But I´m happy you´re doing it. So go on.
Smooch, Caro

Author's Response: LOL, I certainly wouldn't be able to peel my offs off him either. Spike is a good guy underneath it all, he's just been jilted in the past and has hardened up. He'll see Buffy for what she is, but it may not be for awhile - he's a tough nut to crack. LOL, actually, I'm surprised I find the time myself some days. I go through writing bouts then take a day or two off- that's usually how it works. I'm so glad you're enjoying IAN sweety, I love getting your reviews, you always make me laugh. Thanks so much, smoochies to you too.

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 11:52 am Title: A Stayfree Moment

Ok-how long did you stare at pictures of naked men to get that very detailed description of half naked Spike? People have no idea the hardships writers must go through to perfect their work.;-) And Xander's line...so perfect...little do both he and Buffy know how true that is. I am glad that Buffy is finally getting to see a softer side to Spike. Him with the twins and Fred was very cute. It is such fun watching both Buffy and Spike be in such denial about the attraction and I love the fact that she is as attracted as he is!! I almost fell out of my chair when Spike started slapping himself in the car. I was wondering how he would explain that if Buffy saw him doing it. Then when she handed him the change, I thought for a second he was going to kiss her, cause the ust was soo thick. I have a feeling when these two do finally get together, the building will go up in flames. As always, great work!!! I shall wait with bated breath (and possibly a fire extinguisher) for the next installment.

Author's Response: Giggles, wellllll, I stared at the pic Kitty made for the fic actually - she captured it so well, mm mmm good. Writing is definetely a craft that never ceases to force me to improve, so what can I do, but to practice, practice, practice. Glad you liked Xander's little line and Gunn's children with their Uncle Spike. Spike is a good man underneath it all, he just needs to have his layers peeled off forciably, giggles. They are definetely both attracted to each other, and it's that right there that will bring them together initially. Much later down the road, he'll get the girl, but for now, UST baby. Oh I soooo loved writing that slapping scene, he's trying so hard to bare in mind the innapropriatenss of his thoughts - poor boy. It would have been nice to have a kissing mometn in the car, but at this point, she would have been like, what are you doing, you hate me remember. Oh yes, the UST is going to build to a point where it wil be like a nuclear blast when it goes off - sighs, I like that kind of fic, so I knew I had to try writing one. Thanks so much for the awesome review hon, big smoochies to you.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 11:24 am Title: A Stayfree Moment

Buffy's ogling of half naked Spike has upped the sexual tension between these two. The forbidden element just makes it hotter. I loved Spike's interaction with Gunn's children, and Willow's "It smiles?" made me laugh out loud. The trip to the gas station was sexually loaded without any untoward behavior. I can't wait to see how you're going to bring them together, but the tension is delicious and lots of fun to read.

Author's Response: LOL, hey, she may not like him, but she'snot blind either. Oh yeah, UST is just building and building here. Spike's softer side is defintely something Buffy didn't expect, but it's going to help in the very end of the story. I'm very thrilled you don't mind me taking my time building the tension through their little interactions, I've never written this particular kind of relationship between them yet and felt it was time to try my hand at it. SO I thought, okay, what kind of setting could I get them in where there really ISN'T a damn thing they can do to each other and they build that love-hate relationship? An Amry boot camp seemed to be the answer, giggles. I'm very happy you're enjoying it and this chapter in particular - it's been my fav so far to write. Thanks for the lovely reivew hon, hugs.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 11:00 am Title: To Serve or Get Served

The breakup with Angel was well devised, and I like that all we had was Spike's POV, watching but not hearing the event. Spike's baiting with the pugil sticks was also well written, and I could feel the anger building in Buffy as Spike taunted her. Thanks for letting her get some of her own back, and Spike's role there made him a bit more sympathetic.

You're doing a great job keeping each of the characters in voice, even in these completely different roles. Having Lindsey in the background is adding another layer of tension to this entertaining story.

Author's Response: Thanks sweety, I felt Angel would only serve one real purpose in this fic and as soon as he did, it was asta la vista baby. Oh Buffy was furious over the pugil incident and Spike cruelly taunting her about Cordelia and her boyfriend... sent her over the edge. He needed a good swat to the head and to land on his ass for that one. I'm pleased that you're enjoying the characters and their personalities in this setting. I love a good challenge and well the army, with the btvs and ats characters in it, definetely poses one, giggles. I loved your review hon and I appreciate it more than you know, thanks so much. Smooches.

Reviewer: e-mis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 09:15 am Title: A Stayfree Moment

i found your penname yesterday, saved this fic to my computer, started to read it this morning and i stoped only when i realized there' no more line. i laughed at loud many times,... which btw would have been much less embrassing if i've been alone, but who cares. The story and your style captured me from the first few paragraph. Thanks for writing and sharing it. Please update asap, but only if your muse co-operates. i have a feeling it will worth the waiting. thanks again.
e-mis

Author's Response: LMAO, WOW, that's awesome, I'm really pleased that I could bring you some entertainment with my little fic. I do hope you enjoy my other ones as well if you have the opportunity to read them sweety. I'll hopefully have another chapter of IAN up by the end of the week - god willing. Made ya laugh out loud huh? That's great, I use a lot of comedy in my fics, it helps break the tension up and I'm a happy funny person by nature myself. Thanks for such a warm and lovely review sweety, big hugs and a kiss to you.

Reviewer: Adriana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 07:56 am Title: A Stayfree Moment

I really like this story. I'm glad that you posted another chapter so quickly.

I like the army angle...

Author's Response: Awww, thank you hon, glad I was able to hand out another chappy so soon - it's been mega fun to write. Glad the army angle is something you're enjoying as well. Thank you for such a wonderful review sweety, hugs.

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