It is interesting to see how he struggles against himself not to touch her when you can see he wants to from the small hug embrace she gives him with the smelling of her hair. The great thing about Victorian times is that so much thought and meaning went into those stolen touches but it simply was not allowed and how it feeds into the passion they feel so I can see why with his writing it's the only outlet he can have in regarding any woman he might have any feelings for. I think that with your writing it makes it all the more sexy and endearing is the longing and how you describe it out. I really enjoy this and wonder when he is turned and when she is pulled back to the time she is from how either of them will deal with the loss I applaud your writing on this it is effulgent in it's own way.

I feel like I'm reading a classic and I love it please write more soon!

Aww...I really love reading this story, You've written the shy,nervous William so fantastically well.

I just hope nothing horrid happens - but then I expect they will ..lol

The beauty of working at a call center is that I can stalk Spuffy.com hunting for your new stuff to come up and trying not to do a huge Woo-Hoo when it does. So much to like about this story but I think I loved the part best is that when he said He had hope to his Mom that she might care for him cause I think that says a lot.

oh god i love it!!! its almost too sweet for words! i think i might be a sucker for william even more than spike if thats possible...hmmmm... especially the way you write him. i hope you update soon!

Author's Response: I've always had a real soft spot for William, which is why I had to write a fic about him. I'm glad to know I'm not the only one who sees him as just as interesting and attractive as Spike. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Nary a kiss and I am completely swept away. Perhaps such undemanding love is what's perfect... Though I wonder what comes next for them in this world. How she sees him. So very amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. :)

How I love them. I just love it. So very sweet, how they just creep along. Wonderful.

Wow, I lvoe this chapter, got little butterflies in my stomach when he was telling her about his feelings, it was so sweet. Wonder weather Buffy is going back to her time or staying here :P. Hope you update soon!

So beautiful a story it makes me miss BtVS all over again well done! Please add more when you can.

Awwwwwww she keeps tenderly reaching out to him in little ways and she is so perfect in what she says to him because she see's how fragile he is and she shows him he is the better man and he is safe in his feelings for her. You can see she is scared to and unsure but she still wants him to be happy and comfort him. I think she lves him as well and just does not know it..
I just love this for it makes my heart jump to when I read it like you are right there with both of them and that is the skill of a very good writer. Please please add more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. :) I always thought it sad when people mistook William's sensitivity in FFL to be a weakness. I know the script even called for him to be a "wuss" but I never saw him that way at all. I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who appreciates his vulnerability. :)

Leave us wanting more why don't you? I can't express how much I love this. Why not let her stay and let them be happy together. Stuff the future - this is far more romantic.

Author's Response: I'm glad you feel that way. Thank you. :)

I think it's cool she's sort of choosing a life with him I just fear when she gets ripped away how it will effect both of them and I know I'll be dying to read that.

Author's Response: Not saying a word on that front, but I'm glad to know whatever happens you'll be there to read it. Thank you so much for taking the time to review. :)

Superb writing and I'm hanging from my seat.

Author's Response: The best compliment a writer could receive. Thank you. :)