I like the way your tell the story of Williams life in this and I think it is good in this chapter you gave him a moment of true happiness and telling a woman he is in love with that he does love her. For at least when he is turned soon he will have at least have been loved by a real woman. I always thought it kind of sad on the tv series that William never really was loved by a girl in his life and was only mocked for his caring or that it made him less of a man. Where in this version you see that William is the better man for his caring and all of his manners and rules and that a real girl would love him and in many ways he has the same passions that Spike does when he gets so filled with emotion and lets you see a bit more of him.

As in all of your chaters I love your work and wish you to write more of this great story and I cannot wair to see when Dru comes in or how you have him rurned or if this is even the same world and time Buffy was in or another dememsion William or how it will all turn about. I might even make popcorn.



Author's Response: I always felt the same way, Kalahara. Poor William had his heart trampled by Cecily and then was immediately killed and turned by Drusilla. Not a very nice end to a good man at all. I am trying to make that up to him in some small way now, although I can't promise there won't be some angst in his future. Thank you for reading and reviewing. :)

It's cool to see that even before William is turned into Spike he has the same reactions for standing up for a lady just with less violent means like Spike does. It seems to me William will always be a part of Spike even in turning at some point in the ruture he still is a good man minus the restrictions holding him back.

Now don't get me wrong Spike does evil things it's just at the core of him he was a good man and that still shines through.

Author's Response: I agree with you completely. At his core Spike is a very loving person, even when he does downright evil things. If he wasn't a loving person he wouldn't have sought his soul in the first place on the show.

Even Charles can't ruin this little secret getaway and I loved the part where William had the music play their song.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing. :)

This is intriguing to say the least I'm waiting to see him turned and see how much of William remains in him and if Elizabeth/Buffy will still see the man he is inside of him. You have a true gift in writing I look forward to seeing more from you.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. :)

Love it!!!! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Soon, I promise. :)

I really love reading this story it shows heart.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you feel that way. :)

A very loving story and a great twist on the part oof William in Spike we never see. Please add more when you can.

A little adventure headed Elizabeths way :)
A very nice story

I'm starting to worry with so little vamp activity that perhaps they know she is there and are watching her or something or one of the kitchen staff is reporting to Dru or something. Evil is a foot I think cause just when everyone gets too happy or comfy in pops evil.

Very pretty fic I feel like I'm watching a old movie reading this tonight. A flower and a note a possible secret meeting? Cant wait to see

Oh my giddy heart! They have something!!!

I love this story, can't wait to see what happens next.
More please.