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Reviewer: stressfordpoet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 10:25 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Sure my friend gets me started on this fic and now I am addicted to it. With him away I think Dru will show up or hurt the Mom I feel like she is watching the house or something cause Dru is always the unknown wacky to show up with evil when you least expect it.

Author's Response: Addiction is the best form of flattery, thank you! :)

Reviewer: uber_doll Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 10:21 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Wow and just wow is all I can say pretty pretty please add more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Soon, I promise. :) Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: nrang328 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 10:20 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

This is really pretty and has a lot of thought and drama put into it. I cannot wait till they have to come face to face again. Knowing Buffy there will be a punched nose or a sign of temper. Cant wait to see more!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. :) I appreciate your taking the time to review.

Reviewer: XxxCalistaxxX Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 10:17 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

LMAO to Matthew and his braclet line. I think it's fun Buffy and Matthew have these little chit chats he's like the Xander of the times. This is a sad update but it needs to happen to get to the next best part in the story.I really love reading this its a favorite of mine.

Author's Response: Matthew is such a fun character to write; I'm glad you like him. :) Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review.

Reviewer: Kalahara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 10:14 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

William is sinking in guilt and Elizabeth is in the depths of despair. I felt so bad for her at the table with Ann you could tell she was barely holding it together. And he didn't even leave her a note and knowing Buffy's issues this will send her on a downward spiral cause she does not take rejection well. And there is not much else she can do given the times then stare out the window and wait for his return I just hope he doesn't stay longer then a month away because Buffy will get stir crazy in that house and start thinking the worst about herself, well she already is but now mixed with the Slayer dreams she will think he's off on the farm being turned by Dru or worse.
This is such a great story I love it more as it goes on.


Author's Response: Thank you so much, Kalahara. I always look forward to your reviews because of the detail you add. I'm so glad you continue to enjoy the story. :)

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 10:06 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Absence makes the Spuffy grow fonder...
As I beg the author to bring William home!!!!


Author's Response: We'll see. ;)

Reviewer: bloodykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 10:05 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Poor Elizabeth
Anne with her motherly advice and questions drove her to tears. But I'm sure some time apart will be good for them both to think and sort things out.

Author's Response: You are right about that, bloodykitten. Some space is probably a good thing. Although it would certainly have been better for Buffy if William had said goodbye first. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Taylormaid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 10:02 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

I'm enjoying this story sooo so much!! Very anxious to see what changes in the different timelines will mean! This chapter made me want to clunk Buffy on the head with something big and heavy!! LOL! But then, she always manages to make me feel that way at some point! More soon, I hope!

Author's Response: lol. I often have that reaction to Buffy myself, on the show and in fanfics. :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.!

Reviewer: tattooedsiren Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 10:02 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

:(
Poor things they are both freaked out and unhappy.

Author's Response: Yes. They love each other so much but are so different it makes a relationship all the more difficult. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Alex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 09:17 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

This story is very nice. it took time to build up between Buffy and William since he is so repressed, but I have good hopes for him!!! Now, I wonder when Drusilla and Co will come in the mix....

Author's Response: One thing I wanted to do was stay realistic to the characters and the time period, which was why I made sure they didn't just fall in love at first sight and walk into the sunset together. lol. I'm so glad you are enjoying it and thank you for reading and taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 09:15 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

oh i just love this story too much! and thank you for updating so frequently. William is just so sweet, although a bit uptight. hope to see more soon!

Author's Response: Thank you guys for reading and reviewing it. :) I can't tell you how much it means to me that so many people are enjoying something I've written.

Reviewer: Serenity Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 03:54 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Noooo! You can't...CANNOT...leave it like that! GRR! In all honesty, great couple of chapters. I have been checking on AFF for updates, last one I read was chapter 13, but never saw any. Thankfully, I scrolled down on SR and found it! Please update soon, eagerly awaiting more!!!

Author's Response: I was getting very little feedback on aff.net, so I felt I would just let it lie there for a while and concentrate on updating it on the spuffy-centric sites. I'm glad you found it and are still enjoying it. Thank you for reading and taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 11:04 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

And delicious though that be, it could really create a problem. Perhaps a fortnight will be a good thing for them, though that whole running away without talking always created quite enough fun. They always come back from such things, I can only wonder how long it will take. A great chapter filled with yet another turning point. I await what happens next. Please, update soon.

Author's Response: I'm glad you continue to enjoy it. Thank you, as always, for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Record Breakers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 09:45 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Wow I don't think Elizabeth even really knows all he has given up for her if society is completely turning their backs on him and his business. I really hope someone of higher society takes to her and can fix this problem before Anne discovers how bad things are the shock might kill her. And Elizabeth did make a mistake here cause even though William ran off I wonder if he starts to think about it and what she did if his view of her will change. They both really know so little of each others past they need to talk. Love this fic its got a hold on me.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)

Reviewer: lifewhoknew Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 08:36 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

this is a great story
very well written
please continue

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: Kat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 03:53 pm Title: Prologue/Chapter One

This story is utterly beautiful. I cannot wait to keep reading.

Thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 02:50 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Does William now that feel that Buffy might be what Archer and the others are insinuating that she is - a woman with "loose morals"? I love your writing soooooo much. Please update very soon.


Author's Response: As soon as possible, I promise. I'm glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: Deltanighthawk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 02:44 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Beautifuly written I hope you continue with this.

Author's Response: I will certainly continue. Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I'm glad you like the story. :)

Reviewer: Kalahara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 02:28 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Loved this update but I wonder what he is hiding maybe it's something to do with the estate or his fear of maybe asking Elizabeth to marry him but he is hiding something and I'm dying to see now what it is he is hiding. Can't be a vampire thing she would have noticed so it's got to be something or someone. Humm.......

Author's Response: Very astute of you to realize he is keeping something from her. He isn't a vampire, but there is certainly a secret between them. Thanks so much for the review. :)

Reviewer: Starlee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 02:24 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

“You’re always so fastened up,” she said playfully. “How’ve you lived so long so fastened up? Don’t you ever let yourself relax?”

“Am I fastened up?” His voice was thick, as if the words had stuck in his throat.

“Very fastened up,

((((((So very cute))))))

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: aneternalflame Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 02:14 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Yes!~
Ok now more more more more!

Author's Response: Soon. I promise. :)

Reviewer: tattooedsiren Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 02:05 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

This is really good and the love scene was well done I thought keeping in mind they are both new to each other and wanting to please the other it was just enough and the akwardness after. Great job

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: Mephisto Waltz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 01:40 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Oh yes! A late lunch and a update! Juicy! Gosh he wants her so badly and how he struggles to hold back his own feelings and to try to do what is proper when everything inside of him is saying another and him really not knowing what to do and just for once allowing himself to feel. I think I get why he left I mean with nothing said between them after and neither of then knowing what to say he probably snuck away cause he didn't know how to face given they sort of broke all the codes. So much to like in this new chapter and you know with this there will be fallout and a little heartbreak with him going away.

Author's Response: For a passionate person like William, living in such rigid social constraints would be torture. Even harder to do would be turn his back on those same constraints; after all he's lived with them 30 years. You hit the nail on the head when you said he doesn't know how to face her now. Thanks so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you are still enjoying the story. :)

Reviewer: Starlightskies Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 01:34 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

I am not big on doing reviews cause I never know what to say and mostly I lurk the site but this story I really like and really want more so I came out of hiding to try to feed the muse.

Author's Response: The muse greatly appreciates that, thank you. :)

Reviewer: Hour of the Serpent Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 01:27 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

I think in many ways it was sweet he put off and feared leaving her like if he left and returned the whole thing would have been a dream. And he was opening himself up to her like no one else, maybe she did leap ahead in their relationship but in Buffy time it would have been different and trying to hold yourself back cause your in a different place had to be driving her crazy. Just please don't Vamp while your out of town and this whole other thing is going on. Ok now I'm reviewing like I'm talking to actual people lol such is the telling of the talents of the writer :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the nice review! :) Poor Buffy just wanted to show him she loved him. She thought if she persisted she could make him relax and enjoy himself. Unfortunately, 30 years of training can't be abolished in a single night...

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