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Reviewer: Bel Canto Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 03:32 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

First off so wonderful was the writing on this it was perfect. I think William being drunk will shadow the thinking on the non-loss of Elizabeths virginity. Loved it!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, Bel Canto. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 03:30 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

I was so glad to see this updated! Love the very romantic first time of theirs, beautiful and sexy.

Author's Response: Thank you, Toni. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: Julumba Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 03:30 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

OMG ok I need my boyfriend and I need him now.
Victorian hot-tas-tic!

Author's Response: lol. That good, huh? Well, I'm certainly glad you think so. :)

Reviewer: mwfte Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 03:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Wow. This chapter was definitely worth the wait! I'm so pleased that you wrote the sex between them without being extremely pornographic, as if giving us glimpses of their shadows. The end made me shiver, as well. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Hope you had a happy birthday! :-)

Author's Response: Thank you, mwfte. It's not technically until Wednesday, but we went out on the weekend. So far, it's been wonderful. :) I'm glad you liked the chapter. I wanted to show some restraint with the sex scene, since it was written in William's POV. I'm glad to hear you liked it. :)

Reviewer: synonumous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 03:19 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

dun dun DUN!! ooh cliffie but it was good! i cant wait to see what happens cant wait caint wait! thanks for updating!! ;) YAyA!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: VICTORIA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 03:09 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

So pleased to find an update on this wonderful story. This chapter was just sublime. Perfect. Thanks ever so.

Author's Response: Thank you, Victoria, for taking the time to offer me feedback. I'm glad you like the story. :)

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 03:07 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

love it. i want to see a twist. How about someone come through a portal...perhaps...a bleached blonde?

Author's Response: A twist is coming, although I won't say if it is the one you are suggesting. Thanks for taking the time to review. ;)

Reviewer: BloodyLuv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 03:01 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

this chapter was so sweet, but i guess the little clue you left with the poem really tells us something =( cant wait to know what happens next!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 02:37 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Oh seeing this update really made my whole day - and it was such a good one on top of that!!!! I really hope they do actually get married, although this story always leaves you on edge that something bad might happen! e.g she goes back to Sunnydale, he gets turned etc... I really really love this story, thank you so much for the great update it was very much appreciated. Hope to see more soon (by the way your writing style is just amazing, you can really see where its set and feel their emotions remarkably well) Thanks!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, squawks. I'm glad you are enjoying reading it as much as I am enjoying writing it. I appreciate your taking the time to tell me so. :)

Reviewer: Coop Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 12:00 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

I was really surprised by this story it was not at all what I thought it would be and I'd like to see more of it.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: doRaExPlorDer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2007 - 07:11 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

This is so much better then cuddling up with a good book on a snow storm of a night irst rate story I'm just dying to see more

:D

Author's Response: What a nice thing to say! Thank you. :) I'm glad you are enjoying the story, and I hope you continue to in the future. Thanks for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: Fanxstitch Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2007 - 01:57 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

I am so glad to see you update this story. It has been a favorite of mine for quite awhile. I hope you will keep it up as it is heartbreaking beautiful. You are very talented. Blessings.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Fanxstitch. I'm glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: spikes_vamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2007 - 08:45 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Poor Spike. ; )
More soon please.

Author's Response: Soon, I promise. :)

Reviewer: beanbeans Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2007 - 09:03 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

On the rec of a friend on LJ, I came by last night and read this story all the way through. You've got a great writing style, and the plot developments are really compelling. I'm completely addicted! Excellent job. I can't wait to see what you've got planned next.

Thanks so much for sharing this story. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, beansbeans for reading it and taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2007 - 12:16 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

And how does she fix this. I don't imagine there's a Vegas type equivalent in Victorian England. They have too much to throw it all away. So very tragic. But tragic can also be brillian. Amazing chapter. Please, update soon.

Author's Response: Not saying a word about what's coming. I'm having too much torturing you guys to give away any plot secrets. ;) Thanks for as always for reviewing!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2007 - 12:02 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

So glad that you're back! Missed this story. But the need to find out what she did is most pressing at this moment, and as the next chapter is awaiting...

Author's Response: I'm putting some finishing touches on the next chapter, now, BuffyRat. After this, I just have to send it to Patti to Beta. She's very prompt about it, so expect an update by tomorrow at the latest. :)

Reviewer: Ikepear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2007 - 10:06 pm Title: Prologue/Chapter One

I'm enjoying the story so far, but please take away the constable's gun in any future rewrites. No guns for Brit police.

Author's Response: I took out that line as soon as I read your review. I only had one other person mention this (on a different site) and I meant to look into it then. But I got caught up in an update and completely forgot. Thanks for pointing out the error. :) I am not British, so that one just slipped right by me.

Reviewer: Aurorah Borealis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 02:22 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

By far this blows all the other fics on this site out of the water. Brillant and pulls at the heart strings cant wait for more to come

Author's Response: What a lovely thing to say, Aurorah. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Ague 77 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 02:15 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Please post more when you can :D

Author's Response: As soon as possible, I promise. :)

Reviewer: Krystal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 01:53 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Update, update, update!!!!!!!!!! I'm gonna go crazy I swear! You know when someone does something stupid & you wish you could trade places with that someone so they never do the something stupid act? Well you've accomplished that perfectly in this last two chapters! I'm dying for more, please update ASAP, please! I beg of you!!

Author's Response: lmao. Aren't you greedy, Krystal? You got two chapters in two days! Seriously, though, I am working on the next chapter and hope it will be ready to post by the weekend. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Record Breakers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 01:12 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Oh no!!!
I see a giant plot twist a coming with all the heatbreak and the still knowing something with the horse will happen. I'm so excited to see what comes on the next page I'm almost jumping off my seat!

Author's Response: You are correct, a plot twists awaits. Hope you enjoy it when it arrives and thank you for the nice review. :)

Reviewer: Top the tea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 12:14 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Oh this is just too good it made my lunch hour and I've read it twice now. I do and don't want her to walk thru that door I'm fighting myself here on what side to cheer for. Great job!~

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Top the tea. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: tattooedsiren Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 12:12 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

It was a heartbreak to read but I loved the way he did ask her so William like and so good. It is just so beautiful I love this fic so much.

Heck I'll give you you a ring anything you want just add more please? don't say no lol my heart couldn't take it either :P

Author's Response: lol. You don't have to resort to bribery, tattooedsiren; I'm working on the next chapter even as we speak. I'm glad you enjoyed this one even in spite of all the angst. Thanks as always for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: bishbashbosh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 11:39 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

two chappies in 2 days heaven i hope you are at least going for the hat trick!!!!!! heres hoping number 3 is down loaded to day please keep up the good work.

Author's Response: If not by today, then certainly by the weekend. I'm glad you like the story so much. Thank you for taking the time to tell me so. :)

Reviewer: Mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 10:34 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

That was so beautifully written! My heart bled for William. I can't wait to find out what Buffy is up to?

Author's Response: It shouldn't be long. Look for it by the weekend, by the latest. My muse is behaving quite well this week. :)

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