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Reviewer: Blue Bell Knoll Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2007 - 07:52 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

Compelling update from where you left off before in William to letting anyone or anything get to him and soldering on and becoming his own force to be reckoned with I'm ancious to see what you have happen next or how they escape.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: ll_x_x_ll Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2007 - 06:39 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

The era of Spoke has begun!
It was hard to see William go because I had grown to really care for him in this but out of the ashes of William Spike was born so you have to still love him all the more.

Author's Response: I had a hard time letting go of William, too. I think, deep down, Spike remains William even despite all the evil things he does. The new tough-guy persona is only skin deep, because, as we see in seasons 5--7, he actually remains very emotionally vulnerable. I was watching "Crush" the other day, and it struck me how very much like William Spike was in that episode. Very awkward in his pursuit of Buffy, very ... well, almost self conscious. It wasn't until Buffy shot him down, and Dru showed up that things went so wrong. Before that, I really think he was trying to be what he thought she wanted him to be (preppy clothes, gentler attitude etc). Anway, now I've rambled on. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: dwiges Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 11:04 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

Great reafing

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Reviewer: dwiges Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 11:04 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

Great reafing

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Breath-me_In Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 11:01 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

This gives me hope gor a while there it for really fark but now I feel like he's gonna be ok well..... as ok as Spike ever is lol
I cannot wait for the mob to stike

Author's Response: I know it got dark for a while, but I think William needed that incentive to fight back. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: ZzzHollowSleepszzZ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 10:13 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

He seems addicted to the surge and pulse to the fight. After the last chap I am glad to see hes taking his unlife back and could care less what happens
Go William

Author's Response: As Spike said in Fool for Love: "There's death, there's glory, and sod all else." The more notoriety he receives for his crimes, the more he feels he should top them. And once he got a taste of a real "fist and fangs" fight, you're right, he did become addicted to the rush of it. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Edwiges Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 10:02 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

William never submit never surrender!!!
Rocking chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Forbidden Loves Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 09:57 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

I am so behind on updates i am giddy here trying to catch up ok Dru is such the proud Momma here it made me smile and I think she is trying to be there for him the best she can and Angelus is so not making any sort of point with Spike cause he just does not care at all I could almost see Angelus face with the mob approaching I just keep smiling reading this and thinking he comes Spikeeeeeee!



Author's Response: Glad to hear you're catching up on your reading. :) Thanks so much for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: Cryns Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 09:53 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

It can be killed it can bleed! LOL I loved that line. Still in pre-soul Angelus time its kinda funny to see Spike even being so new top Angel in the evil a little in this scene with the whole town gunning for him and he just does not even care I can't wait to see how they get outta this
More please

Author's Response: Yeah, that line came to me and I thought, "how very Victorian." I'm glad you liked it as well. :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: y0un3v3rkn3wm3 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 09:49 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

Man he is taunting people know with his victims and working on his snark and giving the finger to Angel and society
I LOVE IT!!!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you do. Thank you for taking the time to let me know. :)

Reviewer: luridmuse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 09:42 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

Great new page! Spikes going all fists and fangs and even Dru tried to comfort him a little and he doesn't give a hang what Angelus does or says.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: CoH Queen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 09:28 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

Spike heeeheeheehee* I love the mob coming for him great cliff hanger please more soon

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: Record Breakers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 09:27 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

I liked he put on clothes that defy Angelus it says alot about his future clothing as well. Loved seeing him not taking anyones crap!

Author's Response: Yeah, Angelus pushed him a bit too far, and now he's pushing back. I'm glad you like that. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: nichbuket Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 05:20 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

As gruesome as the story is supposed to sound, I find parts of it down right hilarious.

Author's Response: Parts of it were supposed to be hilarious, so that's okay. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: SilentOne2k Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 03:15 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

Spike did said Dru was his salvation and he got into scrapes because he was young in one episode of Buffy, and I think your doing a great job of him rebeling his old life and society and fighting anyone he comes across.
Excellent as always

Author's Response: Thank you so much; I'm glad you liked it. :) The episode you mentioned (Fool for Love) really has been one of my biggest inspirations for the story. In my opinion it's one of the best in a great series.

Reviewer: Switchblade Kross Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 03:12 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

You can't keep a bad boy down lol. Love where this is going more soon please!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Alex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 - 10:49 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

I love the making of a Spike!!! but can't help wondering how he will react when he finally meet Buffy.... probably won't believe his own eyes...poor darling, can't have it easy for once....

Author's Response: Nope, poor Spike has a tough row to hoe. Fortunately, he's a tough boy and can overcome anything thrown at him. I'm glad you like the story, and I want to thank you very much for taking the time to tell me so. :)

Reviewer: Dee81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2007 - 06:42 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

“Spike,” she echoed softly. It sounded good to his ears, although she pronounced it “Spoik.”

I cringe each time I hear Drusilla call him Spoik, but I'm really glad you added this in because it definitely stays true to her character. I love little details such as those :)

I also love the transition as to how Spike is understanding Drusilla now...I always did enjoy the two of them together so reading what's going on in his head is a nice little bonus.

And tee hee to Spike versus Angelus. I remember Angelus in one of the flashbacks yelling at the newly named Spike about his reckless behavior, so it's fun to read the backstory you created for it.

Waiting patiently (sort of!) for the next chapter :) Wonderful work!

Author's Response: I think I may have chased away some readers with the Spike/Dru interaction (there has been a noticeable decline in reviews, at any rate). But I think that his growing affection for her is only natural. What he feels isn't passionate love, but it is affection and friendship. Dru appeals to the side of him that wants to nurture ... and to the side of him that wants to be nutured. At least, that's how I always perceived it to be on the show, and that's the way I'm writing it. It's just that, in my version, as opposed to Joss' ... Spike is in love with another woman. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks so much for taking the time to review it. :)

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2007 - 01:05 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

Rousing good time! This is EXACTLY how I picture my Spike! Your chapter definitely put a huge smile on my face. Right on, man! The man, the myth, the legend...and you know just how to write it.



Author's Response: I'm so glad you saw it that way. I had a huge grin on my face while I was writing it. Although brutal, the chapter, to me, was empowering. Spike may be evil, but at least he is now his own man; he isn't allowing Angelus to bully him any longer. And each step on this path is taking him closer to Buffy. Thanks for the lovely review! :)

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2007 - 08:48 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

It's as if Angelus's 'lesson' has set Spike adrift in a sea of bloody recklessness: he's become an almost swirling dervish of murder and mayhem and brutal fun. This, of course, incenses his grandsire as the Aurelius quartet are unable to remain amongst their potential victims as Spike's antics push the existence of their kind and, moreover, their close proximity into a very vengeful public interest. A joy and a spur for Spike; an unnecessary spotlight and unwelcome vulnerability for Angelus. They flee. Yes, the fierce, immortal demons of the night have to escape London, and settle in Yorkshire. Only, Spike's first action there is to obliterate the clientele of the local pub - and those who escape raise the alarm. Hence, another angry mob.

Spike is now pushing everything to the limit. With hysterical laughter to boot. Like a hyper child, beyond all reason.

William has been tethered; Spike is now unleashed.

Great chapter.


Author's Response: Beautifully put, Sue. Would you like to become my summary writer, because you have a knack for it. :) Really, it's so nice to hear that you enjoyed the chapter and, more importantly, that you got what I was trying to convey. I love knowing that the points I'm hoping to make with my writing have come across to my readers. Thank you for taking the time to let me know. :)

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2007 - 03:37 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

I really love that last line for some reason.

Hmm, anyway to the actual review --> I'm not sure just how many times I can say I love this fic, but there I go again so...yeah. Writing is as usual superb and so so so superior to 99% of fics that I've read, and even then its on par with the other 1% of writing that I find amazing. Gah, it's just too good. I really hope to see more soon!

Author's Response: Wow, squawks, flattery will get you *everywhere*. :P Seriously, though, your compliments have really made my day. Thanks for reading, and for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: Krystal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2007 - 02:16 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!! As always, loved it!! More ASAP please!!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for the review. :) I'll update just as soon as possible -- hopefully by Friday, if the Muse is kind. So, just keep checking back.

Reviewer: Charley Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2007 - 11:35 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

I think I've fallen in love with this Spike.

Author's Response: That's a compliment in and of itself. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2007 - 07:58 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

really enjoyable. Esp. the blacksmith trying to avenge his daughter.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2007 - 07:53 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

LOL.. I'm sure this wasn't meant to be funny but anytime Spke can annoy Angel in any way it makes me smile :)

Author's Response: Nah, it was meant to be funny in bits. lol. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for taking the time to tell me so! :)

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