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Date: 05/12/2007 - 03:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine

I'm glad William kept the ring and the book (and doesn't intend to share (give) the ring with Drusilla.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. :)

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Date: 05/12/2007 - 01:11 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

And I fear that is were the Spike/Dru part will take place. Yeah... unavoidable. ~ I'm glad that William still remembers. His past life and Buffy. Yet that will it make harder for him to accept what he is now. I wonder if he still has the ring.

Author's Response: Yes. Although the dynamic of their relationship has changed from the canon of the show, Dru and Spike will be together. I hope it's not too hard for you to read. I know some readers are getting a bit squicked out by it. :P Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: 05/12/2007 - 12:59 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

Uh-huh... William did go overboard with the thought of Buffy gone. If the other had only knew that Buffy was his fiance *sigh*. And now we see Drusilla. I guess we all know what is about to happen. William will think that Buffy is dead. What will Spike think? *one more chapter for now*

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Date: 05/12/2007 - 12:48 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

Awe, cute (William selecting ring after ring but not one is good enough *g*).
Oh noooo now it happened when nobody did think it would. They (Willow probably) brought her back. I wonder if William, Anne and the others will keep their memories of Buffy. And good there are more chapters. (So no saving of William now to become a vampire, huh?

Author's Response: Unfortunately, not. :( Thanks for reading. :)

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Date: 05/12/2007 - 08:54 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Oh she explained and said yes :) That's what William wanted. And he is making sure that she has no other chance then marry her :) Loved it... I wonder if it will ever be a problem for William that Buffy isn't a virgin like he things? Guess not, because he will think he is the reason. ~ The poem? That was scary... (if you know the background of Buffy here). I wonder if Buffy will vanish before William becomes Spike (that being part of the reason).. ~ Till later.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you. :)

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Date: 05/12/2007 - 08:31 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Oh that's it: Buffy said no when William wanted to marry her. And he doesn't know her reasons, maybe he would have understand and then tried to changer her mind *sigh*
I wonder if she can make it right like she thinks... not as easy as washing the glasses.

Author's Response: She does a fair job making it up to him, I think. A litte orthodox, maybe... Thanks for reading!

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Date: 05/12/2007 - 08:22 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Buffy overheard Anne and William? Ah well you know the saying. Good compromise to improve her behavior. A small prize.... Oh Buffy slipped, she told him of cars. ~ Oh I wonder what Buffy did do know.

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Date: 05/12/2007 - 08:02 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Anne is very much Victorian. What she thinks is old-fashioned but not for her, for her it is the right behavior. If William only knew what Buffy was really hunting and what she wants to prevent.. It's hard for William to find a balance between the way he thinks because he was raised in Victorian times and his wish to let Buffy be herself.

Author's Response: You're certainly right about that. William loves Buffy for who she is, but he has a hard time reconciling that with his training of what a woman should be. Thanks for reading. :)

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Date: 05/11/2007 - 06:25 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Oh yeah for sure the man that talked to William. Seems they did more than talking considering the state of his face. But Buffy is used to playing nursemaid :) I wouldn't say they are better now after talking but at last better then the day William went away.
Till next time :)q

Author's Response: No, they needed a lot more than a few words to fix what was wrong between them. But at least in this chapter, they set their feet to the right track,

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Date: 05/11/2007 - 06:04 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

William is there now but who was talking to him now? ~ So William made his way home. I'm glad Buffy was able to talk to him. Ah that's his secret. Didn't expect that. But something is still off. The man that talked to William at be begin of the chapter maybe.

Author's Response: I'm glad you didn't expect it. That was one of my little secrets, all along, and I was hoping no one would guess. :P Thanks for the review.

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Date: 05/11/2007 - 05:37 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

Oh my.. Buffy hasn't patrolled or trained too long. Angelus is better then her. William noticed in his dream? So what about Buffy's dream of his turning? Only a dream....
Oh bad... the girls are there too. She can't take three vampires (this vampires) alone. She was lucky, daylight was fighting with her. I wonder how things regarding four vampires have changed now from the future (past) Buffy knew.

Author's Response: Yeah, Buffy had a hard enough time with Angelus in season two, when she was in relatively good fighting form. Without the daylight on her side, I doubt she could have escaped him here.

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Date: 05/11/2007 - 05:27 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

I wonder what William thought about, what he has to confess. Oh things don't go well for Buffy when she had to stay behind. She never saw before how different she and William are, their background. And now she is going slaying again? Does she intend to kill Dru to avoiding William's turning? *reads on*

Author's Response: No, Buffy, unfortunately, was judging him by modern standards. Victorians, of course, handled sex much differently. ;) Thanks for reading!

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Date: 05/11/2007 - 05:15 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

A lot changed for William but Buffy didn't notice because he didn't tell. Closed doors or loosing money. ~ Things changed? Oh this changed. Buffy underestimated William, he is still Victorian. Oh my I wonder what that will mean. For once that he went away immediately.

Author's Response: Poor William. He tries to protect her from unpleasantness, but I'm afraid this might come back to haunt him in the future. Thanks for reading. :)

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Date: 05/11/2007 - 04:54 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Livvy acted oddly? Oh William ordered to be quiet. I wonder if that will be bad for Buffy's position in the house. ~ And he told her he loved her but Buffy wasn't able to say something similar back.. must have been a disappointment of sorts for William. He is indeed breaking several rules for her. The 'Higher Society' won't accept this behavior. Won't that make William's life there harder? Though I hope not. ~ Oh Archer.. the first to disturb the happy bubble. He had it coming even if it will things worse for William. Oh! Buffy said it back; I wonder if William did hear it.

Author's Response: Yeah, he's getting himself into a whole mess of trouble, flaunting her around society when they so obviously consider her beneath them. I think he's just reached the point where he doesn't care about anything except her. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

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Date: 05/11/2007 - 04:21 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

I hope William will talk to Buffy again and tell her what he told Anne. Because otherwise their stories will be different :) Yeah, Buffy was indeed the talk of the evening. Anne didn't say a word yet if they like the thought of William courting Buffy. The rose was very romantic.q

Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so. Thank you. :)

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Date: 05/09/2007 - 09:49 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Again...another chapter of debauchery and coming into one's own self for Spike. Such a bleak time that causes him to reinvent himself. Masterful writing. So fun to read!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Deb. I'm glad you think so highly of the story. :)

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Date: 05/09/2007 - 05:35 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

(But I can be wrong about the night, just that is was one at the Underwoods). Mmmm Buffy seems to think that it was 'the' night. Then she changed indeed things, a lot. Though I'm curious I have to continue another time. Loved the conversation that resulted from Buffy following William.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for reviewing. :)

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Date: 05/09/2007 - 05:23 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

Oh yeah.... Buffy found out the hard way why she was invited. Not quite pleasant indeed. Archer had it coming; he underestimated Buffy. Bah.. what a mess. And shouldn't that the evening were William runs into Drusilla...

Author's Response: Could be the evening ... I'm not saying one way or another. :P Thanks for the review. :)

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Date: 05/09/2007 - 04:54 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

I have the feeling Buffy did a bad thing for herself, to convince William to accompany her to the party.. even if it was a clever way now to do it. She felt good before they attended the party? I hope it stays this way...
Ah dancecards! I forgot they were used back then.

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Date: 05/09/2007 - 04:33 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Mmmh with the right topic William did indeed open up to Buffy. Till the Underwood visited.. I don't think Buffy remembers Cecily for what she did to William. But when I think of Cecily's remark I'm sure they know that Buffy is 'only' the nurse. And the got an invitation? I fear she is up t something and that something isn't good.

Author's Response: I always got the feeling from FFL that Spike wasn't completely honest with Buffy when telling her about his past. His "always been bad" comment was followed by the clip of William, but I don't think he actually corrected himself by telling her he hadn't always been bad. And he also said "I had to get myself a gang" when, in the following scene, it was very obvious that the gang was Angelus' and he was brought into it, rather than forming it himself. So, I think as the audience we were privvy to some details Buffy was not. Or, at least, that's how I'm writing it. :P I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for taking the time to review it. :D

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Date: 05/09/2007 - 04:13 pm Title: Chapter Ten

Buffy learned to play whist? I wonder if - when she is back - will still have fun to play it. She said it, it's the year William becomes Spike. If Buffy didn't change the past and missed it up. *hopes not* She sounds very bossy when complaining about his lateness to William *g*.
Ah sneaky, not to tell Buffy what the words in the other languages meant. But she found out anyway *gg*. Ah and Buffy talked about the bracelet.

Author's Response: Buffy always struck me as a bossy person, and I think she senses that William is an easy person to manipulate (I don't want to use so strong a word as "bully" lol). I also wanted to follow her habit of masking her real feelings -- in this case concern -- with an emotion she is more comfortable with -- like anger. Plus, I just thought it was a funny scene. :P I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for reviewing. :D

Reviewer: Insomniac Spike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2007 - 11:53 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

There is a real intensity to this story and not just from the romantic begining it really has a whopper of a plot and is so well told.
I'm new to reading this authors work but for a first time reader this is a phenomenal undertaking and does not disappoint.
I hope to catch more of this soon it s by far the best story going



Author's Response: What a nice thing to say about my writing. Thank you so much. :)

Reviewer: Park it Peter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2007 - 09:42 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

I really like this its a intense romance as well as a action packed emotional story really great reading is to be found here

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Thank you for reviewing. :)

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Date: 05/08/2007 - 05:35 pm Title: Chapter Nine

That's totally new to Buffy, a Victorian Christmas with real Christmas candles. And she discovered that William has a crush on her. Uh-huh.. William picked the bracelet? Buffy's will to throw it back in his face didn't stay long... not ready to acknowledge that she maybe has a little crush on William too, huh?
~ Till next time :)

Author's Response: You know Buffy ... regardless of her physical position on the globe, she always lives in denial. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks so much for reviewing. :)

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Date: 05/08/2007 - 04:53 pm Title: Chapter Eight

Now the roles are reversed.. Buffy is feeling bad because they went to see the play and William is glad they did. Oh.. yeah telling that William has looked deader before is right but didn't fit (=nobody did understand).

Author's Response: lol. Yeah, Buffy put her foot in her mouth with that comment, didn't she? I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for reviewing! :D

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