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Reviewer: Dee81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2007 - 05:31 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

I'm -so- happy to read an update from you. I've missed this story, and as always, your chapter did not disappoint.

Like others who have reviewed, I really enjoyed how you tied the coal bin story in here. I always liked that scene where he was telling Dawn the story and Buffy interupts.

Each time I read your story, I feel like I'm reading a historical epic, I want you to know that I really love how you're showing us Spike's history. You're doing a fantastic job with it, and it's giving the story as a whole so much more depth. Especially once Buffy and Spike meet again.

Wonderful chapter and brilliant writing. I can't wait to read more :)

PS...I friended you on LJ. I hope you don''t mind!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2007 - 10:28 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

1881.. then we have some way to go till the present.
It was very risky with the approaching dawn to wait to be invited in. And all in vain for the woman, Dru and Spike killed them (their sons) anyway.
Oh I think I remember Spike telling Dawn about a girl sitting in coals. Her eyes and her hair color saved her I guess.
But it almost seems as if Angelus had to save Spike; the fight with the slayer didn't went so well. Maybe too because she wasn't what he expected.
I thought when Angelus came he would take Dru with him. Didn't expect her to stay with Spike.
Till next part! It was good to see the update :)

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2007 - 09:31 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

Oh God I love it. The description, the back story and the way you incorporated the girl in the coal scuttle - fab. He really wasn't lying to Dawn (not in your world anyway). What Angelus saving Spike's life, he'll rue that day. I get so excited when I see any update - more please.

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2007 - 07:23 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

awesome sotry so far i'm loving it:) i really hope you update again soon

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 06:46 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

Always nice to see a chapter of this story. I enjoy it very much. Did not know I would like to see Spike's adventers with Drucilla so much but you are doing a good job with it.

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 02:46 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

I currently have a fever so can't really say anything intelligent or constructive, but I just wanted to say how happy I was to see an update!!!! I really enjoy your writing and I really really love this story!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Deb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 12:53 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

Another fantastic chapter!

Reviewer: Jessie88 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 08:51 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

I cannot even begin to tell you how glad I am to see this up here. I was so afraid that you weren't going to finish it!

I love this fic, and as anxious as I am for Spike and Buffy to meet, I'm loving the backhistory.

I've been thinking alot about this story, and I've been curious as to whether or not you're just altering canon as seen on the show(Spike being turned because of Cecily), or if Buffy actually changed things when she went back in time, and how that would affect their new meeting.

As it is, I imagine(because it's fun to put forward conjectures) that when Spike *does* meet Buffy, he'll want to kill her even more because how *dare* she resemble his Elizabeth. I imagine that he fights her so hard, because the only other option is to take her in his arms and cry his eyes out. :)

I just want you to know that your story has defiintely inspired the creative side of my brain. haha

Assuming that this follows the same timeline, I can imagine that things remain the same between Buffy and Spike as they did in the show, and then when Willow's spell sends Buffy flying, a comment is made that she could have been sent to any place or any time, making the wheels of Spike's head spin. OR, he never even considers the possibility, and when Buffy comes back, she launches herself into his arms telling him that she had TOLD him not to go out after dark!

lol.

Okay, so you've been VERY inspirational. Of course, above all, I picture you coming up with something that will positively blow me away and be better than anything I could imagine. :)

great job, and please update again soon!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 08:32 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

This was another richly detailed, fast paced chapter to this fascinating story. Spike and Drusilla's journey toward this Dutch slayer was vivid and gruesome. Spike's mercurial moods fuelled by his frustration in the language barrier, Dru's complaints, and the slayer's whereabouts were excellent details to the hunt. The brutality of the cottage scene punctuating their arrival at the slayer's door was only muted by having Dru's torture happening off screen.

I love the detail of Spike nonchalantly eating a jar of pears with a jack knife as Dru is torturing the youngest boy. His acceptance that this is their life was chilling. Then you dovetail in that bit of canon and I wonder if that voice whispering in Spike's ear is a conscience or destiny. Wonderful stuff.

The Dutch slayer's anger and fighting style were vividly drawn and the choreography of their last fight painted a spectacular picture of violent intent. Angelus' arrival was a complete surprise, as was Dru remaining at Spike's side.

This was another excellent chapter in this saga. Thank you for the highly entertaining read,

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 05:26 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

I really don't think he is done with Slayers. I am glad you updated more please.

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 03:21 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

SO glad to see an update!!! I hope it won't be this long before the next. :) You know how much I love this fic. Looking forward to more!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 02:58 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

An immense chapter - in that you give us all facets of the Spike of that time. In sobering fashion, we read of his horrific exploits with Drusilla but almost in the same sentence he comes across a little girl - and there. There he is. The Spike/William of much later. Even then, his hesitation, his forewarning the child to Drusilla's dangerous proximity, it cries out that there are vestiges of humanity in William the Bloody, still.
He finds the Slayer - not the eye-catching tasty morsel he had hoped for and then the bitterest of ironies: Angelus saves him from the Dutch Slayer's stake and claims her death for himself. Then, he knocks Spike unconscious, stakes him for the sun to catch him, undoes Spike's trousers ...... and, well, the inference is more of the same of Angelus's party-piece. Still, this time, although Drusilla 'plays' with her Sire, she still opts to save and stay with Spike. At the moment they are very much a couple and reliant upon each other for comfort, companionship and support. But it is that tiny part of William still clinging on to Spike's dark heart, that makes your account of his formative vampire years so credible and compelling. I loved this chapter.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 02:28 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

Always so nice to see this story updated. And think it is quite a good thing for our Spike to take a bit of time and endure the easy fight. Though it is a bit of a twist for Angelus to not so much be the hero, but now he himself has killed a slayer, and done so before the notable slayer of slayers... Something a bit unexpected. Still loving all the interactions and the whisper of the ghost of his Elizabeth saving that little girl. Marvelous. Please, udpate soon!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 01:59 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

I don't like Angelus!!! Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: Isa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 01:13 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

So Glad You Updated This, Thank You ☺

Great Chapter.....I Can't Wait To See What Will Happen When He Finally Meets Up Again With Buffy

Hope You'll Be Updating Again, Soon, Please

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 11:12 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

Thank goodness you updated. I started to worry. But you haven't disappointed, although I was sad that Angelus had to save Spike. What can ya do though? Love how he just started to walk away after the whole thing. That's our Spike. And it looks like he's also made a smart decision...for the time being.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 10:35 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

im glad that angelus saved spike, becuz duh i dont want him to die and that hes done with slayers for a while. also im SOOO glad that he didnt kill that little girl, that would have been awful. i LOVE this story so much and am so happy that u updated. im glad that things are progressing and that hes learning, but i cant help but really want him and buffy to meet up again. i know that hesd got a long way to go before that happens, but i cant wait none the less. i really hope that things keep going ok for spike and that everything works out in the end, PLEASE update as soon as u can, cant wait to read more. thanx

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 09:39 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

Great chapter! I can't wait to read more and I am antsy for the story to get to the part where he finds Buffy again. Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 09:28 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

Great chapter! I can't wait to read more and I am antsy for the story to get to the part where he finds Buffy again. Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 09:14 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

A wonderful thing to see when visiting this site is a new chapter of this great fic! I like how you incorporated the story of the girl in the coal bin.

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 09:11 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

Oh thank goodness you are back!
Ah, the girl in the coal-bin.
You write very good fight scenes.

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 08:23 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

I thought you were never going to update again! So glad that you did. I missed this so much!

I surely enjoyed this chapter. You really are sooo good. Even though it is not Spuffy you manage to catch my attention to every word you wrote. I wish every day you have an update. I would never get bored of reading them!

Reviewer: MyBlondieBear Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 08:02 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

Love it! I just want to see Buffy and Spike reunite. But I'm not the author so I'll just wait. Anyways, I'm loving it (as I stated before). So update soon!

Reviewer: Krystal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2007 - 09:22 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Six

Hey,

Where's the rest?! Lol. What's with the long break between updates suddenly? Inquiring minds NEED & WANT to know what happens next ya know?!! Update ASAP please! Great job so far, don't want it to end.

Reviewer: BensLilBug Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2007 - 02:20 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Six

Ohhhhh!! Please please please hurry up and write the next chapter! This is such a great story, and a really great idea! I haven't seen the "Buffy visits Spike's past" idea done so well. You really have the technique of weaving everything together mastered! Brava!!!

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