[Report This]Date: 12/23/2006 - 04:39 pm Title: Chapter Two
great chapter
[Report This]Date: 12/23/2006 - 03:53 pm Title: Chapter Two
I'm getting really exciting. I can imagine the music (if there was music) for this, right now it would be the slow, tense build up... and ok, I'm weird... but I'm just excited for this story. Good chapter! =)
[Report This]Date: 12/23/2006 - 09:08 am Title: Chapter Two
Oh cant wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 12/22/2006 - 11:17 pm Title: Chapter Two
I was excited to find another story from you. It looks very promising so far. And the prophecy is perfect, so beautiful too. Looking forward to more of it.
[Report This]Date: 12/22/2006 - 11:02 pm Title: Chapter Two
good update
[Report This]Date: 12/22/2006 - 06:10 pm Title: Chapter One
good update
[Report This]Date: 12/21/2006 - 09:26 pm Title: Chapter One
Well, this is freakin' promising! :-) What a great start, can'r wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 12/21/2006 - 09:26 pm Title: Chapter One
Sounds great so far, looking forward to see where you go with this. =)
[Report This]Date: 12/21/2006 - 07:42 pm Title: Chapter One
Great story, I just finished watching Becomming Part 2 so this is a great alternative after story.
[Report This]Date: 12/21/2006 - 07:27 pm Title: Chapter One
Good so far, Please update soon!
[Report This]Date: 12/21/2006 - 07:13 pm Title: Chapter One
Interesting start!
[Report This]Date: 12/21/2006 - 07:11 pm Title: Chapter One
this sounds good, more please.