[Report This]Date: 02/02/2007 - 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Angel
Oh my, Angel is indeed very pissed off.
But Spike is stronger now.
Loved a bit of Angel bashing here; and him at last accepting the claim, welcoming Buffy in the family. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much. (I used your Kennedy's jealousy idea in the upcoming chapter. I appreciate your comments.) :)
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2007 - 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Angel
good update
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2007 - 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Angel
Not a big fan of Angel, but I liked him in this chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! That's a big compliment. I appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2007 - 10:51 am Title: Chapter 6 - Angel
Angel was actually cursed in 1898, and Whistler was the one that first enticed him with 15-year-old Buffy. Doyle came much later.
Author's Response: Oops, I'll fix that right now - don't know how that slipped past me. Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 01/25/2007 - 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Nice Kitty
How did Spike say once? It's always about blood. Seems to be true here too. Loved the reaction it caused, them both able to see the past of the other, connecting them even more. And making it easier to understand the other. ~ Loved the update :) So Angel knows now. I'm sure too he won't take much time to arrive in Sunnydale.
Author's Response: Thank you! I love that quote, "It's always about blood. Yes, Angel arriving is in beta right now. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/23/2007 - 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Nice Kitty
more please
Author's Response: Thank you! Angel is in beta now. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/19/2007 - 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 4 - The Potentials, et al
I wonder if Kennedy was jealous (of Buffy's power). Even if she wouldn't tell.
Good that Dawn told Xander what she thought of his behaviour.
A lot of people don't like.. and they'll never learn, huh? So Xander plans involing Angel now.. stupid of him.
Author's Response: Good insight into her! Yes, I'm sure she was. Poor Xander, he simply must stir up trouble. Thanks for your comment!
[Report This]Date: 01/19/2007 - 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 3 - The Scoobies
Good to see at last Willow supporting Buffy. Xander *sigh*
What a disappointment for Anya too.
Good that Xander did give up when he saw he couldn't change Buffy's mind.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I decided it was high time for Willow to support Buffy. Xander, I just couldn't make do it gracefully. ::sigh:: and I loved his character during the first season...
[Report This]Date: 01/17/2007 - 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 4 - The Potentials, et al
can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Chapter 5 is coming tonight or tomorrow. I appreciate your comments. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/17/2007 - 11:57 am Title: Chapter 4 - The Potentials, et al
Good chapter, more please.... Is Xander really stupid enough to call Angel???
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, he actually is. heh. :) More coming tonight or tomorrow.
[Report This]Date: 01/15/2007 - 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 3 - The Scoobies
good story so far
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Ch 4 is upcoming in a couple of days.
[Report This]Date: 01/15/2007 - 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 3 - The Scoobies
can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you are enjoying it. Ch 4 is coming in a day or two.
[Report This]Date: 01/08/2007 - 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Dawn
this is so sweet and tender , please continue , and if possible have Xander speak as little as possible , maybe a scene where buffy or Dawn stick up for spike against him would be most welcome.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've written 7 chapters now, revised chapters 1 and 2 (added Dawn and Spike's reunion to chap 2), and have them and Chap 3 with my beta. Hopefully she'll have them back to me by the end of the week so I can post them. Heh, poor Xander. He does too much talking. Buffy sticks up for Spike, I'll have to see if I can get Dawn in there. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've written 7 chapters now, revised chapters 1 and 2 (added Dawn and Spike's reunion to chap 2), and have them and Chap 3 with my beta. Hopefully she'll have them back to me by the end of the week so I can post them. Heh, poor Xander. He does too much talking. Buffy sticks up for Spike, I'll have to see if I can get Dawn in there. :)
[Report This]Date: 11/16/2006 - 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Giles
Love both stories! I really liked Dawn's reaction and the bit of drama from Giles'! Hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Updates are in the works.
[Report This]Date: 11/13/2006 - 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Dawn
Wonderful - I love Dawn's reaction
Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate your comment.
[Report This]Date: 11/13/2006 - 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Dawn
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on ch 3 now.
[Report This]Date: 11/13/2006 - 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Dawn
Totally freakin' awesome!!! You rock!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! ::hug::
[Report This]Date: 11/13/2006 - 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Dawn
First I thought Dawn would love to see them together but I forgot the time line this story is in. Dawn was mad at Spike because what she heard from Xander.
Good that Buffy talked to Dawn and explained it, now Buffy has won her :)
No doubt about it. It wasn't bad for their sisterly relationship either, Buffy spilling the beans now.
Author's Response: Thank you. I never understood why Buffy didn't clear that up in the show, at least with Dawn. With the rest of them, though it would have been the right thing to do, I doubt she would have done it.
[Report This]Date: 11/13/2006 - 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Dawn
more please
Author's Response: Thanks. Heh, I'm working on ch 3 today.
[Report This]Date: 11/13/2006 - 09:22 am Title: Chapter 2 - Dawn
Loved it. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm working on chap 3 as we speak. :)
[Report This]Date: 11/13/2006 - 08:02 am Title: Chapter 2 - Dawn
cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Author's Response: I really appreciate your comments. You've made my day!
[Report This]Date: 11/11/2006 - 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Giles
Great chapter! I'm already hooked!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Ch 2 is up. :)
[Report This]Date: 11/11/2006 - 06:54 am Title: Chapter 1 - Giles
Saw the sequel yesterday in LJ, but because it's here too I'm reading it here. And it's a longer one this time :))
Xander and Willow found out too (that Spike can go into the sun) but Buffy didn't tell why yet. Will Giles be the first to know then? Seems so because she called him to come by.
Uh-huh.. Giles wasn't pleased. I feared they would never win him over, but they, no, Buffy did!
Looking forward to more :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Heh, yeah this one is longer. I'm working on fleshing my writing out, "To Wed..." was pretty bare bones, even the revamp. Someday I'm going to try to rewrite it again. Maybe someday I'll be satisfied with it. ;P
- Yup, Giles is the 1st to know about Spike, Dawn next. Xander isn't too happy about waiting.
Chap 2 is up. :-)
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2006 - 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Giles
cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you! Ch 2 is up
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2006 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Giles
cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Author's Response: Thanks again. =D
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