

Date: 10/17/2006 - 02:05 am Title: Chapter Nine
Lovely updates! I like reading several chapters like this in a row, because you always leave me wanting more--in part, because you know that is the right thing to do to keep your fans clammoring loudly for updates from you, and in part, because I'm greedy when it comes to fanfic I like! It would be cool to see what, exactly is the nature of Buffy's incredibly confusing feelings for William.

Date: 10/16/2006 - 11:22 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Good chapter. :)

Date: 10/16/2006 - 09:26 pm Title: Chapter Nine
I think that beast will be coming out later that night! Can't wait.
Loved this chapter.

Date: 10/16/2006 - 09:24 pm Title: Chapter Nine
This really isn't going to turn out well. Great chapter!

Date: 10/16/2006 - 08:50 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Oh no poor William

Date: 10/16/2006 - 08:25 pm Title: Chapter Nine
evil!!!!! will is gonna be soooooo upset, hurt, pissed, ANGRY when he finds out that buffy has a date!!! he he he!!! i so cannot wait for you to post again. this is gonna be soooo good. loved it.

Date: 10/16/2006 - 08:24 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Uh oh...wonder what's going to happen next! Update soon please!

Date: 10/16/2006 - 08:20 pm Title: Chapter Nine
uh oh trouble's coming around the corner

Date: 10/16/2006 - 05:00 pm Title: Chapter Eight
I'm not saying that things have gone better, but maybe a little, they did. Buffy still needs time and when she isn't running again, William will hopefully be able to work thinks out :) Cute, theses too, especially sleepy Buffy. (Good to see too that deep down she trusts William.) and the confession? Awwwwweeeeeee (Even if she won't remember the next day it will give William hope.)

Date: 10/16/2006 - 03:37 pm Title: Chapter Eight
Can't wait to see what happens next! Great chapter!

Date: 10/16/2006 - 08:12 am Title: Chapter Eight
Well that was a tender moment. I love their fighting.

Date: 10/16/2006 - 04:47 am Title: Chapter Eight
Such a lovely chapter. I hope that Buffy will soon understand that it would be better if they honeslty talk.
Because there was nothing wrong in the way they had steamy and very hot sex. ;-) Except the fact that it was in a public place , of course. :)
This brother /sister belief has to stop, I think Buffy is able to figure that they're not related in the slightest.
The end of the chapter is nice , and very sweet.

Date: 10/16/2006 - 04:14 am Title: Chapter Eight
*raises eyebrow at the ending*
I love you?
I love you too?
*smirks* If I were a friend standing by and watching all this I'll never let them live it down. :D Great chapter, Brat!

Date: 10/16/2006 - 04:12 am Title: Chapter Eight
ahhhhh, so sweet!

Date: 10/16/2006 - 02:26 am Title: Chapter Eight
I wonder how he will react to that, I hope you update soon.

Date: 10/16/2006 - 12:19 am Title: Chapter Eight
loved it. at least buffy matured up enough in this chapter to come out of her room. maybe in the next update she'll be willing to talk about how "wrong" their situation was. more please. great job.

Date: 10/15/2006 - 11:03 pm Title: Chapter Eight
Good chapter. :)

Date: 10/15/2006 - 10:38 pm Title: Chapter Eight
loved it. at least buffy matured up enough in this chapter to come out of her room. maybe in the next update she'll be willing to talk about how "wrong" their situation was. more please. great job.

Date: 10/15/2006 - 09:52 pm Title: Chapter Eight
So...when she said I love you...in what way did she mean? The same way as him I hope! Update soon please!

Date: 10/15/2006 - 08:23 pm Title: Chapter Eight
this chapter was evil! you cant just leave it there! ugh! i bet everythings gonna be blown off as not true by spike heck i would she's half asleep! ugh! not cool! not cool at all! but i really enjoyed this chapter! they're progressing! but i'm frustrated! i need more!

Date: 10/15/2006 - 08:23 pm Title: Chapter Eight
Hmmm what way did Buffy mean " I love you too"
Great chapter.!

Date: 10/15/2006 - 07:57 pm Title: Chapter Eight
good chapter

Date: 10/15/2006 - 07:57 pm Title: Chapter Eight
I'm glad William was able to get Buffy to talk to him, I enjoyed their banter. Loved the closing of the chapter. Great update!

Date: 10/15/2006 - 05:34 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Glad Spike found Buffy. Great chapter!

Date: 10/15/2006 - 04:00 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Too bad William saw Buffy list, especially the last point when he found her.
Last chapter for today...I wish I knew what will happen next. Looking forward to find out.