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Reviewer: spuff_me Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 10:54 pm Title: Nemesis

Great chap...Wish Lorne hadn't gone back so soon. Been desperately waiting for another peck to happen. Oh well...

Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 10:19 pm Title: Nemesis

and of course i loved the chapter because as always it was awesome..cant wait for more!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 10:17 pm Title: Nemesis

Typical Faith, got her tongue down one guys throat while trying to grab another one's ass (metaphorically speaking). Love this story. They are just too cute together. When is Buffy gonna decide that Riley is a waste - I know Spike already believes he truly engaged to Buffy! Wonderful. More please.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 09:25 pm Title: Nemesis

I still adore this story. Very much looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Opal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 09:12 pm Title: Nemesis

Just read your past few updates...I can tell your writing is getting better...not that it needed any improvement...anyhow I love reading your fic and continuing to look forward to the continued adventure you've crafted for us.

Reviewer: kassie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 08:35 pm Title: Nemesis

glad to c buffy can b as "naughty" as spike...love e lil bit in her u adeed...cant wait 4 e next update! btw, is it gonna b a monthly update?

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 07:59 pm Title: Nemesis

Great chapter!

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 06:39 pm Title: Nemesis

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 06:05 pm Title: Nemesis

What a great chapter ... so cool that they are actually being a little physically demonstrative (since they have obviously held back for so long) I love the chemistry that you are building with them.

Completely cool plot twist with the search for a couple for an advertizement (gee who would I pick?)

Glad you worked out your beta snag. Although I have had nothing but smooth reading from the get go. My only problem is that I get so wrapped up in your chapter that I continue to hit my down arrow and all too quickly the chapter is over.

Love, love, love this story !!!!

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 04:45 pm Title: Into the character

I loved it!

spuf

Reviewer: mikaela Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 09:09 pm Title: Into the character

wow.....I can't believe what jst happened! and they haven't gone inside the hotel yet. Update ASAP please???

Reviewer: kassie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 12:39 am Title: Into the character

its so beautiiful..n ya...oh so very vivid n tear-jerking...cant wait 4 e next one '',

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2006 - 11:55 pm Title: Into the character

I don't know if Spike is brilliant or just totally into pain and suffering. Very clever "plan" if he was trying to get Buffy to realize she doesn't love Riley. Lorne is convinced and so am I that they belong together (well of course I do - I'm into Spuffy!) Sure hope Riley hears about this little deal and blows a gasket! I love it when Buffy tells him off so I hope she gets the opportunity to do the same in this tale. Love it, more please.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2006 - 12:54 am Title: Into the character

I can't believe you did that!! Spike proposed?!? I don't think I'm very coherent right now, you kinda just blindsided me. Damn, but this will be fun. ; ) VERY much looking forward to more. Wondering what they will do next. Ooh! and I can't wait to see what all of their friends are gonna say.

Reviewer: candace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2006 - 12:52 am Title: Into the character

i loved when he "proposed" to her. haha. cant wait to find out what happens next!!!

Reviewer: Angharad Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 11:48 pm Title: Mom's Intuition

I think you have a good story going here. I would just like to offer some constructive critisim. The verb tenses are not very consistent. I think you are aiming for a standard narrator voice, with most of the story told in the past tense. But it seems like every other sentence is in present tense, instead. This is just a grammar issue, but it is distracting me, making it more difficult to follow the action in the story. A beta reader could probably help you smooth things out.

Again, I am enjoying the plot and the characters. I hope you keep working on this.

Reviewer: Steph Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 09:21 pm Title: Into the character

Liked this chapter? I loved it!!! Call me sappy but I actually had a lump in my throat during the proposal scene as it was so tender. But good grief... come on Spike & Buffy.... can't you see what's right before your eyes??? And gee, maybe you should act on it??? I'm hoping Lorne will accidently lock them up in the banquet room overnight and they are forced to admit how they really feel about each other. Or at the very least maybe another "peck." Great chapter and please, keep the updates coming!

Reviewer: spuff_me Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 09:05 pm Title: Into the character

Yay! Another update! I'm loving this fic so much. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Kayla Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 07:47 pm Title: Into the character

Wow! This chapter is so awesome. I love it so much! Can't wait till the next update :-)

Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 07:46 pm Title: Into the character

loved the chapter...totally looking forward to lorne...more please!

Reviewer: Sara M. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 07:00 pm Title: Into the character

So, sweet! Spike giving Buffy his moms ring. You know Lorn is not a fool. I hope he starts to push them together! YAY! Thanks!

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 06:29 pm Title: Into the character

i cannot believe he got ot of the car and proposed!! thats probably how he would have always imagined proposing to her too....that would kill me knowing it wasn't real.

i real like this fic. can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 06:21 pm Title: Into the character

This last chapter was so well done I just had to read it again (which I almost never do) which prompted me to reread the entire story ... I NEVER do that but I just wanted to get my bearings again ... that last chapter is even better the third time. Really well done ... your fans are gonna eat this up.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 06:08 pm Title: Into the character

Absolutely loved this chapter! Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 05:45 pm Title: Into the character

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!
Cool, cool , completely awesome chapter ... love the ring and proposal and all of the chemistry that is going with it. Very creative. My favorite chapter so far. Love this direction that you are going in. Cannot (but will) wait for more !!!!

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