Go, Dawnie!

Go, Dawn!! Smart girl...very smart, calling Joyce. Now, he will have his two most loyal allies back.

At this point, I'd love for Dru to come rescue her boy. She could challenge Buffy, and win, and then he would be free of psycho bitch.

Uh-huh.. look there what Joyce said: What you need is a girl like my Buffy. And there is a story behind it.. Spike was visiting Joyce and Dawn very often and then stopped. ~ I wonder what Buffy will say to Dawn's question now.

Great back-story for Spike and the Slayer's family. I wonder how Dawn is going to fix things, or if her mystical glowy-key power can help Buffy with her primeval anger issues. Keep up the great work!

oh....i....wow...THIS IS TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE!!! dawn will be the perfect person to help spike. i'm not sure how or when though. it doesn't matter. just let me bask in my happiness. lol. buffy's still a bitch in this but hopefully time and a lot of payback from spike will get her on the right track. i hate that she's doing this to him but i know that you wouldn't be makin' us readers suffer if it wasn't for the greater good for the story as a whole. continue with the great work. please post soon. loved it.

Oh my.. Primal!Buffy has taken over again and is questioning Spike. And when she (Primal!Buffy) indeed stays longer every time.. then maybe at one point it will be difficult to bring 'normal' Buffy back. Dawn did it? Brought Buffy back for now (and maybe will be able to help Spike later? Good :)

The way you are writing Buffy when she is "out of control" reminds me of how abusive husbands treat their wives. They isolate them and make them feel like it is their fault that they are pushing them to abuse them. I am sure that you have this all planned out, but I will be glad when they figure out what is causing Buffy's episode's. It is very hard to read all the cruelty being heaped on Spike and also to know how deeply ashamed and afraid Buffy is at the same time.

interesting putting the key in like that. cant' wait for more. soon please

Grr. Buffy should die, be reborn and die again. Repeated several times. I cannot believe her. They are all SOOO selfish. Anywyas, keep updating! I love this story.

i think i despise xander more than buffy. I mean, at least she has a minimal excuse, being "possessed" and all (not that i forgive her... primal buffy could be understood... buffy-buffy who consciously uses her power over him to defend her reputation instead of asking for help to stop hurting him so cruelly... totally not!). Xander is his normal self... he doesn't care about buffy and spike's problems and behave like she had cheated on him. And when his real girlfriend offers to confort him (obviously forgetting her own and spike's pain in his sake) he rejects her and shatters her heart.
I think souless demon are clearly unnecessary...

I'm feeling sorry for Anya, she's such a good person in this story and she's treated like dirt, Spike being the only one who noticed her (and uncapable to be there for her). What is Xander thinking? He's acting like Buffy cheated on him! Has he forgotten about Anya, or her feelings?

I'm thinking in the next chapter Spike will suffer big time again. Buffy is like Xander, totally egocentric and uncaring of the feelings of others, like Spike. Her friends are more important than her mate!

Looking forth to the next chapter, like always.

Poor Spike...why can't Buffy control herself more? It's really odd...what's happening to them. Can't wait to find out what happens next! I hope they find what's wrong before something really really bad happens and can't be fixed! UPDATE SOON!!